Forever..?? ~ ||KriYaansh Drabble Series Chap 3 ~ pg 11 (19 nov 2014) - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Hey Abhi...The flashback was damn scary...

Kriya falling down from the cliff ropes...

Rey scared when he got that flashback...

N yeah...update whenever possible...

N take care...Abhi...for ur health...

Write soon...

Love Aditi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
awsmm prt
sry lt ho gai
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Hey nice start!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

This was really sad that Kria has fallen from that rope and Rey's state was so painful!!!!!!!!!!! 😭 😭 😭

Do update soon!!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
beautifully penned down👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55



Chapter 3


P.S No proof read. Sorry for errors

His breathes were still heavy he had great difficulty in breathing but he was just staring at ceiling above him. He was not taking any efforts to make his breath even again. His life was gone though not physically but mentally.


Doctors ran in the ward as they heard him scream. Doctors checked his pluses they were falling. Doctor quickly gave a sleeping injection and went outside. Rey slowly drifted into slumber.


"Sir? How's the patient inside?" Asked a boy who was somewhat of Rey's age only.


"The patient has gone though some shock which is not letting him recover and his body and mind is not reacting to any of the medicines which we are giving" Doctor said


"Can I meet him doc?" Asked the boy


"No I have just injected him let him take rest" Doctor said and continues "Mr?"


"Raven Malhotra" the boy says


"So Raven I would like to advise you to contact with his relatives and call them up over here" Doc said


"Sir actually I don't know him that much we were on trek camp and he was there I just happened to come to the place where he was lying and so brought him up to hospital, but sir there was a girl with him and she is missing" Raven told


"Okay! Still I would say either contact to his relatives about him or the girl who you just told about because there is no one to take care of him over here which can be harmful to him" Doctor said


"Sir till the time I don't get any contact with his relatives or that girl I will take care of him" Raven said with assurance doctor left.


Raven sat in the waiting area. It was 3 hours after what Rey wake up and didn't utter a word. Nurse came to Raven and informed him that Rey is in conscious and doctor had allowed the permission to meet him.


Raven slowly entered the room the room was of pale white and Rey was in pale blue colored hospital dress.


"Hey Rey!" Raven said softly seating beside his bed. Rey turned and looked at Raven and stared for few minute with a blank face and turned around and again started to stare the ceiling above him.


Raven was shocked to see such Rey. He remember Rey properly he was always fun loving guy in the whole group he used to flirt with girls and always make everyone laugh. Though he has not talked with him much but he still remembers all the things about him.


And this was something hurtful for him to the guys whose face always had a smile was having a blank and emotionless face.


"Rey? How are you feeling now?" Raven asked. To his reply was nothing but a killing silence.


Raven sigh in disappointment, he looked at the person lying in front of him. He can see something unknown. He was lying like a body without soul.


"Rey where is Kriya?" Raven asked and to his surprise he saw a fresh stream of tear coming out of his eyes. Well he was shocked to because he remember in camp if anyone would take Kriya's name in front of him he would have a sweet smile.


He got up from the chair and sat on the bed where Rey was lying he hold his hand softly yet firmly and again asked Rey where is Kriya to his surprise Rey sat up and hugged him in a jolt that left Raven baffled. Rey was crying bitterly and clinging on Ravens shoulder. Raven was shocked at the sudden burst out of Rey.


"Rey?" He slowly patted his back, "Are you alright?" Raven asked


"Kriya Kriya she fell she fell" Raven heard Rey speaking the words and was tightening his hold on him.

Milne hai mujhse aayi Phir jaane kyun tanhaai
Kis mod pe hai laayi aashiqui
O.. khud se hai ya Khuda se Iss pal meri ladaai
Kis mod pe hai laayi aashiqui

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initially i had thought to give the update after november but my sweet anku wanted it now so i had updated and this one is specially for u only anku and sorry i had wrote the update in just one hour so plzz adjust

guys update of this will be little late as m traveling to surat after that i have my fest in clg and prelims so will be kind of caught in studies but will update it when i will get time

Do review!

love

Abilasha

Edited by -reine- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
resss
i love u
unres...dnt kill me..sorry i forgot..
so raven is the one who brought him here...
guess he is going to play an imp role in this story..
i feel painful for rey...how helpless he is feeling...
plz jaldi kriya ko zinda kr de...
its amazingly painful story...no doubt became my one of fav so soon...
do update
Edited by akankshaArsha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
awesum abhi...
Loved it...
But thoda chotu tha...
Edited by --megs_arsha-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
short update but nice...
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
nice update
rey is I so mucb pain
waise to kria ka naam lete hi smile karta tha
n aaj ro raha he
feeling bad for him
pata nai kese sambhalega apne aapko
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
beautifull chapter Abhi 👏
Seriously great one love it

thanx for pm

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