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Posted: 11 years ago
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virman: do dil jo milke dhadke hai😊



part3

virat turns to see da person he needed da most at dis time, his face lits up with a genuine smile...

v--Naitik bhai aap??? u came??? aur bhabi??? aapko pata nai mujhe aapki kitni zarurat thi...

(Time to introduce da new nd important characters for my doc...

Naitik singhania nd akshara singhania da new characters u can imagine karan mehra nd hina khan as dem...

naitik is viren's best buddy from school... aft school viren tuk law clses nd he went for medical.. he too is an oncologist nd his wife akshra a gynocologists... da singhania's nd vadera's shared a healthy relation aft dere children's true frndshp.. wen virat took on medical as his subject he moved to mumbai for studies it was den naitik nd akshara who made his family dere, he stayed with dem nd received all da attention nd luv frm da sweet couple.. being viren's best frnd he was a elder brother to virat nd cared nd nourished him da same way viren did.. da cancer research hospital named aft virat's father is a joint project of dem nd dey now held da positions of best oncologists in India..)

n-- are nai aata to tera vai mujhe shuli par nai charha deta.. apni jan ki socch k aa hi gaya..

v-- par aap singapur se wapas kab aaye?? aur conference kaisa raha???

n-- aaj hi lauta aur mumbai airport par land karke hi agli flight chandigarh ki le kar aa gaye eha.. nd conferenceacha tha.. hope humare is naye treatment ko bohot jald hari jhandi milegi aur international recognisation v..

v-- reallly bhaiii??? ye sab aap k badaulat hi hua.. aapki itni mehnat lagi hai so kam to bana hi tha..

n-- nai virat isme tera contribution hi zyada hai, pechle 6 mnths to chain se soya v nai...

v-- kya bhai aap v.. ok so dono ki barabar ki hui.. both hugs each other...

a-- aur meri??? saradin shift dkar night mei jo coffee banake khilaye. uska kya??

v-- arre bhabi aap to sabse top par ho..

a-- acha.. aisa kya???

devar-bhabi hugs nd heads towards dere rums...

***flash back ends***

manvi senses a tap on her back, a smile lits up her face as she know who da person is, da one who stayed as a shadow with her throughout her complicated pregnancy nd made dis happy today possible for her..

m-- bhabi .. kaha thi aap??? ab aap ko time mila mereliye?? ye sahi nai hai??pure 6 ghante baad aeye aap, tab ot mei dkhi thi fir kaha gayi thi??

a-- manvi zara saans le logi to v bol paogi.. acha to mai apne dusre patients ko attend kar rai thi par agar pata hota meri sabse saitan patient mere intezar mei hai to time nikal k aa jati..

m-- kya matlab?? aapko laga main aapko yaad nai karungi?? aisa ho sakta hai kya???

a-- sorry.. nai ho shakta.. par ye tum kya kar rahi thi?? bed se kyun utri?? aur khirki k pass kyun khari hoo thand lag gayi to???

(aft da news of manvi's pregnancy she was shifted to chandigarh in da vadera mansion so dat she cud b taken better care of.. virat visited her every weekend as he tried his best not to give appointments on dose days... her case was way too complicated so akshara shiftd to chandigarh in one of dere frnds hospital so dat she cud b dere for manvi 24/7 as she strictly needed all time medical assistance.)

m-- bhabi aap hyper hona band karo.. nw m fine aur ye apne hi mujhse kaha tha..

a -- acha ji fine ho to uchalti kudti firogi.. meri naitik se baat hui unki conference avi half an hour mei khatam honi hai fir 1 ghante mei mumbai ki flight hai nd den savere tak aap k patidev aap k pas honge balike..

m chuckles-- kya bahbi avi jani thi kya singapore..

a-- oo to hai.. virat ko akal to hone se rahi.. yeha 6 ghante hogaye papa bane hue par nahi ek call kar paya aur nahi apni beti ko dkh paya.. peechle mahine conference rakhne ko kaha to bolta hai manvi ka khyal rakhna hai .. aur ab jab uski jarurat hai tab janab singapore mei baithe hai..

m-- bhabi.. a-- hmmm...

m-- ye kitni choti hai isse to uthaya v nai jayega.. aur socho virat k virat swarup k samne to ye aisi lagegi zaise haati k saamne cheeti..

a chuckles to m sense of humour... a-- acha manvi, ye tune ye ye kya laga rakha hai?? koi nam socha ki nai???

m-- wohi to prb hai bhabi.. humare beech tae hua tha ki agar ladka hua to nam main rakhungi aur agar ladki to virat.. ab to mai chah kar v isse nam nai de sakti...

a-- to ye baat hai.. fir to gudiya rani savere tak intezar karo naam k liye.. aise main to bohot khush ho ki neri mushkan ko behen jo mil gayi..

m-- ha bhabi kal savere mushkan ko lana mat vulna usne to avi tak dkha v nai apni behen ko, kal vrij or varun v aayenge ..

a--chal ab tu so ja virat savere tak aajaye ga..

akshara teks her to da bed nd tugs her below da blanket, kisses her forehead nd leaves for da vadera mansion..

IN SINGAPORE:

after da conference virat nd naitik rush to da airport, dey get dere flight nd land mumdai nearly 3 a.m in da mrning.. in da nxt half an hour is dere flight to chandigarh but for virat each second was passing like a year nd manvi's mail added spices to his xcitment.. he moved his hand thrugh his hair in frustration as he cudn't anyhow digest da fact dat he wud b da last one to meet manvi aft her delivary nd see his daughter as da last visitor.. virat cudnt imagine dat it cud evr happen as he was always da 1st one to see da babies in da family may it b mushkan, vrij or varun but wen it came to his own daughter it has to happen so...

with da first rays of da sun virat stepped in manvi's rum nd in no time he found himself beside her.. he cud understand how restless she was da whole night as she was sleeping clutching her ph.. waiting for his txt or call but he in all his excitement nd frustration forget to make evn a call to her.. his eyes den fell to da little angel sleeping just like her mother in da cradle beside her he movd towards da cradle nd had a luk to her , he was sure not to distrub her but cudnt help his hands wich in no time helded da little creature in his arms, smiling widely as a proud father.. virat always leg pulled manvi dat how cum a simple nd just graduate girl rcv a handsum, established nd famous husband like him.. he used to irritate her with his top achievements as a doctor but aft today can he evr tease her like dat.. no, never.. coz wat he achieved today was only passible for her.. thought virat as he bent to kiss her forehead.. but wat he recognised is dat both mother nd daughter smelled da same... v-- oh yes oh yes.. i got it.. she will b named mehek..

manvi opened her eyes with da sudden shout nd found an xcited virat...

m-- kya hua???

v-- nam mil gaya?? MEHEK...

m chuckles-- ye kaise mila..

v-- ye v tumhari meherbani se...

m-- matlab???

v-- manvi she smells just like u... isiliye.. Mehek.. tumhari mehek, humari pyar ki mehek...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Arey wah super update
Mehek nyc name...
Loved it
Update d nxt part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice name mehek
i liked the whole part
you exxpressed both's feeling beautifully
loved the bond of akshara and maanvi
and haathi k haath main cheeti part was nice
loved it to the core meera
keep rocking
update soon my jaan

Edited by VIRMANVIAN - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Lovely n sweet update
Loved manvi n.akshara conv.
N babys name is too cute
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
I loved update alot..
Sweet and simple name mehek
Beautifully written. . ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE MEERA. LOVED IT. LOVED HOW U EXPRESS VIRMAN FEELINGS. AKSHARA AND MANVI BONDING IS SO NYC. MANVI IS REALLY CUTE ,FUNNY AND FULL OF MUSTI . HER SAYING THIS SENTENCE HAATHI KE HATH ME CHEETI IS SO FUNNY AND NYC. LOVED VIRAT FEELINGS VERY MUCH. HOW HE EXPRESS HIS FIRST MEETING AFTER SEEING HER DAUGHTER. AWESOME NAME MEHEK MANVI KI MEHEK IS SO NYC. WAITING 4 THE NEXT PART . UPDATE NEXT PART SOON DEAR. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Awesome update...
Loved it...
Nice flashback...
Loved how Virat was soo happy...
Awww Mehek is really a nice name...
Loved the part..
It was really sweet..
Update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: NIVILOV

i already wrote on my top of post that this was not my story n ya it's frm old tvc one of my best story by d way tx 4 coment sivali



oh is it? thanks for clearing confusion..actually i didnt read that note of yours 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Awesome update.
Loved it.
virmans emotions r beautifully portrayed.
Loves manvi cuteness and her funny nature.
Virat is very eager to meet her daughter.
Meeting is heart touching.
Name suggested by virat is awesome mehek nyc name
loved the whole update.
Update soon.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsm update dear. .
Love name mahak...n the way u elaborate it...
Flashback part was really sweet. .
Love akshra..naitik n virat bonding. ..
At present love akshra n manvi part. .
Very beautifully u expressed virat's excitement n his restlessness. .
Outstanding update dear. .Keep rocking
Try to update soon dear. .

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