Some things are better unsaid( a SANDHIR ff): CHAPTER- 6 UPDATED - Page 10

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Chapter 6

Help! I'm dying!

"Oh my God!"

We all exclaimed together as we reached the beach at 8 o'clock in the evening. We're one hour late and that too because of Parth. We're searching every nook and corner of both the rooms for last one hour- Parth had forgotten where he'd kept his mobile! We got into a mad search and at last his mobile was found inside his pillow-case!

"Sorry." Parth had smiled sheepishly when I handed him his mobile.

Okay, now back to the party...

The beach was not looking like a beach anymore- it was completely renovated to resemble a disco with loud music and beautiful fairy-lights. The colorful dim lights against the night sky and the cheerful bonfires near the roaring turbulent cold grey sea bore a mysterious atmosphere and the crowd dancing around the bonfires gave the place a wild look. There was everything- dance, music, drinks and food! Some comfy benches were lying empty here and there. Empty because everyone was busy dancing and cheering- enjoying the party.

Soon we're also dancing and eating and drinking like there's no tomorrow. Well, the eating part was mostly done by Jiggy!

Randhir was also there, but I hadn't expected him in such a party. I thought he was too modest for this kind of parties. But he was there alright and I caught him looking at me whenever I glanced his way. And whenever I looked at him he looked away, not willing to meet my eyes.

At about midnight Jiggy started puking. That was absolutely expected from someone who had had a cocktail of whiskey, beer and vodka on the rocks. And then all his skillful twists and turns on the dance floor were too much for his not-so-skillful stomach!

He was totally spent when Parth towed him to one of the empty benches. He flopped down on the bench and closed his eyes, groaning to himself.

"Guys," he said concernedly. "I think we should go back to the hotel. He looks half dead."

"But I want to stay!" I pouted.

"And with whom are you going to stay?" Vidz asked. "Parth has to take Jiggy to the hotel. Kaustu will obviously tag along- can't leave her precious boyfriend alone. And I'm not feeling like myself anymore-so I'm going." She raised her eyebrows at me.

"I'm not a baby." I protested. "I can take care of myself. And anyway I'll go within a few."

"Are you sure?" Kaustu asked.

"Positive." I replied.

"Okay." Parth said. "Take care and come soon. And please stay out of trouble." His eyes flickered to Randhir who was sitting on a different bench quite far away from us.

His meaning was clear: Don't get into an argument with Randhir!

I rolled my eyes. "Sure, Dad."

"Let's go." Parth said to Kaustu and Vidz.

"Um," Kaustu hesitated. "I think I'll sleep with Jiggy tonight."

"It's better." Parth nodded. "I'll sleep on the couch."

"Then I'll sleep alone in the other room?" Vidz cried, suddenly horrified at the idea of sleeping alone in an unknown place.

"It's okay." Kaustu tried to pacify her. "You can sleep with us until Sanyu comes. The bed is big enough for three people."

"Yeah," I said. "Vidz, I'll wake you up. Then you and I can sleep in the other room."

Parth somehow pulled Jiggy up in a standing posture and pulled him along towards the hotel, supporting most of his weight. Kaustu and Vidz quietly followed them.

When they're out of sight, I turned around.

The sea was terrifying as the waves rose to a great height. I went to the shore and stood in ankle-deep water. The swirling water on and around my feet made me happy. I went a bit forward and then a bit more. The waves were now breaking on my knees.

I was so engrossed in my ecstasy that I didn't hear the roaring wave at first. All of a sudden I heard a furious noise and looked up to in alarm to see whatever it was, but it was already too late...

An angry wave was coming towards me hungrily. Suddenly the wave was the only thing I could see and the roaring was the only thing I could hear. I tried to move but my body was all frozen.

The wave crashed heavily on my chest. The impact of the crash sent me flying backwards and into the waters. I tried to lock my muscles to hold myself in place- but the retreating water was too turbulent for me to manage. It dragged me deep into the waters.

I was in neck-deep water. I tried to swim ashore but the current was too strong. I was a lump of mass in the crazy waters. The waves tossed and turned me, slowly draining my life out of me. The waves were coming faster now as if they had already conspired against me.

A wave hit my head and the engulfed me. I drowned. I fought to rise above the water but was unable to do so. My limbs were flailing- falling limp gradually. My lungs were aching for more oxygen.

I couldn't fight anymore. Every day was a fight for me and I was tired. I couldn't fight anymore. The black water was winning- taking advantage of my weariness. My consciousness was slowly evading me.

I should've panicked. But on the contrary I was feeling happy. My hectic life was finally ending. I felt elated bit sad for my father. He'd have to tolerate the insufferable woman I call my mother alone. But maybe Mum will change. Perhaps she'll comfort him. Finally they'll come close.

I smiled at the thought.

I wasn't fighting anymore. It was too easy a death. Every suffering of mine will end with me. Mum won't have to shout at me. Dad won't have to care for me. Mum and Dad can start a better life without me. Parth, Kaustu, Jiggy and Vidz won't have to worry for me now. All of them can live their lives without me- I was just one more problem in everyone's life that they had to deal with without any noise. So maybe death was the best for me.

I waited for the black waters to overpower me completely. I waited for the blackness to claim me.

The ocean was calm now. I could vaguely feel it. The ocean has done its job of draining my life. But I didn't make an effort to rise up. I patiently waited for the blackness to pour in- for the death to claim my insignificant life.

Suddenly, I felt a tug. I couldn't quite locate my body within the blackness but it felt like someone was pulling my arm, desperately trying to pull me up.

"No!" I tried to protest, but I couldn't find my voice. But the attempt resulted in entrance of more salt water within my lungs, burning my chest. I entered into a fit of coughs trying to dislodge the water but it wasn't helping.

Meanwhile the tugging on my arm was getting stronger. I tried to prevent myself from being pulled up...

...but then my head broke the surface of the water...

Teaser of chapter 7: "SANYUKTA...SANYUKTA, open your eyes...SANYUKTA..." I heard someone calling my name and frantically patting my cheeks...and then last night's memory flooded my mind..."How dare you touch me?" I exploded..."We're leaving this very minute," I answered trying to control my voice...in blind rage threw my mobile towards Randhir's room. BAM! The mobile hit the wall and immediately broke into thousand pieces!

A/N: Hey guy's that's all about chapter 6...I tried to show Sanyu's loneliness in this chapter...Hope you all like it...Some serious stuff is gonna happen from next chapter...Be prepared...And what do you reckon will happen in chapter 7?? Stuffs are gonna get nasty...Drop in your views...Comments will be appreciated...Feel free to criticize...Positive criticism is healthly...Buh-bye!! Keep smiling and be happy...With love- Shaina...

P.S. I posted before deadline...so proud of myself (patting myself on my back and smiling!)...

Hey, read all d updates in a go !!
u r a beautiful writer
Update soon
sent u buddy request .

U kept ur promise
N updte is here

I so luved it
It was so unexpected for me
I never thought sum thing lyk dat will hppn

The whole gang enjoying party
Rd gawking at sanyu
N sanyu caught him

Poor jiggy
He was really a mess
Evrybody left
Sanyu wants to spend sumtym alone

Bt so much hppnd
She was drowning
Bt instead of panicking she was enjoying it
She was happy dat she is going to die

All r miseries will end
She find herself a trouble for others
She's finding dying peaceful

She was really so lonely
U portrayed her emtns so flawlessly
I so luved it


Rd saved her

Bt precap n ur note was scary
What serious things going to hppn

I think rd will give her mouth breathe to save her
N she will make an issue of it


Cnt wait for next
Update soon


Luv u
Keep smiling

Finally u updated...:*
It ws awesome n now im eager for the nxt part update jaldi jaldi...:))

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