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pinky

@pinkypanrocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Yaar yeh toh bohuti heart toching hey...I loved it a lot...!!!and u r right... kria and reyansh are meant to be together forever...and hamesha...!!!they always be kriayansh...love them a lot...!!

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

its wow...

simply awsome ishu...

loved it ...

superb concept

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

This was such a Soulful concept 👍🏼...

Sache pyaar ki takat , bohat ache se explain ki...

Kria and Rey toh were meant to be , sadiyon se , everyone knows 😉...

I really liked it how shuru mein unko relationship status kaisa tha & ahista ahista they came close ...

The Flashback , Fear of losing each other , The intensity of their love , everything was described very well 😃...

I really loved it ❤️...

Superb it is 😃...

N thanks for the PM 😊.

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Re-Birth is something which I don't believe in but apart from Dee's concept. This had to be the second I read on the same and it was Beautiful! and fabulous. I loved the way it was penned down. From Kria and Rey being bounded by marriage yet not having a connection to the trip that changed and everything in it. I liked the way you showed the progress in the story esp when they go to that house where Kriya feels someone holding her waist and the mystery behind the room and it unlocked giving them a brighter beginning to continue and nurture their love once again in this life! Those moments where Kria and Rey's past flashes infront of them where they were drenched in blood. It was shit scary when u wrote both seperately. Everything was perfectly written and well done becoz not a part felt left out or a bit extra. It was a perfect piece of work and I LOVED reading it😃