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Raila1014

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

That was bloody hilarious Nandkishore! Just brilliant! You made fun of us ff readers but I can forgive you for the laughs you have provided with this chapter. Love Buaji and her opening dialogue, love the IPk spoof and especially love the point Arnav made about the stupidity of the plot where I love you was said only once and sorry was never mentioned, where the family was never notified of Aditi's good deeds for the family. Do we get a sample of Arnav's erotica novel? Maybe Kushi can share while reading it in the secrecy of her room. I am simply loving this story. I must say your stories are getting better and better.

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rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Edited the earlier post...

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rith123

@rith123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: chotidesi

Too many vowels. Not enough periods. Disapproved.

Lol! How about I write an FF for you under the handle Ifaraq69?

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rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Choti... BTW What made you come up with such outlandish thoughts of Amish amidst the conversation! 🤣

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Meena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: rith123

Lol! How about I write an FF for you under the handle Ifaraq69?

You. Write FF? Done. Done. Done. I will do hazar Havans, todo-fy narials, eat jalebis, pray to Devi Maiyya!

And res, of course.

Res.
TFS.

Edited by chotidesi - 11 years ago

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Meena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: rulama
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#666666">Choti... BTW What made you come up with such outlandish thoughts of Amish amidst the conversation!</font>🤣

Bwahaha! I was craving mangoes, and then I thought of aam because I was writing in Hindi for Buaji, and then I... Actually, I'm not really sure where the Amish came from 😆

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rith123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Comment edited on previous page!

Lau,

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rith123

@rith123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: chotidesi

You. Write FF? Done. Done. Done. I will do hazar Havans, todo-fy narials, eat jalebis, pray to Devi Maiyya!

And res, of course.

Res.
TFS.

Lol. How sweet. Not happening though!

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Jignasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Unres HERE 😃

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Meena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: rith123
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Lau,
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Why yes, it does have a s-s-sensible plot.

(But if you write it, it would be even more sensible. Just kidding. Not really. But go tang tang with math. 😡 )