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Supab update

fabulous...

it just touched my heart..
the way you described everything
loved it...

perfect..

omg This was 👏 👏
I just loved this to much
The way u writed its fab 👏

The lines the dailogs the scenes
was to to perfect loved it
Seriously awesome dr thanx alot for the PM 😳 [SIZE=4][/SIZE][COLOR=blue][/COLOR]

OMG...This was sooo...

uhhmmm...I have no words for it...

Really no words...

Its like some works touch ur heart and stay there...

this was definately one of them...

Now wala KriYaanshs Love blooming...

Past wala KriYaanshs Love...WoW...

The care...The Love...The going against families...The staying togethet promise...was protrayed by both the KriYaanshs very well n Ur words made it come to life...

I just donno what to say for this piece of work...

I thot its gonna have an ordinary end like knowing just by a night and all...but this made it more realistic...

The pain of the past wala KriYaansh still lingering in the walls of the house...

The present wala KriYaansh feeling the pain...

Love is eternal...it definately remains after the couple ends tooo...

If U love someone truly then U R gonna reunite in ur next birth...

An incomplete Lovestory will finally get a complete ending and that too together...

They are meant to be KriYaansh in their everybirth...

I specially loved the realization wala part when Rey opens up the door n Kriya knows how many days it took for that painting...

This was a loveley piece of writing...will remain with me forever...U made me emotional...so now bear my emotional comment... :D

Keep writing girl U are ausome at it...

Love Aditi...

amazing update
kriyansh ka luv itna pure ki unhone ek dusre ke re-birth liya...so amazing
pure lovers kbhi alag hote iss story se pta chlta h

thnks 4 pm me

Awwwiiieee...
As i already guessed It.. Dis surly is one of ur BESTEST STORY...
Past wale Kriyaansh N Present wale Kriyaansh ka Perfect Blend.. It like seriously aisa lag raha tha ki main koi movie dekh rahi hu.. Koi thriller movie.. Jaise Ek scene se dusre scene pe shift hona.. Den mystry always remains.. Aagre kya hoga sochna.. N har scene ko phle scene se relate kerna etc etc.. Sachhhii.. Perfect ekdum.. Amazing story.. Outstanding concept .. N d way it came out.. Haiyee.. Superbb..
U know sum bits like jaise woh Rey ka bahar jaana n ander aake dekhna ki Kriya is falling down bt actual mein it was purani kriya n d same with kriya uska purane rey ko dekhna all in blood.. Uff.. Amzing yaar.. N den Past wale KR ka Muder.. Uff.. Dat was deadly.. N yaa.. The last lines.. Haiyee.. Dat just touched me rey...
Super Awsmmm os indeed.. :D
loved It.. Loved It.. Loved It..

unres

Ishuuu!! I swear i lovedd this!
This was your best story till today
The contrast of kriyaansh and their past was shown really well
loved how you showed kriyaansh remembering their last birth and how it had happend to them
how they felt the pain and didn't understand why
but then they discovered why and that was written beautifully!
Loved the last few lines! Kriya and reyaansh were meant to be kriyaansh :')
A biggg hug to you for this story of yours 🤗

res
unres
awesum update...
So emotional at the time when they were dying...
Beautifully written with flashes of their previous birth...
Loved it truly...
Keep writing more...

Beautiful!!!!
Grt story!!!
Kriyansh were killed mercilessly by der own family!
N kriyansh were married to each oder by der own family!
Its really amazing!!!
Grt piece of work!! 👏

Gawwdd this is one of ur best works and s gonna be my fav😳👏