arshi ss: Hamesha ~ A Heartbeat Away,chapter 1-19

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Interesting!

Khushi's idea is even more interesting. I was literally guffawing! Anjali played the pivotal role. Now let's see khushi and the laad governor agree for the marriage or not.

Gonna be a fun story to read.

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aarwen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Nice to see you enjoyed Sohara. Thank you. When these two are together it has to get a little crazy, right? Well not marriage, but atleast mamiji should get convinced that Arnav bitwa wants to marry phatee saree.

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

updated

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111243045

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aarwen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
RES
going to work ...will read and comment later..can't wait👏

UNRES

OK certain elements...

Jamuni , same hue, Khuch Khuch Hota hai and ...What crap..Playinh with OP and black magic...lips to the right..Lost ppl...😆😆

He has an urge to flick her nose😉 everything about that seems interesting to this Laad Governor...He was completely lost in her and she was lost in her world as usual... hahaha ye dono kitne ajeeb hai

Anjali di is Sayani...she over heard all and got the best solution of these two...get married ..

China is broken ...You switched the scene ...I loved it...instead of crying this was enjoying with astonishing faces without pouring hot tea on his face..

Really nice...can't wait for the next

Hey thnx for mentioning us as ur inspiration...Thnx but don't you think I am way off league...😊

Faiqa di you all are in a completely different league from me.. trust me.. I am amazed at how you all get your ideas. You are always an inspiration. 🤗

Thank you so much for that detailed comment. My dadi used to say that breaking glass averts misfortune. So I used it here. happy you liked it.

If I had my way I would make everything happy for these two. hehe.. I want to post next chapter soon since am very worried where will my story go from here.

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aarwen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri
simply amazing
loved itb

Thank you IsleOfCapri. hope to see you again for the next chapter.

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aarwen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: madhu1210
Interesting start..

continue soon

Happy you liked it Madhu. Thank you. Will have an update most probably by Friday.. hope to see you then too..

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

😭I dont how to start R! Say sooorrryyy to you for overlooking your PM 😳or comment on your beautifully written OS! No, i think i will give you a jaadu ki jhappi!🤗 Why were you nervous! This was an awesome start! A marriageproposal in the first chapter! Hurray! R tum kamaal ho! Khushi and her big mouth! Arnav and his What the attitude and his deadly flirtish smirk! Cant wait to read the second chapter! Oh and thanks for referring to me😳 muaah!

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aarwen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

main kamaal hun .. this you are telling me? with all your bedwa breaking.. hahaha.. that is true inspiration.. no need to say sorry at all R. Hum vishwas tha you would come.

Thank you 😳 . Hope the story turns out sweet. And so nice of you to say you can't wait for the next chapter. Am feeling like a writer now..