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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey I'm back. with the results I got looks like we are getting a jealous rey.

And there are 4 new entries instead of 3

Ahana Singhania:

rey's mom. Loves her family a lot.

Shreya Singhania:

rey's 17 year old sister(I know I said 15 but due some reasons I decided to change that.) she is very close to rey. rey loves her a lot. And is very protective over her.

Archana Singhania:

rey's maasi. Lives in America with her adopted son. which is like her brotherAnd came back to india with ahana and Shreya who went to visit her in America. Knows something about kriya's past which will be revealed later on.

rohan ...:

archana's adopted son. She adopted him from a friend which passed away. He's a big flirt but good at heart. 20 years old. He came to india with his didi. ( he calls her that because she's is young 37 and like a sister for him his last name is not given for a reason)

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Part 4

Next morning kriya woke up with her face on rey's chest. Rey was hugging her. Kriya freed herself from his arms kissed his forehead and went for a shower. When she came back wearing her bathrobe rey was still sleeping.

Kr: rey get up. Hume college jaana hai.

Rey(isv in sleepy voice): kriya please. bas 5 minute aur sone do.

Kriya walked to him and stared shaking him.

Kr: please please please get up. We are getting late.

Rey: oke I'm going. Stop shaking me. he got up , rubbed his eyes and went to the bathroom. Kriya went to the closet to find something to wear.

When rey came back he saw the whole bed covered with kriya's clothes.

And he saw kriya sitting on the bed looking at the clothes. Rey was totally lost in kriya. She looked beautifull.

Kriya:


He walked up to her and kneeled In front of her.

Rey: kriya kya hua?

Kr: rey mujhe pata nahi hai ki main kya pehnu. I want your family to like me. what if they don't like the way I wear or they won't like it if I don't wear my mangalsutra and sindoor.

Rey: kriya... baby calm down. nothing like that will happen. They'll love you I'm sure. About the clothes sharon came over a lot wearing these clothes and Shreya wears them two. And don't worry about the mangalsutra and stuff they will understand. our family is very modern. So don't worry okay? Kriya nodded. then this scene started WATCH BEFORE READING FURTHER:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Eheds2vwtp4

After that rey told kriya...

Rey: now let's go down stairs for breakfast and I'll tell dad to tell everything to the others when they arrive so that we don't have to explain everything again.

Kr: uhmm.. you go i'll go and put everything back in the closet.

Rey: okay come fast. With that he went downstairs. He asked his dad to explain everything to the family when they arrive. He agreed. Kriya came down and the three of them had breakfast. After that kriya and rey left for college.

In the car

Kriya was getting nervous again.

Kr: rey..

Rey: hmmm?

Kr: what if anyone in college finds out about us.

Rey: then what they will find out someday.

Kr: but rey I don't want them to know. I mean... I want them to know but not about this.

Rey: kriya tum kya keh rahe ho?

Kr: I want them to know me as kriya Ghai your girlfriend not kriya reyaansh Singhania. I want to have that feeling of being your girlfriend again. When we bunk classes to romance in the fire escape, when you kiss me but with that feeling that we shouldn't cross the limits before marriage.. she was about to go further when she noticed rey smirking. Then she realised what she was saying.

Rey: rukh kyun gaye? Aage batao na..

Kr: REEYYY.

Rey: listen. Everything will happen the way you want okay. I'll make shore that no one will find out about this. It will be something between me, you, my family, our gang and vp sir. The rest will know you as kriya Ghai the girlfriend of Rey oke?

Kr: hmm

Rey: and about bunking classes and romance without crossing the lines I'm not shore about that. Now that we're married we aren't crossing any line wright??

Kr: REEYYY stop it.

Suddenly rey stopped the car.

Kr: why did you stop the car?

Rey: you said stop it so I stopped the car. She gave him a are you kidding me look.

Rey: no no I'm joking. Woh actually I need to order something here I'll be back in a min. with that he got out of the car and went in a jewellery shop . he came back in 2/3 minutes.

Kr: tum waha kya kar rahe the?

Rey: Shreya ke liye kuch order kiya. I'll pick it up went we go back home.

Kr: oh oke.

With that they made their way to the college. Rey parked his car and they both walked in to the college hand in hand and reached the auditorium. the whole gang was sitting there. When they saw rey and kriya walking hand in hand. The boys did their chemistry signature hand thingy and kriyaansh rolled their eyes. Kriya went to sit next to rinni and aashi.

Sha: OMG kriya is this one of those shorts we saw in the Forever 21 store?

Kr: yaah.. I just needed to have this.

Rinni: I must say this is a very nice short.

Kr: I know and I saw a realy realy cute dress. The boys rolled their eyes at their girly talk.

Aashi: girls let's go for shopping tonight. It's shopping night anyways so everything is open till 00:00

Kr: tonight??...kriya asked she looked at rey as she wanted to spend some time with his family tonight.

Sha: is there any problem?

Kr: woh rey's family is coming from America today.

Sha: really?!! Oh my god rey you didn't tell us.

Rey: because dad told us yesterday. Dad is going to pick them up from the airport in two hours.

Sim: I'm so excited. I really want to see Shreya again.

Aa: how about we meet up at rey's house after college so we can meet aunty and Shreya. After that we leave for shopping.

Sha: yeah and we can take Shreya with us too.

Rey: I've got no problem with it.

Bha: EK MINUTE. Mai in ladkiyon ke saath phirse shopping wopping nahi kar sakta.

Swa: are bharat we won't go for shopping we only go and hang out at rey's place while the girls will go for shopping.

Sha: so kriya ab koi problem nahi hain na?

Kr: no koi problem nahi. Btw it looks like you guys know Shreya very well.

Simmi: yeah the thing is when she was in india she used to bring lunch for rey during our rehearsals.

Kr: ooh oke.

Nil: ab guys class ke liye chalein late ho raha hain.

Rey: arre wah. Simmi ke saath saath reh kar tu toh bohut achha ladka ban gaye. Class ke liye jaana hain ab. Wow

Nil: shut up mr. kriya ke romeo to which all giggled accept rey. Ab chalein?

Rey: haan challo. they all went to class. 2/ 3 hours went by. Meanwhile rey's dad had picked everyone up from the airport and was surprised that rohan was there also and what shocked him more was that he was planning to join St. Louis college. They all reached home and rey's dad told them about everything that happened. First everyone was shocked but then rey's dad told them not to worry as kriya is a great girl and perfect for rey. They all decided to give kriya a warm welcome in their family as they trusted rey and his choice. He also said that she was rey's first love. To which Shreya was shocked as she and rey always shared everything with eachother but rey never told her anything about kriya.

She decided to be angry at him for that. But kriya seemed a nice girl to her form what she has heared and was excited to meet her new bhabhi. Ranvijai told them some more things about kriya which he knew. While Archana rey's maasi wondered if this was the same kriya she knew. They all reached home and settled down. after a few more hours college got over and they decided to go straight to rey's house. Simmi nilesh and aashi went with rey and kriya the rest went with swayan and sharon. Rey picked up his gift for Shreya first and then went home.

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That was it guy's. looks like august is a birthday month. Sharon's bday bharat's bday and mine bday on 22 of august.

Please read the note below.

Don't forget to like and comment. Buddy for pm's.

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NOTE.

In this ff there are 4 years before you graduate instead of three.

I will use a lot of pictures in my ff and video's also. Most of the video's are from d3 itself but sometimes from others also.

If there are any question about this ff please ask.

Xx shannel

Edited by 1asya1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
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Unresss
Yesss yesss me 1st Yipeee 😃 😉

Btw the update was super cool
Loved the whole intro 👏
Nd Kriyansh moments was so
Adorable 😳

Love it waiting for nexttt partt
update soon plsss
thanx for the pm
Edited by Sanchita_ArSha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Awesome update...

loved it...

loved kr moments..

excited for the next part...

update soon... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
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unres
the update was super awesum...
Loved KR bedroom scean...
Rey's dad so understanding...
KR's car scean... haye...
Rey tou already made clear that he will not stay in limit... Hehehehe...
Gangs teasing them...
All n all loved it vry much...
Update soon...
Edited by Meghna_kriyansh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Awww, sho shweet.
I loved it yrr,
Rey ke dad Maan gaye, nice.
And the gang's teasing session was the best.

Update soon.
And yes, don't forget to pm me.
Nikki
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
loved it completely
soo karan tacker that means
we r gonna get jealousy rey shortly
can't w8 4 it
loed kriyaansh car convo
pleaseee update next part soon

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HAPPY BIRTHDAY IN ADVANCE

Love
Ria




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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
I luved it shoo shweet it was nd yuss thanks for jealous rey i m waiting for his reactions i guess rohan will flirt with kriya nd rey will be jealous at the same time thinking if he is rohan ghai bhot confusion mere chhote se mind me
Update soon nd most important thanks for the pm 😊 nd do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Wow! Nice update. Her dress & girly talk was nice.

I like the character u choose.

I think an kits knows kriya earlier. But hope not in

Bad frame. Karan has past with kriya intresting.

Will be fun to watch jealous Rey.

Hope family be nice with kriya.

Thanks for the update honey. 👏 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
awesome update
cute sweet luvely romantic & deviousness
what more reader want but 1 thing left
that was only kr
now next update only kr plzzz .
muah
keep updating

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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
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sorry didn't have time to write.
busy with it now.
wil try to update soon.😊

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