Some things are better unsaid( a SANDHIR ff): CHAPTER- 6 UPDATED - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: pritha072angel

So sorry darloo I know I m hell late sorry *puppy face * *holds my ears*

Supperrrb update
I knew it that it was rd
Sanyus dad is so caring
Sorry but I felt sanyu kinda careless towards her dad but not her fault its situations made her like that
Beach party I think its gonna bang
Yeah I think sanyu needs to control her anger
Good job buddy
UPDATISHHH SOOONISHHH




It's allright!!
Thank u so much!!
I'll make sure Sanyu heeds your advice...😉
I'll update soon!!😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 5

Yay! It's party time!!

The sunset at the beach was just awesome! There was light breeze which was refreshing. The gurgling waves were breaking against the edge of the beach. Oyster shells were scattered on the sandy beach. Small crabs were playing hide and seek on the beach. The sky was glowing red in the setting sun. The sea was glittering like molten gold. Gradually the big ball of fire descended into the glittering sea. It seemed as if the sea was slowly engulfing the sun.

Though a pleasant breeze was blowing, it was quite hot. Kaustu, Vidz and I all three of us were wearing sleeveless blouses and shorts. The boys were also wearing t-shirts and short cargo pants.

We enjoyed a lot while walking on the sandy, pristine beach, along the shore. My friends went into the sea but I stayed on the shore as I was very much prone to the cough and cold, and not to mention the terrible headache that would surely follow.

The cold water came up to my ankle where I stood. I closed my eyes and stood there motionless, my heart full of pleasure hearing the roaring waves and feeling the water tickling my feet...

I didn't know how much time had passed, lost as I was in the complete bliss of the moment. I opened my eyes when I heard my friends calling my name. I knew we had to return to the hotel as they were all hungry from having a water fight, but I was unwilling to go. It was already dark and the beach was much less crowded than it was before. I also wanted to be the part of the crowd however small it bay be but, unfortunately, I'd to go.

We reached the hotel and ordered our supper. We went to room one-oh-one and played cards to pas time. Our supper was served in our room and it was absolutely delicious, especially the sea-fish curry. Besides pizza, I was in love with fish curies!

After supper Jiggy and Parth went to their room. We three girls slept in the over-sized king bed. All in all the first day in Goa was amazing except the argument with Randhir in the afternoon. I hope I won't see him again during my stay here!

We woke up early at 5 o'clock next day, having slept soundly last night, and hurried to the beach to see the sunrise. The scenario was as beautiful as the sunset yesterday but just the opposite. Now, unlike the sunset, the sun seemed to be rising from the depth of the blue sea" absolutely amazing.

And the sea was spectacular! The endless sea stretched up to the horizon and seemed to go beyond it. The blue sky and the sea waters were almost inseparable except for that the water was glittering in the in the bright sunlight, throwing back rainbow shards like a huge diamond.

We'd our breakfast in a road-side stall and then went to dump our money and mobiles in the hotel after a short walk on the beach. We changed into our swimsuits in our hotel rooms as we'd go swimming in the sea. I didn't see Randhir once in the hotel which was absolutely fine by me.

"There's a beach party tonight," the receptionist said as I was handing her the keys of our rooms before heading off to the beach. "Invitations will be sent out later in the day. I'm just informing you before-hand. And arrangements for dinner will be made at the beach itself." She smiled broadly at me and turned to place the keys in the right slot.

"Thank you for informing."I too smiled at her as she turned to face me. "We'll surely be there." With that I walked out of the lobby.

"Guys," I called my friends as I reached the front gate of the hotel where they're waiting for me. "There's a beach party tonight."

"Wow! Beach party!" they exclaimed together, shouting at the top of their voices.

"Ow. Relax." I covered my ears with my hands to save myself from getting deaf.

"What time?" Parth asked.

"I dunno. The invitations will come later in the day." I replied.

"What about dinner?" Jiggy asked.

"Tujhe khane ke ilawa aur kuchh sujhta hai?" I chuckled and Jiggy shook his head, joining in on the laughter. I continued, "The dinner arrangements will be made at the beach."

"Wait, wait." Vidz suddenly said, shooting up her hands, palms towards me, like a traffic police. "Do we have to pay something for the party?"

We laughed like a maniac at her expression and question. We were shaking so hard with laughter that we couldn't even answer her. But Kaustu managed to say a no' to her.

"It's not that funny." Vidz snapped and strode down the beach.

We doubled up in laughter and soon we're all laughing our guts out in the cool, blue sea waters.

We swam for all morning and a little part of the afternoon until we're all ravenous. It was the experience in years" swimming in foamy, blue waters and stretching out in the sandy beach with the sun kissing my whole body" just relaxing.

But the water was too cold for my liking. I was literally shivering even though the sun was shining with all its glory. After sometime, however, I begun to enjoy as my skin became comfortable with the cold temperature of the sea water.

After lunch we were all sitting in the boy's room, having an animated discussion about the forthcoming beach party. Suddenly a sharp knock on the door made our head turn towards it.

"Who's there?" Parth asked.

"Room service," the person" whoever he was" answered from the other side of the door.

"Oh...Come in," Parth said.

A hotel staff came in through the door with a nicely decorated plate in his hand. "This is an invitation card for a beach party tonight. Please grace us with your presence." He handed the plate to Jiggy who was sitting just in front of him.

"Thank you," Jiggy said.

The man bowed respectfully and went out, closing the door behind his back.

"Wow." Vidz commented as Jiggy opened the invitation card. "This card is just awesome."

Really! The card was really something to look at with all the intricate golden patterns on the black glossy surface. The letters were printed in a deep golden color which contrasted beautifully with the rich black color of the card. It said:

INVITATION

Room: One hundred and one

One hundred and two

Dear Sir and Madam,

Hotel Golden Beach invites you all to beach party tonight. Your presence will be a pleasure for us.

Thanking you, Manager of Hotel Golden Beach.

Venue: Beach

Time: 7 o'clock in the evening

Dress code: Beach Wear

Teaser for chapter 6: "Oh my God!" We exclaimed together as we reached the beach...the beach was not looking like a beach anymore" it had turned into a disco!...But he was there and I caught him looking at me whenever I glanced his way...I was so engrossed in my ecstasy that I didn't hear it at first...but it was too late...

A/N: Firstly I'm sooo sorry for making you all wait for sooo long...But I'd been really busy...But I finally updated chapter 5...And you'll have to wait again for I've exams which will start this month and I've to study since I've haven't even touched my books till now...guess you've to wait for the beach party...Expect an update on the last week of next month...And I feel horribly sorry...Till then goodbye...Always keep smiling...With love- Shaina...😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey!Dear
lovely,lovely,lovely,lovely update
love it 2 d core❤️
Best of luck 4 ur exam👍🏼
Update soon
thx 4 pm
Edited by Param_love - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
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unres
lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely
lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely
lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely
its superb awesome fab amazine outstanding part.
you describe everything so nicely and beautifuly
beautiful writing. really awesome part.
precap sound very nice and interesting.
love it. update asap. thanx for pm me.😃
di all the best for your exams.👍🏼



Edited by sudipto-69 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
awesome dear... really loved it... Eagerly waiting for next part... pls update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
The updte was awsme as alwz

Sanyu don't want to see rd bt luking everywhere for him 😉

Vids too much

Beach party gonna b so much fun
Bt hve to wait for it

Don't worry we understands exams r much more imp

Update whenever tym permits will be wtng

All the best for ur exams 👍🏼

Keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Awsum update darloo
The beach scene beautifully described
But small update
Why does sanyu hates rd thos much
No sandhir scenes in this update I m looking forward to this yaar
Beach paryy k liye ek aur update ka wait karna hoga
Koi naaa
UPDATISHHH SOOONISHHH
N YEAH CONCENTRATE ON EXAMS DONT WORRY WE WILL WAIT
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

Okay, I didn't quite understand what that meant!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: sudipto-69

res

unres
lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely
lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely
lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely
its superb awesome fab amazine outstanding part.
you describe everything so nicely and beautifuly
beautiful writing. really awesome part.
precap sound very nice and interesting.
love it. update asap. thanx for pm me.😃
di all the best for your exams.👍🏼




Thank u thank u thank u!!
I can't update it soon, but I'll try...
N tank u for wishing me luck!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: archakan

awesome dear... really loved it... Eagerly waiting for next part... pls update soon...


Thank u di!!😛
N I can't update soon...I've exams...😭
Sorry! U've 2 wait...😔

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