#3: ArHi SS: !!Eclipse!! *Chapter 18, PG 57* 09/Sept/14 - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago

Teaser


Khushi gulped when his eyes roamed over her body and finally held her gaze.


The physical need was seeping out of him and getting to her. She could only blink when he bridged the gap and brought his form close to hers.


"I love you Khushi and I am not forcing the word upon myself" He admitted the words next to her ear, making to her revisit the day she had said those words to him.


'You do not love me Arnav. You're only forcing the word upon yourself because you don't want to lose me'


He cupped her cheeks and silently beseeched her permission for he was unsure his words would convey everything he wanted to tell her.


She did not nod; she did not blink but gazed at him. She was given enough time to pull away before his lips found hers yet she did not pull away.


As his lips grazed hers, she melted against him and let the emotions rule her.


She heard his admission of love through his kiss and when he deepened it, she realised he was telling her how bad he needed her.


She needed him too and parted her lips in response.


His hand snaked around her waist and pulled her close while the other one threaded in her hair.


Her own hands reached for the lapels of his coat and when her back was pressed against a wall, she let those dainty fingers comb his hair.

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Edited by Pearl_Oyster - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
NICE TEAESR

EAGERLY WAITING FOR D UPDATE
Edited by Aisha1996 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res 😊
Unres 😃

I wanted to post my comment for chapter 15 but I guess I've missed the bus as the teaser has been posted already 😛 Not only the last chapter (chapter 15) was one of the best chapters of this SS & it was a revelation to the readers (with Abhay's true colours popping up) but wowiee! omg! I still can't believe it 😲 that chapter was dedicated to me & mom too 😲 👏 That was so sweet of u Kiran & it was such a pleasant surprise!!! 😳 And I'm also too happy with the way this Abhay's character is shaping up! This grey shade suits his character at least in this SS! I had a nagging doubt on him, on his manipulating nature when he had tried to convince Khushi's parents instead of baring his heart in front of Khushi & realise what she wanted/ whom she loved! But given the track record of Abhay in your previous Arshi stories & your fondness for him, I had brushed aside my doubts & started fanning unrealistic expectations that Abhay would be the perfect gentleman this time too & he would step aside or bow out graciously!


But it seems his mean, selfish, cunning streaks are hell bent to make their presence felt now & wipe out all doubts that one might have had once! Let's see what his next moves would be!

And whoa! Finally the whole truth of the unsavoury night in the hotel room was revealed by none other than Sheetal herself & of all persons to Khushi 😲 But it's great 😃 coz if the facts had first reached Arnav he would have found it next to impossible to convince Khushi! Good that Khushi heard it straight from the horse's / vamp's mouth here! Now I hope our dearest, kindest Devimaiyya would show Arshi the right way to mend their lives! And eeeks 👏 I'm loving the way ASR is causing all the roadblocks for Sheetal ~ she deserves it totally & much more 👏

Finally, what about Shyam? Is he too a victim of such a Sheetal like vamp or was that something else causing this MU between Shyam & Anjali? Looking forward eagerly to the answers in the coming chapters 😊

And yeah a very tempting teaser too 😛 😉

P.S.: My net has been playing hooky on me since quite a few days but finally I could edit / unres all my previous posts / comments on Eclipse 😃
Edited by Arshisarunfan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hot teaser!!!!😉
Looks like the love birds have made up!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
This will really happen??? waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome teaser
Waiting for the update
Looks likes Arnav and Khushi will be back together I guess...
Thanks for the pm😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely teaser
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice teaser... Much as Arnav neede her to believe his words... She needs to trust him ... But what about her guilt about Abhay...?
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Posted: 11 years ago
passion exploding..hot teaser..waiting for the update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice teaser. Eagerly waiting for the next update.

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