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Posted: 10 years ago
eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Anjali has crossed all boundaries ... she is delusional ...
it really is sad to see how far gone she is in this game plan ...
God help her family ... and poor Jiman for being taken for a ride by this psychopath ... 😲

Waiting eagerly to see what happens next ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
creepy creepy Anjali. aisi Anjali na dekhi na suni 😳

Arnav k andar Architect chupa hua hai? 😲 Why I am having a feeling that after all this Anjali se bacho drama, he will be going to explore his this very talent. ofcourse to be with a certain Raizada 😉

I feel for Jiman. I really do. poor guy doesn't know what's coming [:<:] Kahan Hoskeri k chakkar mein pad gya.

though I know that Anjali-Khushi conversation was all serious but I couldn't stop my giggles at some points especially on Anjali's reaction. all that Hiding behind the morpankhs and I will be the man in this relationship was too funny. seriously Anjali needs help.

Oh I want to see what Arnav babua has planned!
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome...so my guess was right ..anjali is smitten by khushi
Edited by ranogill - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome..

Anjali is a lost case... She had made her own world and no amount of arguing is going to bring her back... Here khushi was belittling her and its like she didn't hear a word... and continued her future plan...

Arnav presence is a relief... He must have thought of something... Anjali farce is going to end... Loved the update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wuhooo
It is a Saturday n I can't wait to read the last part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Anjali is totally lunatic. She is beyond any possibility of even treatment, I guess.
Now the biggest showdown coming up with Jiman joining in.

What are you doing here? Give up whatever you are doing and become a full time writer.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Behena... finally I found my voice.
Am I raging mad at Creepavati? Surprisingly, I am not. In fact throughout the dramatic altercation, I sat back relaxed in my chair, thoroughly enjoying it, all I missed was a tub of popcorns.
And call me mean, I sort of cackled when Bitwa ducked and Jiman's fist cracked the wall or otherwise. 😆 Seriously Jim?

But poor Jim, my heart went out for him even in his willing suspension of disbelief. One thing I never expected was Creepavati hoisted with her own petard. What was Ms big mouth thinking really? 😆 It all made me think just how apt is your title, Disillusioned.
It also shows that Anjhalli never loved Koosie. For her it was just a madness to possess without even once considering the possibility that bitiya might be totally straight and not reciprocating her sentiments. No, she just did not give a damn to the one she supposedly "loved". Now I only fear for the prisoners who might be sharing the cell with her. Why not put her with men? 😆

Now coming to the part I read once-twice-thrice.

Bitiya - Bitwa in classic mode.

Your mine, mine yours love story is very difficult.

Chaitu, that was such a brilliantly done scene. 👏 My relaxed position strained and I forgot all about of the missing tub of popcorn, frankly had it been there, it would have slipped from my hands and fallen on ground dramatically.

I could feel my heart racing, pleading and then breaking. No, no, no, however irrational it sounds but please, bring Arnav back. 😭 I am one incorrigible romantic and I don't want to see the practicalities of their union, all I want is them together. Pileej. (Hehe, I am in no way trying to impose that, take this as you have planned it, I'll love it anyway.)

"Liar." she snarled.

Oh Behen, that was my favorite part of all. I know he is lying, the lazy oaf suffering from a sort of kleptomania.
And wait, did I tell you, oh no I didn't but I always used to refer to him as Arnav Mallik in my mind. 😆 I am not kidding, I really did.
I wish I could also know what Khushi had found out about him, what other options he had when he chose to go all Hritik Roshan of Dhoom 2. 😉
Edited by cineraria - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Taken
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Achucho! I thought all shall end well and a happier epilogue will turn up but I guess the best is saved for the last!

And coming to the update as usual lovely!! Simply Marvelous!! Wonderfully penned down!!

Anjali! My god! I thought she was at her lowest best but god! She just surprises all! Seriously you thought you would keep your innocent straight act forever? Hmm sad that it's all over! But finally man she got her place right!

Jiman you were like split personality! Before the truth after the truth! But the coping Jiman was nice!

Now coming to these two! What a war of words! That I love you was just like few words in a sentence! Hmm how are they going to become ArShi?

Cheers and last one :/ hmm counting

PS: no matter what the feelings all ready seeped in! Shall miss it :(
Edited by TwilightStar_JP - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow,i like the way arnav talked to khushi.
Edited by Nirjhoramanisha - 10 years ago

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