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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
koi h kya btw update kab milega
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey
M hina
Just come across this ff
N I so love it
Kr getting married in village is really nice concept
Read all 4 updatea together
N they wwre mind blowing
Seriously
Kr lil moments n romance was really cute
Gang teasing
N rey ki family ki understanding
All are so wonderful n beautifully written
N I think rey ki masi ka adopted son is krias bro
N 1 request plz pm me too
N jaldi jaldi update karna
I will not be able to wait more to read this story

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanchita_ArSha

koi h kya btw update kab milega

as soon as I'm doing writing 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update..
loved it..
please continue soon.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys finally found time to update. no proofread

please ignore mistakes😊

Part 5

They parked the cars in front of the Singhania mansion. Kriya was getting a little bit nervous again. The whole gang went towards the door, rey got his keys and opened the door. They saw everyone sitting in the living room. On seeing rey, Shreya was about to run to him for a hug when she remembered that she was angry at him. She saw a beautifull girl standing right next to him and assumed her to be kriya. So she made it look like she was running to him. Rey spread his arms for her to hug him but was shocked when she ran past him and hugged kriya. Kriya herself was shocked but hugged back. After a while shreya pulled back.

Shr: hi tum kriya bhabhi ho na? dad told us a lot about you. I was so excited to meet you. Waise bhai bohut lucky hain tum jaise pretty wife ko milgaya hain.

Kr: uuhhm thank u.

Shr: oops waise I'm shreya. The lillte sister of your stupid donkey husband. She said glaring rey. The rest giggled accept rey.

Rey: princes tum aise kyun keh rahe ho? (rey calls shreya princes.)

Shr: kyun ki I'm very very very angry at you.

Rey: but why.

Shr: leave it. She went to greet and hug everyone else.( She called all the boys in ou d3 gang bhai and all the girls di)

Rey's mom now also reached there.

Ah: hello everyone.

gang except krisharey: hello aunty.

Sha: hey sexy (that's how sharon calls rey's mom)

Ah: hi sweatheart she side hugged sharon. Then went to rey and kissed his forehead. At last she went to kriya she caressed kriya's face.

Ah: toh tum ho kriya.

Kr: ji aunty I mean mom I mean..

Ah: you can call me mom. Tum mere bahu ho.don't worry we know everything. Ranvijai ne hume sabkuch explain kiya.

Kr: ji rey came to hugged kriya from behind and putted his chin on her shoulder.

Rey: so mom. Kaisa lagta hain tumhe tumhaari bahu?

Ah: bohut pyaari. She kissed kriya on her forehead.

Ah: welcome to the family sweetheart. Ab chalo I'll introduce you to rey's maasi. And rey rohan bhi hai jahan.

Rey: really?

Shr: nahi jhoot. If she says that rohan bhai is here also then why are you asking "really?"(mimicking rey). STUPID. Pata nahi bhabhi aapko pasad kyun aayi.

I mean seriously bhabhi what made you fall for him.

Kr: who mein bhang ke nashi mein thi. I couldn't think well. That's the reason I'm stuck with him now. She said teasing rey. Shriya(shreya+kriya) gave eachother a hi5 while the rest was giggling. Rey let go of kriya and she turned to him giggling.

Shr: see even bhabhi doesn't know why she fell for you. Actually you should be thankful to me. meri bhai hain isliye good look's hai tumhare paas. Lekin dimaag nahi hai.

Rey: shreya stop it. Maina kya kiya ki tum mujhse naraaz hain and kriya tum bhi??

Kr: when I came from NY you behaved very bad with me na, toh iska badla le rahi hoon. ma

Rey: but I said sorry na. pehle dad ab shreya bhi tumhare saath mere against hain. Ma dekho na.

Ah: oke oke enough. Kriya let's go and introduce you to the rest.

On seeing kriya archana was shocked it was indeed the kriya she knew. But she looked a little happier than she was in new York. She send a silent prayer to keep kriya always this happy. She looked at rohan who was wiping his tears away before they could fall out finally his kriya was happy. As kriya saw rohan and archana she screamed ran to rohan and kind of jumped in his arms hugging him. Everyone frowned accept archana. Kriya pulled back from rohan

And hugged archana.

Kr: aunty aap dona yahan.

Ran: kriya beta do you know them?

Kr: haan dad. Archana aunty meri maasi ki bohut acchi dost hain. And rohan NY mein meri best friend thi. Rey was getting jealous he used almost all his control when he saw krihan(kriya+rohan) hugging. Only he had the right to hug kriya like that. He was brought back to his senses because of shreya. While everyone was sitting and chatting with eachother.

Shr: bhai kya soch rahe ho?

Rey: nahi kuch nahi and tum toh mujhse naraz thin a?

Shr: yes and I still am. We never had secrets for eachother and that time that kriya bhabhi and you were dating you never told me about her.

Rey: oh so that's why my princes is angry.

Shr: yes.

Rey: oke to make up for that I have a surprise for you.

Shr: kya??

Rey then got a box out of his pocket and gave it to shreya.

Shr: yeh kya hai bhai?

Rey: khol ke dekho.

She opened the box and found a beautifull necklace with her name in it.

Shr: wow bhai it's beautifull thank you she hugged him he kissed her forehead and hugged her back.

Rey: you're welcome princes. Meanwhile everyone looked at the brother sister duo in awe. But then rohan interrupted.

Roh: if the brother and sister love is over can we please eat something now I'm really hungry.

Rey: of course... I totally forgot you have the stomach of an elephant. God know's why you aren't fat yet.

Roh: work out work out and workout. You can eat as much as you want as long as you work out.

Rey: whatever

They all went and had dinner. Rohan and kriya told everyone about crazy things they did when they were in NY Rohan told him about him joining ST. Louis next year. And kriya told everyone that he's a great dancer to.

while rey was there sitting jealous.

shreya noticed it so to cheer him up she left no chance with teasing kriyaansh.

After dinner the girls went to shopping night while the boys were at home including rohan. watching some movie (ABCD) after 2 hours the boys went home. Rohan and rey were together catching up some talks while the elders where tired so went to sleep.

It was 11 pm. When shriya came after dropping all the girls home.

Rohan and rey's eyes went wide seeing all the shopping bags. Both shreya and kriya had five bags on each arm.

Rey: you two will make me bankrupt.

shriya: shut up.

Roh: rey bro I'm going to sleep you handle these two. Good night. With that he went away. Rey looked around and saw kriya and shreya going to their rooms. He sighed and went to kriya first. He entered their room and saw kriya packing out the shopping bags. He came and hugged her from behind.

Rey: how was shopping?

Kr: it was so much fun shreya is such a sweet girl. Such a fun loving girl not at all like you.

Rey: what do you mean I'm not fun and loving? Kriya turned around still in his arms putting her hands on his chest.

Kr: just kidding. And thank you rey.

Rey: for what?

Kr: for giving me such a beautiful family and for being the best husband cum boyfriend I could ever wish for.

Rey: in that case I should thank you for making my family complete and for being the best wife cum girlfriend I could ever imagine. They were having a look look hawa hawa when there was a knock on the door. They both came out of the hug when shreya came in.

Shr: can I come in?

Kr: of course come in.

Rey: kya baat hain princes?

Shr: who bhai mujhe bhabhi se kuch baat karni thi.

Rey: oke you two talk mein fresh hoke aati hoon. with that rey went while shriya went to sit on the bed.

Kr: so tell me kya baat hain?

Shr: bhabhi I wanted to say thank you.

Kr: why??

Shr: it is after a very long time that I've seen bhai so happy and I finally have someone other than bhai who I can trust and talk about everything you know including girly problems. Waise mom and sharon di bhi hain lekin sometimes it gets akward you know. With mom I can't talk about boys and stuff and sharon di isn't always there.

Kr: I get it. And if you ever need me or need to talk to me I will always be there.

Shriya hugged eachother and the same time rey came out of the bathroom and smiled seeing 2 of the 3 most important woman together (the other one is his mom of course).

rey: I feel like an out stander can I get a hug too? Both the girls came out of their hug and looked eachother than at rey:

shriya: NO.

rey: kya!!?? Now I will get my hug for shore. he ran after them while they were running around the room finally he caught them both and hugged them soo tight that they almost could't breath. And to punish them for not hugging him he tickled them while they were getting tears in their eyes of laughing and pleading him to stop. Outside their roon the elders where looking at them smiling and wishing to always keep their children this happy. Then they left.

Inside rey finally stopped. Shreya was about to leave when she turned around and said..

Shr: btw sorry for disturbing your romance.

Kriyaansh: SHREYAAA!!! Shreya ran out of the room laughing.

Kriya went to get fresh and then both went to sleep in the same position as the last time.

...

That was it guys.

I don't know when I'm updating next as soon my summer vacations will be over and I really need to concentrate. I will try to give 1 or 2 updates before that..

Don't forget to like and comment.

buddy for pm

Xx shannel

Edited by 1asya1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
me 1st
res
unres
awesum update...
Loved shriya bonding...
In nxt part want kr only n some romantic moments...
Edited by Meghna_kriyansh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
awesome
beautifully written
i luvd shreya character
muah
now next update only kr
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its awesome update yrrr i love it
Whole update was beautifulll

Btw Rohan kriya i dont understand this pls update soon
thanx For the pm dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Ek toh u update so Late ki last chapters again read kerna padta h to catch up with the story..
N den KR parts hi nahi hote..
I mean Its Kriyaansh Story na.. Toh thode unhe bhi parts dedo.. Chondi chindi scenes dekhe u leave them..
Mom.. Dad.. Maasi.. Rohan ..d3 gang.. N OFCOUSE SHREYA..
Sabke parts h.. Except Kriyaansh.. Uff.. Lets see.. Wat u bring up in next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Madhu_ArSha

Ek toh u update so Late ki last chapters again read kerna padta h to catch up with the story..
N den KR parts hi nahi hote..
I mean Its Kriyaansh Story na.. Toh thode unhe bhi parts dedo.. Chondi chindi scenes dekhe u leave them..
Mom.. Dad.. Maasi.. Rohan ..d3 gang.. N OFCOUSE SHREYA..
Sabke parts h.. Except Kriyaansh.. Uff.. Lets see.. Wat u bring up in next update...

i'm so sorry for the late update but as I said in the beginning I can only work on this in weekends. And I know that there aren't many kriyaansh scenes but I promise in the next one there will be a lot of kriyaansh.

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