ARSHI SS: Veiled Hearts ~ COMPLETED (16/11)

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faree

@faree

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

awesome and i must say very different concept

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please6

@please6

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

The story line is very interesting and I would like to see how Arnav will win the "challenge" he made with him self and just to be clear did arnav mean that

he makes other girls remove their hijab and uses them for his own personal pleasure and wants to do the same with khushi and when he's done he will dump her

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he want her to remove the hijab on her own like other girls do and then Make her his? Which he hasn't done before

Anyways loved it and plzz do clear this confusion and plzzz update soon

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ShiningHearts

@ShiningHearts

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Very intriguing..

Fabulous Start..

so diff. n unique storyline..

would love to read more..

Do pm me pls wen u will update..

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tuli_jayee

@tuli_jayee

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Nice start. Quite different storyline. Eager to read more.

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: please6
The story line is very interesting and I would like to see how Arnav will win the "challenge" he made with him self and just to be clear did arnav mean that

he makes other girls remove their hijab and uses them for his own personal pleasure and wants to do the same with khushi and when he's done he will dump her

or

he want her to remove the hijab on her own like other girls do and then Make her his? Which he hasn't done before

Anyways loved it and plzz do clear this confusion and plzzz update soon

Sorry for not making it clear, but his aim is to get her to remove her own hijab like other girls, but become his which he hasn't done before. It'll be more clear in the coming chapters so don't worry.😆