DDBEDS- KRIYAANSH FF updated part 10

Do Dil Bande Ek Dori Se. A kriyaansh story.

My first story attempt on Kriyaansh.

It's about when kriya and rey came back from the village but in this they realy got married.

Please tell me what you think? After your comments i'll decide if this will be an ff or ss. So please let me know what you want

( I don't wan't to offend anyone with this story it's just my imagination. I'm sorry if i have made anny mistakes)

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Part 1

They were now in the bus back to mumbai. Everything was official. The people of the village even changed kriya s name from kriya Ghai to kriya Ghai-Singhania. They could only get a divorce after being married for a year.

Kr: guys what will we do now. They made everything official. Now everyone will find out. Rey what will we tell your dad.

Re: kriya please calm down we'll figure out something. But for now this will only be something between us we will tell no one.

Sw: but rey marriage... it's a big thing.

Aa(aashi): yea swayam is right.

Si: if not everyone then atleast let's tell your dad and vp sir. They will find out the moment they see kriya's full name. so we better tell this to our self.

Everyone agreed when something came up in vicky's mind.

Vi: kriya hum vp sir and ranvijai uncle toh sab batadoongi but what about your mom.

Ni: ha she needs to know also.

Kriya got tears in her eyes and looked down hearing them mention her mom. She was about to wipe her tears and tell them when she felt a hand wiping away her tears. She looked up to see rey. He looked at her nodding a no as if he wanted to tell her not to cry and be strong. Then he looked at the gang.

Re: guys Smriti aunty is no more.

All: WHAT??

Re: yeah she passed away one year ago. In a car accident.

Sh: kriya why didn't you tell us.

Kr: it wasn't the right time. you were all mad at me and if I would tell you guys then... she couldn't finish her line as the bus driver told them they have reached the collage gate.

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Short chapter I know.

I can only work on this ff in weekends.

Please tell me what you think. Like and comment (I prefer long)

Xx shannel

indexpart 6- page 11
part 7 - page 13

Please ignore my spelling mistakes. As I'm from the Netherlands .my hindi isn't very good. And I'm not perfect with my english.

part 2

they all got out of the bus and took their luggage.

Rey: guys let's do one thing. We should all go home and rest and then meet up in 2 hours. My place?

Sw: that sounds good. And yeah we should make shore that vp sir and rey's dad will be there so we can tell them.

Sh: don't worry I will call vp sir. And I gues rey your dad will be home by then.

Rey: yeah. So six p.m. my place. Bye guys.

All: bye. They all went home kriya went with rey of course. Once they reached home kaka opened the door for them. Kaka looked at them from top to toe.

Ka: tum dono yeh shaadi ke kapde mein kya kar rahe ho?

Kr: nahi kaka yeh humare village ke kapde hain par change karne ka time nahi mila. Rey looked at her for such a silly lie. And she just looked away.

Ka: theek hain beta tum dono jao jaake fresh ho jao mein tab tak khana bane ke laati hoon.

Kriyaansh; ji

They both went inside. After half an hour kriya putted on her pyjama and came out of her bathroom she was about to dry her hair when she came out of the bathroom. She was about to dry her hair when her mangalsutra got stuck in her hair. That moment rey came in her room.

Kr: are rey look na. ughh.. this mangalsutra just won't come out.

Rey: I thought you would take this off. He said walking towards her.

Kr; yeah but I forgot. Please aap try karo na. rey helped her and finally her hair wasn't stuck in it anymore. Kriya was about to say thanks. When she felt rey's hands on her waist pulling her closer. Her back was now against his chest.

He then started nuzzeling in her neck.

Kr: rey...

Rey: shhh...

Kr: rey.. we.sh-shouldn't this made rey come back to his senses.

Rey: kriya I'm sorry I don't know what... I I'm really sorry.

Kr. It's oke.

Rey: uhm kaka called you. To come and eat so chalein?

Kr. Ha challo. they both went for lunch. ( it was now 4.45 p.m and their marriage happened in the morning around 9.00 A.M. )

Kaka made kriya's favourite Maggie.

They were both eating when something struck rey's mind.

Rey: kriya? Can I ask you something.

Kr: haan bolo?

Rey: who . what did you tell me last night. I mean I remember it but I don't remember everything. because of the bhang. So... you don't have to if you don't want..

Kr: no no it's oke.. she told him everything again. And got tears in her eyes.

Kr: you know what the best part was?

Rey: what.

Kr: after everything she did. I forgave her because I love her. And the her last words to me shocked me the most.

She told me to come back to mumbai to make my dream come true and if possible...

Rey: if possible what??

Kr: ..get your love back.

Rey:... Did you ever think of getting back with me? kriya hesitated but then said.

Kr: yes. But then I found out that you moved on and I couldn't but destiny brought me back here.

Rey got up from his chair. Kriya did the same. Rey walked to her and held her hands then entwined their fingers. Kriya looked at their fingers and then at rey.

Rey: kriya I don't know if this husband and wife will work out. But will you please be with me again if not as my wife than atleast as my girlfriend?

He looked at kriya she said nothing. He thought maybe he was too fast.

Rey: I'm sorry. Maybe I'm going too fast. Atleast let's be friends. I don't want to lose you again kriya please say something. His voice almost went away and he got tears in his eyes.

Kr: rey. I don't know what relation we have right now but I can tell you that... tum mere achhe dost se kuch zyaada ho. Rey looked at her. And he smiled wide. Then hugged her. While hugging her he said.

Rey: kriya thank you so much. Please promise whatever happens. You won't leave me.

Kr: I promise.

Rey: I love you baatcutter. Then they heared a stern voice.

Person: rey kriya?

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That was it for today.

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hey dear...its an amazing concept..
loved it..bt i would siggest u to post it in d3 forum..yaha kisi ko pata bi nai chalega nd waha ppl can know abt it

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

hey dear...its an amazing concept..
loved it..bt i would siggest u to post it in d3 forum..yaha kisi ko pata bi nai chalega nd waha ppl can know abt it

i can bt it wont help..isten go to d3 forum..
jst like here..there will be a tab "new topic"...enter a short title nd copy paste what u hv written here in the topic box..nd post it...
try..ho jayega

Amazing concept...

Awesome start dear
Liked it so much
Continue and pm me whn u update
I wanna read more

Awesome concept...

lovely...

loved both the parts very much .

update soon..

ps-pls pm me next time whenever you update

awesome start