'HOW CAN SOMEONE BE SO STRONG' #2 FF on Kriyaansh Chapter 24

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

rainysandhu

@rainysandhu

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#251

wow finally an update!!!
guess sun arose frm west...
left at cliffhanger?? ugh!! i hate it
chalo nthng can be done..
update awesome as usual..
shivam's back...damn excited..
nw plzzZ update soon..
want to read d complete story before i die

Quote

aarushi04

@aarushi04

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#252

Wow...awsum part...luvd it 😛
Waiting for d next...
Update soon

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

radhika

@-Baatcutter-

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#253

Amazing update.

the way u explain everyone's POV ws awesome

I jst loved it David bhai.

Well cn I call u bhai?

And update nxt prt soon plzzz😆

Quote

Akansha1515

@Akansha1515

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#254

finally u uploaded..

it was amazingly written..

kritika the new girl.. i guess she vil be the rey of hope in everybodies life..

wating to read more..

now update jaldi jaldi..

nd thanxx for pm..

Quote

KR_arsha

@KR_arsha

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#255

awesum update...
Secret kab reveal ho ga?

Quote

Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#256

Kitna mystry hai isme
Now im hating mysty
Thoda tho action dramaa fight and romance lao
Kriyansh ke beech physical fight and dance its good
And thoda kriya and rey ko aur gussa mai lao
Update fast
Exam ka natak mat karna

Quote

Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#257

I read both updates at on go and was really so happy to see an update from you!

Krithika's entry is interesting!

But david plz ab Kriya ki past ke bare mein raaz kol do...

I want Swayam to know it soon...sirf mysteries bad rahe hai koyi solve nahi ho raha hai😭

Plz Rey aur Kriya ko aur kitna dur rakhoge tum...tum KR fanse zyada dushman lag rahe ho ab😡😕

Update jaldi...puleez

Quote

dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#258

awesome...loved kritika's entry...

atleast sharon or swayum ko pata chala kriya e baare mem...update soon...

Quote

Anvesha

@..ANVESHA..

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#259

Hey... Both updates were awesome...
Loved the girl kirthika's entry... I guess she is here for some revelations... Or atleast a path to it...
But one thing Is not done... There r no kriyaansh moments atallin this story ... Atleast show aggression anger something... Whatever may be the reasons Rey can't stay away n ignore his baatcutter for so long... He will atleast fight with her to find his peace n sanity... He forgets everything else when his ms.dehradun is with him...
Tats what we all wanna see...
N plz update soon if u can this time... Will wait for ur next update :-)