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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1
Awesome start
Loved the concept

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2
Awesome part
Loved virman meeting
Virat doesn't know who is manvi yet
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mehek ... Such a nice name
Loved the update
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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virman: do dil jo milke dhadke hai😊

*****flashback******

nxt day begins with mehendi... da day passed by with lots of hush n rush nd finally da moon rised spreading its silvery light upon the couple to b maarried, viren, who was too much engrossed with da marriage cud hardly think sumthing apart from his to b wife nd jeevika too for sum moments freed herself frm all thoughts nd was luking forward for a beautiful history, its ok wit dem since dey r soon to b married but dere was sumone else who was pissed between luv nd responsibility.. da whole day he wasted to find his bhabi ki behna, his patient but cudn't recognise her as wenever she was before him he got busy in his romantic filmy songs wit dis 21st century madhubala.. wenever he askd others abt da dulhan ki behna, every girl responded.."yes, m da dulhan ki behna" coz dey wanted to attract da most handsum bachelor in marriage.. angry, frustrated nd lost he went to da garden nd all his frustration vanished in thin air as he found madhubala trying to pick a rose but da thrones r preventing her frm doing dis nd she is murmuring to herself in frustration.. virat wit no double thoughts made his mind to help her nd da moment he saw it was a red rose he cudn't heelp his lucky stars enough.. witout wasting a single second he rushed to her nd plucked da flower for her giving her no scope to react.. he offered her da flower, she tuk da flower frowning a bit.. nd left da place wit attitude nd virat sat on da ground holding his side of heart nd thinking " beta virat ye ladki tujhe pagal banake choregi.."

in da evening all girls were busy putting mehendi nd da gents busy staring dere partners.. but dere was sumone not at all interested to put mehendi instead was jumping around for which even jeevika was not enjoying da party.. virat came to da hall nd his eyes started to scan da hall for his one n only madhubala nd dere she was jumping with excitement at da view of ice creams.. virat made his way towards her.. jeevika got a bit relieved to c virat near manvi but little did she know dat virat is still unaware of her original identity.

v-- hello miss madhubala or better say bandariya..

m(rolled her eyes towards him)-- problem kya hai huh?? mera peecha kyun karte rahte hoo?? chep kahikee..

v--(smiles like a fool as his voice chokes to find her so close to her)

m--oye muskurana band karo mere sawaloo ka jawab do.

v--mere rang mei rangnewali. pari ho tum ya padiyo ki rani mere...(manvi cuts him in btwn)

m-- oye gawaiye ye flirting sharti mere sath mat karna, main aisi waisi ladki nai hoon.. samjhe?

v--o to main kab ka samajh gaya teb hi na aapna dil har gaya(in a low voice)

m-- ji..

v--kuch nai ji.. main to bus aivaiy .. to aapne mehendi kyun nai lagai????

m--meri marzi...

v--right..

nxt day evening is da sangeet.. everyone performs nd aft much persuation frm jeevika manvi agrees to perform only in one act dat too along wit her cousins.. aft her prfmnc manvi's eye caught da view of a panipuri stall nd she rushed towards it.. virat too followed her..

m(to da panipuri seller)-- mujhe meetha wala dijiye..

v--kyun tikkha khane se darti hoon??

m(giving killer looks)--meri di ne mana kia hai barna mai kilo k kilo mirchi eh sath khalu..

v-- oh really!!!!!!!!!!!! nai kha sakti man lo na bkar bahane kyun bana rai hoo..

m-- oye chep, mujhe challenge mat karo..

v-- lo kardia.. ab?? ab kya karo gi???

m-- panipuri wale bhaisab jitne mirchi hai sab milao..(luking at virat)

v--ok lets c..

dey begun eating one by one nd finally virat surrenders as he cud torture himself no more.. manvi although tears flowing down her ayes nd cheeks turning all red doesnt stop nd wins da challenge nd leaves but retuns again ndtaps virat's shoulder who was struggling hard to ovrcum da irritations, virat luks towards her..

m-- ainda mujhe challenge mat karna, dnt dare to challenge manvi chaudhury evr again..

nd she leaves, virat smiles to dat nd suddenly da smile vapourises away nd he stand like a statue jst recalling her last words "dnt dare to challenge manvi chaudhury evr again.."..

v-- MANVI...o God maine kya kar dia..

Hello everyone, its really sweet of each one of you dat my doc bcam so popular among u.. it was a random thought but ur comments inspire me to write with great care nd affection.. its reallly strange dat whereevr i cmnt sumone or da other wud cum up asking me to update dis so for each one of ur sake here it goes...


virat stood dere for wat it seemed to b ages, he received da greatest shock of his life, he was confused as wheather to b happy dat he finally found his patient or b sad dat da first girl he hav ever started liking turned out to b manvi.. his vision got hazzy with tears accumulating in his eyes, he seemed to be short of breathe nd was unable to take a single step , it was den wen naitik nd akshara walked upto him to tease him on his latest encounter wit madhubala.. last night virat filled dem with infos abt both manvi nd madhubala, both of dem already realised dat da liking for madhubala dat virat was talking abt was actual sumthing more, he has actually fallen for her nd dey were too happy for him, it was da same morning wen virat pointed out his madhubala to dem from a distance nd now wen dey found him talking to madhubala dey cud no more stop thenselves from walking up to him.

a-- kya baat hai virat??? baat bani kya nai??

n-- uff aksara aap v na, yeha panipuri ka treat dia ja raha tha aur aap pooch rahi hai baat bani ki nahi?? jarur bani hai, akhir sada munda hai hi itna sonna...

virat remained da same without any reaction which didn't go unnoticed by naitik nd akshara nd dey shared a concern nd confused look nd finally broke da never ending silence..

n (shaking virat)-- virat, baat kya hai?? tu itna shema hua kyun hai??

a-- virat kuch bola hume tension hoo rahi hai..

n-- virat...

virat immediately hugs naitik, naitik who gets more surprised by his act hugs him back nd soothes him by rubbing his back..

a (softly)-- virat.. kya baat hai???

v-- bhabi ye nahi ho sakta.. pls kuch karo..

n-- kya nahi ho sakta??( releasing him from da hug)

virat narrates da whole incident dat took place few minutes ago revealing madhubala as manvi... naitik nd akshara remains short of words as dey realise virat's condition, jeevika's sister being a cancer patient was too much for dem to handle nd now da girl is too virat's love interest which add to make da situation more difficult. virat gets more disturb with da fact dat he made her eat such spicy foods nd was cursing himself..

da marriage passed swiftly with all da rituals taking place with great care nd throughout da ceremony virat was alert nd kept his eyes upon her... finally with all da ceremonies being over jeevika bid farewell to her family nd walk away with her new family, her heart tore into two pieces as she had to part with her mannu nd dat too now wen she is so ill..

days passed nd manvi visited jeevika on occasion of a family function jst after a week after viraka's marriage.. virat was actuallyplanning to start off her treatment vry soon.. virat had sumhow managed to overcum his feelings.

manvi came nd she filled da vadera house with her laughter nd virat once again got attracted with her charm nd da only thing he cud thnk of was to make her his for da entire life..

it was her last day at vadera house nd she was too upset, she occupied a corner of da terrace to cry her heart out, virat, whose eyes always keeps following her everywhere found himself sitting beside her in da terrace.. it was by now dey were frnds nd dere nok jhoks too had decreased..

v-- manvi...

m--(wiping her tears) tum??

v-- bhabi se door jane ka dil nai kar raha??

m(luking at him)-- pichle 1 hafte se maine yeha aane ka sochke khud ko samhala tha ab jaongi to kya dilasa dungi khud ko??

v--problem to bari hai par solution v hai??

m-- tum to aise keh rahe hoo jaise timhare paas already solution hai...

v--hai na..

m--kya??

v--tum yehi ruk jao humese k liye apne di k paas, mere paas..i mean hum sab k paas..

m--tum aisi dimag se dr kaise ban gaye???

v--kyun kya hua mere dimag ko??

m-- ab agar tum mujhe mere di k sasural mein rukne ka offer doge to aisa hi bolungi na.. tum hi batao mei aise kaise reh sakti hoon??

v-- mujhse shaadi karlo...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update...
Loved it...
Awww Virat finally knows that his madubala is Manvi...
Awww Manvi stays by Jeevika for a time...
Awww Virat ask Manvi to marry him...
Update soon...
Sorry for the late comment...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Awesome story
Loved the updates
Plz cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Nyc update dear
Waiting for d nxt
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Too good
Loved vivirman part
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
oh dear im really very happy that you are showering us with your updates.
and now about the update.
it was so good.
i just loved it.
i wish maanvi would accept to it.
you have portrayed virat's feelings very well. im impressed.
i have fallen for virman all over again.
loved all the things you wrote to the core.
aise hi achi updates dete rehna.
love you so much for giving a goood story like this
update soon dr

Edited by VIRMANVIAN - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
So sad... Feel bad for virat..
She will get well soon
Awesome update

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