new story on arsu- meeting of two-souls part 24 page 58, pr- pg 59 new

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shavii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

thank u guys...

small preview coming up 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

The first part total Bhagam bhag Subhi running fro Arjun and Arjun cchasing her and protecting her.

The next part was about the night, Arjun dialogue when Subhadra knew nothing about the first night, ki main tumhe sikha deta hoon... I was laughing, but I loved the cute nok-jhok between both of them.

The third part, disclosing all the secrets and now I am waiting for the next part.

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luv_sakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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@shavii:

WOW!!👏 That was some long update you gave us there!😉..Took me so long to read, but it was all worth it!!👏..Nice Detailing..the Arjun & Subhi Nok Jhok..running away from another..the SR😳😳..were all so Beautifully written!👏👏👏..And the last part on the secret..i thought Arjun will reveal it.but he seems to be getting Playful with Subhi here..😳😉..waiting to find out what happens next!😃😊

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shavii

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Posted: 11 years ago

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the horse was very naughty and was very fast tooo and arjun had to put his had around her to protect much to her she says mein swayam ki raksha karsakti hoon

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proteeti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Very Sweet Range Of Updates !! I'm Really Eager To Know Subhadra's Answer !!

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shavii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: nuckts
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unres
finally i am able to post
you know i was trying since when to post the comment,even tried to pm you but it was not working out!
ye me first!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🥳
I LOVED YOUR OS !!!!!!!!!!!!😊
wow arjun is so naughty jo aisi shart rakhi😉
and yes you posted a good message about abused victims that they are not impure but if their heart is pure then purity of body doesn't matter👍🏼
wow ek stri ne arjun ko bachaya *whistles*😉😆😳
awwe looking love of your life sleeping like that 😳
arjun is really having fun while teasing her😉 socho jo ladki arjun ko bacha sakti hai usse jab pata chalega ki he was playing ariund to wo uska kya haal karegi?😉😆
you can make one part that when she realizes that this is arjun tab wo usse thodi der punishment deti hai like you know not letting her come near her something like that😉
loved the os
please do continue soon😊

first of an sweet thanks because of ur comments with long sentences🤗 with adding colors😊 thank for loving it
dheere bolo wo to arjun toda subhi mein busy ta... to isliye .. btw always an wife comes to raksha when an hubby needs her 😊

thanks dear

arjun is naughty madhav ka asar hain upar se subhi saath mein hain to use naughty to hona hi hain😉
thank dear i wanted to give message... lord gave it long back but time to time some one is needed to put light on it
i wish atleast it reach some😊
subhi to arjun ko chodne wali nahi..😉😉 going to trouble him for sure 😉 wo to realize jald hi hoga w bhi my style of dhamaka😉😉😉

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shavii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: RiniRocks
Wow! Three updates and all at once? Loved all the three parts. Was waiting like hell ki Arjun sachchai bataye, but he didn't! 😆 Kab tak wait karna padega?? LOL. Keep up the good work. And thanks for the PM.

hehe u have to wait little more but for sure some interesting twist is heading 😉😆😆

waiting will be over soon next set of updates are on the way in few more minutes

thank u

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shavii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: maharjunfan
3 updates together!! Lottery!! Loved them..👏👏 pls update soon..very eager to know the next part😊😊

thank u...

updates are on the way

thanks for commenting😊😊😊

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shavii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: arjuna27
thanks for that story. it was make me so happy cause many topic about arjun and drupadi not arjun and subhadra... so i hope u can continue this story and maybe add more english translation cause i dont know hindi language. waiting ur update as soon as possible 😊

@bold
same thought made me write this 😊😊😊

i will try to extend till 25 parts as that story which i planned to write was not more than 10 parts.. but seeing number increase in replies i decided to write more...

i have started typing mostly in english now... it is more of dwapar yug so i had to write in english and i realized soon that many want translationg so i started doing will try to make it mostly English .

it is on the way

thanks for commenting 😊

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shavii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: subhikrish
oh oh wat all i ve been missing????? wat a lot of twists and turns... wen will arjun say d truth yaar... u r playin wid an innocent girls life😉

he will say but with twist 😉😉😉

he is not playing he is teasing his wife😉😉😉

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