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tiara

@tiara24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

the story is getting more and more intersting with every chapter nd m luvin it

continue soon...

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goodlucksam

@goodlucksam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#242

Resswa!!!

Unressing...

Saffi di r u biopolar in nature??😲🤣

Acha acha don't give me those *death glares* fr this iillogical question...😆😆 *scared*

But ssly.. There u r writing a smoking hawt fic..with ..so much of ..boldness.. In the leads! 😳

N here...😲

Alas!!! Soh emotional.. Sole touching.. One!!

Complete contrast!!😕

From now versatility is synonyms from you only👍🏼

Just two chaps till now.. But I can clearly visualise shradha's Pale-innocent..craving fr daddy's love... face in front my eyes!!😊

Awww!! How beautiful n sweeti baby is she...😳

shez having most of his features that it hurt her sometime...but she Still loves her ...sanyu!😭

The mothers-daughter relationship... * dil touch kar diya yr *😆

Oh girl ...this is nothing just perfection👏

U r sooo good in portraying relationships n emotions...⭐️

I felt so connected..😃

At a time With..sanyu..then with shradha n finally with sandhir...kudose👍🏼

Seems like v r going to have a lot Mr flashbacks in upcoming parts..

Pationate.. Love drenched sandhir.. *does a happy dance*

🥳

She loves him ...still????😲..

I don't need to say ... But i still wanna mention..😉

Like a true writer.. U have everything preplanned.😊

N ryt thing will happen at ryt time...!

N it would b really interesting to ..see randhir's perspective..as there is a volcano of emotions building inside him..

His actions r making me to visualise a beautiful bond btw father n daughter.. Which .is surely gonna develop in future track..😳

...so overall this one made my day!😆

...n m assuring neighter u r writing anything illogical..

Nr m looking fr NY logic in a masterpieces...😆

..m such n emotional fool!!😆

I get influence with all this very easily😉

So now all what I have to do is wait! Wait! Wait!

Regards

samm<3

Edited by goodlucksam - 11 years ago

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swathi sen

@SWA1992

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#243

wonderful update...
u dont hav to worry abt" medical issues". Marrow transplant btw siblings r done...and similar concept(having another child for the sake of 1st one) is shown in the movie 'my sisters keeper'... so dont worry...its an awesome idea..

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everywednesday

@everywednesday

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Its time.

For me to die already now.

I love this story. :')

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DreamAchiever9

@DreamAchiever9

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#245

Words which had once seemed like a joke, now
held a bitter reality in them... Awesome lines... loved it... just waiting to know what will happen.next...

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Sonali Shivkumar

@ChasingLiberty

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#246

heyya !!

sorry for the late reply

i have been busy !!

coming to the story ..

do i really need to say it ???

how awesome you are :P !

MAn i love the way you have descibed shradha ..she is so caring and loving .. i feel so bad for her .. she seems to like Randhir even though he was never around for her .. what a beautiful daughter .. :(

and the flashback scene <33333

Sandhir in love... i always love when you write one of those ..

The way he kisses her.. man i just loved it ! and how he took a pic of her grumpy face .. LOL !

and the ending DAMN ! so i guess they will need to have an other child now ! now that's interesting !!