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thumbi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

God, Choti!... I'm grinning from ear to ear... Since I'm a little busy to write down anything clearly,just the words/conversations I was Lol-ing at

Amish

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Khuda ve

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

Couldn't stop laughing throughout this entire update.
It was super funny...
Buaji so does not approve of Arnav's writing. 😆
Lol... From Kabir, Aditi, Khuda Ve to Bunny Singhania...

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...ASB100...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

I'm just going to take a moment to thank my lucky stars that I wasn't in the library when I read this chapter. Would have been kicked out for sure on accounts of "hysterical laughter" otherwise. So thank you...sun, moon, all the stars and all the other astronomical objects that were present during the Arnav-Khushi consummation scene in the farmhouse.

Things I loved about this chapter...actually, strike that! I loved everything. But I also love lists, so I'm going to make one. 😆

1."Khamosh!"--Ha! All the pragmatism and practicality was just hogwash! Arnav is a closet Bollywood and KDHI junkie. 😆

2."Impressive, Raizada. You could give Shatrugan Sinha a run for his money."--I love Bollywood references, and so I automatically also love your Khushi!

3. "Woh kya hai Buaji... My parents are Amish."--LOLOL. 😆

4. Buaji's struggle with using the word 'SEX'--Haye Re Nandkisore! Will I have to stand on one foot now to appease Devi Maiyya for uttering the S-word? Buaji's struggle with this 'ganda' word was hilarious!

5.HourlyMotion thanks to DismalGaze?--Why dismal? She should be ujjwal yaar...for lighting up the lives of Arshians since BS went on a longish break.

6. "Waise bhi, you only watch those balls moving quickly from side to side. Sweaty men kicking them this way and that, hitting them hard, pushing them..."--Ahem Ahem. Your capacity for gutter never fails to astound me Choti.

7. Khuda Ve--I wonder what Anji's song is then? Meri aankhon mein Nagaraj muskuraye?

8.Arnav can make pasta and aloo puri? HotChefArnav ALERT!!!!

9. "Please. The behind-the-scenes guy probably took pity on phankis like you and released because he knew it would never release."--My thoughts exactly. Arnav thinks exactly the way I do! Where can I order this Arnav for myself? How much does shipping cost?

10.The eye-lock--Oooh. So much tension. I can't wait for Khushi to...ah, play tennis. 😆

11."My sex scenes make women reach for thanda thanda paani."--Your Arnav writes erotica. Uff. Just chugged 5 glasses of thanda thanda paani.

Some kostins that I may or may not have:

1. Nagaraj exists only in KDHI right? Anji doesn't have a husband called...Slytherin or something right?

2. Is she pregnant?

3.Is her husband going to make an appearance? Her husband wasn't Khushi's fiance, right? I really hope not!

That was superbly written Choti! 👏👏👏

Hilarious! I love this story so much! I love every thing about it! Eagerly waiting to read the next part!

Edited by ...ASB100... - 11 years ago

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Anj007_arshi

@Anj007_arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#214

OMG what an update ji..awesome..couldn't stop my laughter yet..

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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#215

kdhi res.
that was a hilarious chapter.
3 women fangirling bunny singhania and crying buckets 4 a show which ended 3 yrs ago ( this sounds familiar *wink*).
arnav is a hot erotic novel writer ( i guess i missed it in earlier updates) which buaji wholly disapproves.
amishi- mango sellers *laughing*
buaji is dramatic and full of life and hai re nandkishore and now devi maiyya too. And how i forget kdhi and bunny singhania too.
khushi put her foot in her mouth by criticizing arnav's novel and which got us a smirking and smug arnav who knows khushi had readhis novels.
buaji and arnav and three letter word 's**' conversation. 🤬
this was a super and hilarious update. 😛
thanx 4 pm.

Edited by arhi_crazy - 11 years ago

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Heavens_Flower

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Posted: 11 years ago

#216

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

My stoomach is hurting and peeople are giving funny look...

Oh man... this is some update... but next time can you put a warning like ---beware, you will die laughing--- or something

IFaraq69 is a beautiful UN. Why no one has ever thought of that???? 😉

Khuda Ve 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

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rk2127

@rk2127

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Posted: 11 years ago

#217

Awesome update.

It was so nice to read a writer Arnav criticize all the things IPK did wrong and caused the decent of an epic story.

But in all this the humor of the situation, the readers as the viewer the three ladies and the fan fiction mention, you didn't stop to take a take on from both sides. Bravo to that.

There is chemistry and attraction churning between Arnav and Khushi so much so that they did change the atmosphere around them in a room full of people. Especially loud people, hai re NK.

P.S. Is there a nice story with name illusion as mentioned in the update or was is just a made up?

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rith123

@rith123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#218

Because no grown man should be named Bunny. Unless he is a rabbit, in which case he isn't a man. Res

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Choti! You have to wait till I finish laughing so that I can type coherent sentences.

Bahahahahahahahahahaha!

Now that is over and done with, I think, *smothers a laugh*, that was a brilliant chapter 2. Of course Khushi reads Arnav's books. He is a best selling author dammit. I loved the banter between Khushi and Arnav. But I loved Buaji the most. She made me laugh so much!

Can't wait to read chapter 3!

Does Illusions by IFaraq69 have se... uh a sensible plot? Better than the loopholes of our beloved show?

Chapter 3. Now. Thanks.

Edited by rith123 - 11 years ago