ARSHI SS: Veiled Hearts ~ COMPLETED (16/11) - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
What a beautiful concept Z, love, love , loved Chapter 1.
I love the cheerful, confident and righteous Khushi! There are so many things that defined her strong character for me, the way she woke up with the morning prayer, her prayer for the job and how she asked for it only if it will be good for her.( I remember doing a similar prayer once upon time when I was going for a job interview). The way she referred to everything around her, her confident stance when she met Arnav, her staying true to her beliefs and giving it back to the boss to be without offending him in anyway yet asserting herself and her morals with perfection, just everything about her is beautiful.

Arnav on the other hand appears to be a shallow prick, it was good to see his attraction for Khushi even if his intentions didn't seem pure. We all know that the way Khushi is, she is bound to change this man that is ASR, sooner rather than later. His initial reaction to having a girl with a hijaab was just so real and well put! I can only commend you for it Z!

This concept is quite exciting and I cannot wait to read the next chapter already! ;)

Appreciate the Pm! xx
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Arshix144

What a beautiful concept Z, love, love , loved Chapter 1.

I love the cheerful, confident and righteous Khushi! There are so many things that defined her strong character for me, the way she woke up with the morning prayer, her prayer for the job and how she asked for it only if it will be good for her.( I remember doing a similar prayer once upon time when I was going for a job interview). The way she referred to everything around her, her confident stance when she met Arnav, her staying true to her beliefs and giving it back to the boss to be without offending him in anyway yet asserting herself and her morals with perfection, just everything about her is beautiful.

Arnav on the other hand appears to be a shallow prick, it was good to see his attraction for Khushi even if his intentions didn't seem pure. We all know that the way Khushi is, she is bound to change this man that is ASR, sooner rather than later. His initial reaction to having a girl with a hijaab was just so real and well put! I can only commend you for it Z!

This concept is quite exciting and I cannot wait to read the next chapter already! ;)

Appreciate the Pm! xx


Thanks for the lovely comment sis. Really glad you like it. Hope my next chapter is good for you all too😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Thanks for the update Zara. I'm liking Khushi here. I'd like her to be careful around Arnav. He means no good for her. I'd rather hope he falls for her heart instead of her beauty alone.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
I love the way you started this story
Please do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
wow...very interesting concept ... loved the chapter ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Awesome update... Interesting start
Bt i hv a ques, aren't the names of all the characters non-muslim???
They r so bcoz u wanted this story an arhi story or any other specific reason???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Tht was simply an awesome start
So lets see who changes whom
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: saakhi01

Awesome update... Interesting start
Bt i hv a ques, aren't the names of all the characters non-muslim???
They r so bcoz u wanted this story an arhi story or any other specific reason???


I did mention this right at the told of the 1st page, LOL.
I' kept everyones names as non-arabic for conviniance of an Arhi story, but also that it doesn't matter if you have an arabic name or not, You can still be muslim. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
nice n dufferent concept...

just wanted to ask u one thing...is arnav also muslim in this story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Awesome start!!! Please continue soon!!!

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