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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sha-Ja-Fanatic

Update! Update! Update! Update!

Updating! Updating!Updating! Updating!
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Posted: 11 years ago

CHAPTER 11 : HERE THE WORK STARTS

Paarth woke up. After such a long time he woke up at some place outside his room. Unfortunately from now ownwards he will never wake up in his own room. "I hate that girl!", he cursed Panchi. he got up from the bed and found a note near the lamp.
"Paarth we all have to leave for an urgent task today. The Panchals too have left for their work. So you are alone. Keep good watch. "
And the note ended. "Haah.", he sighed relief. "Finally. After a long time. I am alone. No one to disturb and no one to irritate. A lucky day after a long time.", Paarth was happy now. His day had a great start after a long time. Shall I cook - he thought. Naah! - but his thoughts changed the next second. "Pizza!", he shouted and stepped down his bed. "What next?", he said to himself. Lets prepare a surprise for Panchi - he thought with plans of great mischief in his mind.
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"Bhai! Did you see Panchi? I thought that she came with us!", Subhi asked her brother. No, no, no, no , no , no. She is at home. But who else is? - Govind thought. "Subhi she was sleeping when we left so I left a little note near her bed.", Govind informed. "Ok bahi! But I don't think she'll be happy to know that we left her behind.", Subhi expressed. "Don't you worry dear. There will surely be other things she will have to handle.", he told with a wink. "Like?", Subhi asked. "Like...", Govind winked again. Subhi who was totally confused by now by Govind's wink decided to leave. but she was thinking about someone. "How will he look? With that rusty look in the morning, he will surely look like a - and a blush hit her before she could complete her thought.
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"Left me alone!", Panchi threw that piece of paper in the dustbin after reading it. "A pizza might lighten up my mood.", and she stepped down her bed. "But! Let us take a bath first. Being alone does mean a lot of 'me' time. Maybe it is not that bad.", she said as she checked herself after waking up. "My earring! Where is it?", she exclaimed. "Okay! leave it Panchi. I must concentrate on getting refreshed first. So straight to the bathroom girl!", she said as she started with the task.
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"There we go!", he shouted. "What uncle?', the other asked. "I have found the way to the Chamber to the Dragon Vase, Duryodhan.", told Shakuni. "Aahhh! Finally! Your clever brain made a use!", said Dushshasan. "Stupid! Don't you mock me! Now we will do what we had planned. We have to start for the Chamber now itself so pack all you things in a bag. We don't have time to waste.", Shakuni said and all rush to their rooms to get the work done.
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"How nice it feels to take a long shower without any interference.", Paarth sighed relief as he came out of the shower. Just in a towel to cover the portion below his torso, he was wearing nothing. He searched around for his tee but got nothing. "Lord! Where has everything gone! I guess today I have to roam about shirtless.", Paarth laughed on his own thought. He thought he would him some in the laundry room so he decided to check there. He opened the door to and found a surprise outside. "Aaah! Eww! Eww! Eww ! Don't you know how to receive a girl!", Panchi shouted and turned around to get free of the view. "Well how will I if I never knew there was a girl!", Paarth too turned around and replied. "Well! Well! Neither I knew that you roam about shirtless when you are alone!", Panchi yelled. "Oh yeah! I guess you yourself stole all my tees to get this view.", he accused her. "Obviously! Like I was so excited to see you like this! Now please leave and wear something!", Panchi yelled, almost deafening Paarth. "I'll be more happy that you!", he said as he left.
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"Oh.. my ... God! Really!", Subhi shouted as she talked on the cell phone with Panchi. "Yes! He literally came out of the room SHIRTLESS! I repeat SHIRTLESS! Stupid! Stupid guy! He doesn't even know how to behave. ", Panchi showed her anger clearly with her voice. "Well Panchi I hve to leave now but please! please do tell me all that happened.", Subhi said teasing her friend. "I'll kill you!", But Subhi hanged before Panchi could complete.
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TBC...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG!!!!!Parth and Panchi...🤣They have similar likes too.And shirtless Parth...☺️And now who is in Subhi's dreams???
And the evil trio ids revealed.So we should be ready for some dirty tricks hmmm..Anyways its getting more and more intriguing eith every update.Keep rocking dear⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Quite a Naughty update 😆 😉

Govind winking to Subhi... he has left out Panchi intentionally alone 😆

And Subhi day dreaming bout Paarth or ?? ... well i think whoever the mystery man is she is thinking him Shirtless!!! 😆

Paarth's hopes of being finally alone was very short-lived & shocking to someone dear to him 🤣

And what is Panchi shouting?? Eww... Eww... instead saying WOW 😆

And the entry of the Khalnayak's of this story - Shaku, Dury & Dusy... they too after Dragon Vase. Cant they keep their eyes off from others quest & do someting original 😆

Will be awaiting for ur next update... esp Panchi-Subhi Convo on Shirtless Paarth 🤣

Edited by hpatgiri - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update, darling!!!! Oh My Arya and Panchi!! really that shouldn't have been her reaction!!!! Entry of Maha Khalnayaks!!!! And how to forget my naughty Bhrathasri krishna!!! Very well written!! Update soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mamashri ko bhrata Krishna avashya sambhal lenge! Pp's reactions towards eachother are always hilarious! I loved the update! Thanks for the pm and update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
PP were alone and they wasted the opportunity by screaming at each other?😊! I hope they get together soon 😉
This is getting very interesting...waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
👏 Hello..I was just looking for MB fanfics and got this..its very nicely written and thought...I mean the entire story is so adventurous ...Will like all parts till part 11 later...not commenting separately becoz all are good...but the Pyramid of sorrows is well thought...
And all the following couples :
Vausena-Vrushali ,Bheem-Hidimba and Yudhishthir-Devika are also done nicely...glad you din't link Panchaali and Yudhishthir /Bheem,But one confusion...are Bheem-Hidimba married?? I hope to see some of Bheem -Hidimba,Yudhishthir -Devika in the next one but along with some more adventure:), And I love when all brothers discuss together about things...especially that Vausena-Vrushali date...Please do continue ,will wait for the update :)...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vaikartana

OMG!!!!!Parth and Panchi...🤣They have similar likes too.And shirtless Parth...☺️And now who is in Subhi's dreams???

And the evil trio ids revealed.So we should be ready for some dirty tricks hmmm..Anyways its getting more and more intriguing eith every update.Keep rocking dear⭐️

Thanks dear! 😳
The trio is special entry for future twists.😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hpatgiri

Quite a Naughty update 😆 😉

Govind winking to Subhi... he has left out Panchi intentionally alone 😆

And Subhi day dreaming bout Paarth or ?? ... well i think whoever the mystery man is she is thinking him Shirtless!!! 😆

Paarth's hopes of being finally alone was very short-lived & shocking to someone dear to him 🤣

And what is Panchi shouting?? Eww... Eww... instead saying WOW 😆

And the entry of the Khalnayak's of this story - Shaku, Dury & Dusy... they too after Dragon Vase. Cant they keep their eyes off from others quest & do someting original 😆

Will be awaiting for ur next update... esp Panchi-Subhi Convo on Shirtless Paarth 🤣

@bold - Govind surely is one naughty guy.😆 @underline - maybe Panchi did not feel the heat!😉😆 Thanks for replying dear!😳
Edited by Angela_Grokes - 11 years ago

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