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Madhusmita das

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Posted: 11 years ago

#251

god saffi..this is so interesting. i cant wait for next chap...

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SanDhiraddict

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Posted: 11 years ago

#252

Saffi you made my eyes welled up with this fiction of yours. I hope she survives with the help of her would be genetically engineered brother or sister. In the process Randhir and Sanyukta will come close I guess.

Don't worry about medical staffs ...it is fiction and you have your liberty as a fiction writer.

I am waiting impatiently for next updates.

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--Kkkhushiii--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

Oh god saffi this was amazing yaar

The way sharaddha recognized Randhir as her dad was heart touching

And the SanDhir flashback scene was so cute

Now that Randhir knws that shraddha is his daughter, he mite help sanyu

Anyways great update

Plz update fast & thank for the PM

Edited by LoveRantara - 11 years ago

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basket_101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

Bonjour Mlle Saffi 😆

I'm in such a joyous mood today for some reason 😃

And so you might get an extra long comment than usual, cause you know, I say much less when I'm happy 😉😆

Anywayyy... Now to the part.

Their daughter. I really like the sound of those words. Shraddha, a beautiful name for a beautiful daughter. 😳 I love that name!

"Glancing back at Shraddha with pained eyes" 😭 Finding out one day that you have a daughter who has cancer is such a mixed situation. He finds out he gave life to a girl, only to find out that the same girl is fighting for her life.

But I'm glad he came for the test. I knew he would :)

"That was Daddy right?"

She is so adorable! I am imagining Jia from Kal Ho Na Ho as Shraddha btw 😛

But the fact that she always commented on their hands was adorable. How adorable can a kid get.

I love how much she resembles Randhir! Daddy's girl <3

I'm not even lying when I say that I can't wait to read about the father-daughter duo. Can just imagine Sanyu's heart swelling with happiness. 😳

Then the flashback came. Wow. I already said this on another ff, and I'm gonna say it again. Romantic Randhir is seeexyyy ☺️

I guess that now, Sanyu is glad that he did take a picture back then

But the end of the flashback dialogues. How real they turned out to be :(

It truly was a bitter reality.

Though I don't know what happened, I'm so pained by knowing that they had such beautiful moments together but now are meeting each other like this.

Sanyu's fear of losing Shraddha was described very well. It was heartbreaking to read though. I pray no mother or father has to go through that, but sadly, reality is that this is so common.

It was really saddening 😭

You made me cry. You know that?

Especially when the doctor said that it doesn't match :(

One good thing about that part though was that Randhir didn't just leave after. He stayed back. He could have easily gone back, but he didn't. That was nice to read. 😊

Okay wow. Is it weird that the thought of the "next option" excites me? 😆

Way to kill the sadness in my head. 😆

But anyway, I'm wondering how Randhir is going to react to that.

This end bit kind of reminds me of My Sister's Keeper, have you watched it?

It's a sad movie though :(

Anyway, although this part was quite sad, I did enjoy reading it!

Well written!!

Good job :D

Will be waiting to read the next part! :)

Love you, muaah :* 🤗