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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_sakshi

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The Preview seems like we some some Cute Romance & Loads of fun coming up!😉😳😆..Looking forward to reading it at length..😃..do update soon!😊


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thanks for all the comments
this is purely written as an entertaining purpose.😊 this is my own idea of presenting arsu love story.
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He realizes she was indirectly challenging him. He says my hands are not paining as I am good dhanudari and can hold this dhanush for hours... There is no one who can challenge me in this... and smiles she sees him and says nope u r not the only one... there is another person who can do this he can hold his dhanush for days also... he ask oh really who is that who can challenge me? She turns and says rajkumar arjun, agar aap unse ladte to haar jate jaroor..(she says if he fight with rajkumar arjun for sure he will be defeated) he looks at her and smiles and try to talk but again she says.. lekin wo kud ki shmararthya (skill) ke bare mein kabhi kud hi prashansa(boast) nahi karte(he basically never boast of his owns kills)... he ask kya tum usse prem karti hoo(do u love him?) she sees him sadly and keep quite.. but soon the rain stops.. she says lagta hain aap apna gandheev koo niche karsakte hain baarish ruk gaya hain(looks like he can move ur bow as rain has stopped).. aap apni haath takleef dene se mukt hain(u r relief from stressing your hand)... he leaves the gandheev and makes it down.. he says us taraf prasthan karein, (shall we start moving that way?)surya astr hone pehle hamein ye jungle ko paar karna hoga(before the sunset we need to cross the jungle).. kyunki yahan bahut saare jaan leva jaanwar hain(because there is lots of man eating animals around here). she sees him and ask dar to nahi lagrah hian un janwaaron se.(she ask are u afraid of that man eating animals?). he sees her... he says nahi too hamein nahi lagta dhar kahin aapko to nahi dar lagraha haina(he says no way I am not afraid , but hope u r not afraid )... she says mein kyun darrongi? Meri saath meri brata hain jo hamesaa meri rakksha kareinge...(she says why would I be afraid , my brother is always with me who always protect me) shyad aapko nahi pata jab kalyawan ne hum par hamla kiya rajkummar arjun ne teeron se kalyavan se muje bachaya aur meri brata ne usse bina hathyaar uthaya maardiya... suna hi hoga aapne...( she says u may not know when kailvan attacked me , rajkumar arjun saved me with his arrows poking on kaliyavan. My brother without using any weapon he killed kaliyavan) he thinks ye aise kyun baat kar rahi hain.. aise lagta hain.. mujse jagadne ki irade mein hain... par subadhra hum bhi tumse kam nahi... tumhari hi mooh se hum sach nikalvakar rahenge... vadha hain kudse... (he thinks why she is talking with me like that? Has she got intention to start fight with me? But subhi I am not less too I will make sure I will make u speak the truth)

He says bateein to hum chalte huye bhi karsakte haina chalein us or.. she ask aapko rasta kaise pata? He says sanyasi hoon pata chal hi jata hain(he says we can talk while walking also.. let us start going that way she ask how come he know the way? He says I am an sanyasi so know the way )... they walk... and suddenly she slips and he holds her... his long beard hair falls on her face making her sneeze... she says aap ye baalon ko hathayiye.. hamri mooh par girne se hamein cheekin arahi hain... aap ise kat kyun nahi lete(she says him to move that long hair and beard as it make her get sneeze , she then ask why he doesn't cut it off.. ?)... he ask kyun tuje pasand nahi hain isliye? Pyaar to nahi hoga humse.(he ask she did not like it? Have u fallen for me kya?). she says nahi too bus si roop mein aap bahut daravani lagrahe hain(she says u look scary in this avatar)... bilkul wo kaliyavan ki tarah... he asked(he ask like kaliyavan?).. she sees him... and walks off.. he smiles and sees his beard and hair and says if I remove this she will know my vastavik roop(real face) and will come to know who I am... I have to maintain this till I reach ip. Hey madhav kis sangat mein daldete hain aap...(hey madhav what trouble paradise u put me in)

They keep walking and he offer fruits plucking from trees she refuses and he ties it in cloth and carries away... she was all sad.. Unknowingly tears were dropping in her cheeks... he seeing it ask why she was crying? she says she left her home so she was crying... he ask if u r going to miss them from now how u will manage rest of ur life as my house is very far from here...she sees him.. and turns again.. he then says we will take rest u look tired.. She refuses... . but he tells they need to take rest as this place look safer... she says it doesn't look... thinking of something else... as sun was coming down...

Suddenly she felt all alone... she looked at him and thinks what was happening with her an sudden unexpected marriage... She did not want to marry duri but she wanted to marry arjun but today she was married to someone else an unknown how come her brothers agreed for it... balram brata she can understand but what about her brata Krishna who always knew her loved her... pampered her.. but today... he did not understand that she loved arjun not someone else.. why the destiny played such cruel game with her... he suddenly ask achha ye sunavo... tum rajkumar arjun ke bare mein kehrahi ti.. kya wo mujse adheek balsaali hain kya mujse bhi behtar dhanudarri hain?(hey says tell me , u were telling about rajkumar arjun, is he is more stronger than me? Is he talented than me in archery?) She turns and says is mein koi sandek? (do u have any doubt in it?) He ask tho kya wo teri brata Krishna se bhi adheek ... (he ask is he is more talented than ur brother but she stops) before he could complete she says ye sab hamein nahi pata na janna... bus itna pata hain.. ki bahut badi buddimaan hain(she says I don't know all this nor I want to, I just know that he is very brainy)... arjun was feeling happy ... bus meri nazeeb mein nahi hain in her inner voice... and with that they end up seeing an place which was safer as few trees were not there and place was clear... he says hum yahan aaj raat keliye visraam karenge.. tum bhi bahut taki huyi lag rahi hoo(tonight we have to take shelter here and u too look tired).. kal subh hoti hi hum us orr prastaan karenge(tom morning we will start our journey moving that way)... aaj raat hamein yahi bitana hoga(tonight we have to spend here)... she cdnt refuse as her legs were in bad pain... as she has not walked so much before.. she agrees.. he then to guide themselves from any animals, he makes an ban's checked door kind which was tall and would prevent any animal from entering.. . he told her to take rest and he will take care of her whole night... she got scad... she ask aapko neend nahi ata? He smiles saying he can stay awake.. as he has habit... suddenly she rem arjun ...

So finally situation was subhi was lost in arjun thought while arjun himself was front of him in disguise

So what is going to happen next? What will happen when arjun tries to consummate the marriage.. what will subhi do?

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Edited by shavii - 11 years ago
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Subhi was sleeping... but at midnight she woke up due to hunger and rem him offering fruit s and she refused to eat... and looked sadly and she can't go out as he was made the arrows gate... she looked around to see him walking around she then looks around and sees fruits bundle kept next to her just few inches away wrapped in clothes.. she slowly moves and takes the fruits and pretending to sleep on other side eats the fruits but she did not notice as arjun has witness the scene already and was smiling.. but pretended not to see...

Next day morning she was awake when she saw him no were around... she got weird thought of running away... and saw the arrow were removed so he must be not far but she can run before he comes.. she starts to run around.. leaving the things she was running fast when suddenly she stopped as she happened to see some jaanwar (animal)in front of her... she was shocked... she did not know what to do.. Stood still shivering... sweating.. and tried to move when the jaanwar came near to attack her suddenly an arrow was shot making the jaanwar thrown away in opposite direction.. she faints in and he comes and rushes and hold her calling subadhra...he carries her in his arms... he lays her near the river side and take water and spray on her and she wakes up and sees him... he ask what she was doing when he ask her not to go that side? She says lie, she came searching him... but he says but why u were running when u came for searching me? It did not look like u were searching me but u were running away from me. She tries to cover up... and he pretend to agree on it.. then taking the things... he says chalo hamein ye jagah aaj hi cross karna hain... and they go.. he then tells her not to go without his knowledge as it was katra(danger) and more than it he was her husband now... she becomes sad.. but she know her faith has decided she was tied up with him but something inside her was not able to accept him as she was in love with someone else already...

They walk away few more miles... and they reach way... and near an river which they were needed to cross to go to other side... they crossed it when arjun made way using his arrow... shocking her and just to tease her a bit asked whether arjun will be able to do such thing? She says she has no idea but she knew he was an best gandheev dari.. he smiles and they walk away... and reaches an place... where he decide to stay for few days before they travel next as he will buy horse for her and for that he need to go inside the any nearby place and he cannot leave subadhra alone... so decide to stay in that safer place. As he learnt of some village nearby. He will be able to purchase an horse without anybody knowledge of him being arjun also know the places situation... so he decide to stay little away from that place in the edge and builds an small hut.. subhadhra to helps him... seeing him working alone she goes and helps telling her brother has thought her to help others... he smiles.. thinking how cute... and ask what else ur brother has thought u ... they end up spending whole day constructing the house which was small and he says he will bring necessary food for them for tonight and give her his personal knife for her protection and she get into doubt seeing the knife remembering the scene where arjun thrown the knife and collected the sari... but thinks knife hain many can have... same kind.. he goes of... to collect food ...

Night comes.. he enters to give her food. She was lost sitting in thought when he sit down and tries to touch her to bring her she ask ye aap kya kar rahe hain(what are u doing?)? Aap hamein choone ki himmat kaise ki?(how dare u try to touch me?) He says what u mean how can I touch? Ofcourse I can I am ur hubby... btw first I tried to call u but when u were busy in ur thought I had to shake u up... after all I brought food for us... and show her some fruits. She sees him.. she says fine but don't u dare touch me.. he ask why? I am ur hubby now we r married don't forget.. She says I have not forgotten anything but that doesn't mean u can cross ur limits... he says what u mean by limit and hubby doesn't have any limit... he has all right over his wife... She says no... meri brata kehte hain... that marriage doesn't give right to cross ur limit but to respect each other feeling too.. Respecting is first... he thinks phirse brata Krishna... she too love her brother blindly... such an lucky brother he is... he says what else ur brother told u... did he not tell u to respect ur hubby and not to run away without telling him? She stares him.. he says I know yesterday u tried to run away from me eyesight achha hua I heard u otherwise u would have fallen prey for that animal... who was in such hunger seeing u... she says nahi I was not trying to run away... he says did u r brother teach u to lie also.. did he not tell u that saying lie to ur hubby is wrong... all smiling teasing way... she sees him saying meri brata ki kilaaf mein kuch nahi sunsakti...samjay aap... aap unhein nahi jaante...(I can't hear anything against my brother and u don't know anything about him) if u try to hurt me he won't spare you... he says really... if that was so true why he did not fight with me and win me? Why he let u marry me? She was shocked with this question and she knew it was right why her brother did not fight and win him and stop the marriage? Was any other reason as she knew her brother has got more than one meaning with his sayings...

She sees him saying he was tied up with his vachans.(words) So he did not fight with u... teek hain wo nahi lad sakte te par tum jis insaan ki prassansha kar rahi ho usse to ladva sakte haina(he says fine he could not fight with me but he could have made the person fight with me whom you keep praising?)... she see him questioning he says are aise kya dekrahi hoo mein rajkumar arjun ki baat kar raha hoon... (why u r looking at me like that? I am talking about rajkumar arjun) jiski taareef tum karte huye takti nahi hoo(whom u don't stop showering praises )... smile teasingly. She says meri brata ki har kaarya mein ek arth nahi hota (she says my brother deeds doesn't have single meaning)... she says agar wo chate hain ki meri shaadi aap se hona hain isliye karwadiya... shayd koi wajah hogi.. ya phir kisi sazzish mein phas gaye honge(she says it was that we are destined to get married so he let it happened, who know he would have been fallen prey in some one plan)... he think saziish mein wo nahi mein phas chukka hoon.. madhav... aapne muje ye kaise staan par kada kardiya(he think.. I have been framed in the plan madhav where u have made me get into?)... mein kaise kahoon sach usse?(how will I tell truth to her?) Mein usse kaise sach pata lagvoon ki wo mujse pyaar karti hain ya nahi.(how will I find whether she loves me or not?) kya usne muje is roop mein sweekar kar liya hain?(has she accepted me in this form?) Kya usne muje pati ke roop mein sweekar kar liya apni kismet maankar?(has she accepted me as her hubby thinking as her faith?) Yadi aise hota to wo baagne ki koshish nahi karti(if that was truth why she tried to run away?)... muje pata lagana hoga ki usko mein yanii arjun pasand hain ki nahi pyaar karti bhi ki nahi... aise na hoo wo duriyodonan se shaadi nahi karni ti isliye madhav ye se ye kehdiya ki wo arjun se pyaar karti hain taaki shaadi ko rok payegi... muje pata lagana padega.. .(I need to find out what is truth? Does she loves me or not mean does she loves arjun or not? Is that she did not want to marry duri so she told madhav that she loves arjun to stop the wedding with him?)(I need to find it)

He says achha bateein to hum baad mein karenge ab muje bhook lagi hain... kana kalein..(he says fine let us eat something I am hungry) she then goes to bring the leaf to place the fruits... he says ab hum yahan par 2 aur din rukna padega... she sees him.. he says raasta(journey) bahut lamba (long)aur katin hoga (very difficult)isliye muje ek godhe ko kareedna padega (I need to buy an horse)... she says uski koi avashyata nahi hain mein kud chal sakti hoon..(she says it is not needed she can walk by herself) he smile and says meine kab kaha mein aapkeliye godhe kareedne wala hoon mein kud keliye kareedne wala hoon tum aram se chalkar asakti hoo...(he says when did I tell u that I am going to buy horse for u, I am buying it for myself , u can walk happily ) he eats... saying kavo kavo... kane ke baad bahut adheek baatein karsakti hoon aise meri brata vikordar kehte hain(he says eat , eat nicely , my brother vikordar says we can talk much more after eating) she sees him and ask brata bhi hain aapko(do u have brother?)... He realizes and says haan, kyun sirf teri paas brata hosakta hain meri nahi... (he says why not? When u have one why not I have?)she give an anger look and continue to eat saying haan hosakta hain.. sab ka hosakta hain...(yes everyone can have brother) she says muje bahut neend arahi hain mein vishram karne jari hoon ..(she says I am feeling sleepy going to sleep) when he hold her hand shocking her... she turns and says meri haath chod dijiye.(leave my hand). he says agar mein haath ko chod ne se inkaar kiya too(what if I refuse to leave ur hand ?)

Subhi was in total shock.. . she stare at him trying to free her hand... she ask ye aap kya kar rahi hain.. meine aapse kaha muje choone ki koshish mat karna...(what are u doing? I told u not to touch me nor try for it) trying to pulls her hands back he says kyun nahi choosakte hum aapki pati hain. (he says why not I am ur hubby)She says pati hone se chune ki adhikar nahi miljata aapko...(she says just because u r my hubby u have not got rights to touch me) he says kyun nahi ? (he ask why not?) and pulls her near him and their eyes meet... something happen not less than current passing in their tender aatma... when huge thunder stuck(total dramatic)she get scad shouting brata Krishna... Arjun sees her.. he think kitna pyaar karti hoo apni brata se har bar apni brata ka hi naam leti hain... (he says how much she lvoes her brother that she just take his name all time) when huge down fall starts she says baarish...(rain). Turning to see outside.. . abhi hona ta baarish... thinking mein ab kaise yahan se baagh javoongi? (she think rain have to happen now ? how can I plan to run away?)

He taking this an opportunity tries to hug her when she pushes him aside saying meine kaha mujse door rahi hain he ask kyun rahe aap se door?(she says I told u to stay away he ask why shd I stay away?) Hum aapki pati hain(I am ur hubby)... aur aaj hamari suhaag raat hain(today is our first night)... manta hoon dusra raat hain par sahi mahinon mein aaj hi to hamari suhaag raat hain to hum aapse dooor kaise rahein(he says I agree it is our second night but actually it is our proper first night how can I stay away from you?) she was like suhaag raat... Woo wo kya hota hain(what is that she ask) (she ask it in such innocent way pretending ofcourse to avoid him) he was like oh no she asked me what it was? Wait I know she is pretending after all madhav ki sister hain.. he says koi baat nahi hum seeka denge...(no problem I will teach u ) avo (come here)... she says stay away... don't u dare try to come close to me.. I won't spare u... as if now u r going to spare me when u know the truth... in mind.. jayiye bahar(go out)... she says.. he says nahi javoonga(I won't go).. kya kar lenge aap(what u will do?)... she was like mein mein.. take the knife and shows him... muje apna raksha karna ati hain(I can protect myself)... he laugh saying wo to hamein kal hi pata chalgaya ta(he says that I came to know yesterday itself).. she give him angry stares.. he suddenly remove his uthariya(stole) and throws and take away the knife shocking her he says ab kaise raksha karlenge kud ka.. boliye meri maa ki kulvadhu...(he says now tell me how u will protect yourself my mother's daughter inlaw?) she was taken back,,

She was seeing him in shock while he end up asking more shocking question... kahin isliye to hamein kareeb ane se rokrahiye kyunki aap ki maan mein koi aur hain(he ask u have someone else in your heart is that reason u r stopping me from nearing u?)... kahin woo wo hastinapur ki rajkumar duriyodanan to nahi? Jinki shaadi aapse hone ka tai taa(he ask whether it is rajkumar duri with whom u were supposed to get married?)... she says nahi... he says to meri kareeb aane par aapki aitraaz kyun hum to saat pehron ki saat vachon se bandhe hain(then what is need of u to stop me from coming near me? We are bounded with 7 promises)... he says she sees him... rem the scenario of them getting married... aise to nahi ki aap kisi aur se pyaar karte hoo.(he again ask is that reason u r in love with someone else?). she refuses saying nahi aise kuch nahi(she says nothing like that) he says joot bolrahe hain aap aapki chere pr saaf dikayi deraha hain(he says she was lying and he can read it in her face).. aap joot bolrahe hain... she says nahi bolrahe hain hum jooot.. he says joot kabhi chupta nahi.. saad dikayi deta hain chere... (lie can be seen clearly in face)par... she sees him who was smiling... kahin hain koun hain wo insaan.(tell me who is he?). she says hum ne aap se pehle bhi kaha hum kisi se pyaar nahi karte...(I told u before I don't love anybody) agar pyaar karte bhi tii ab nahi (if I was also now I don't).. he says to aap aapne aap ko humse door nahi raksakte.(then u can't keep urself away from me). and smiles.. she was shocked.. . when he take her hand to kiss her fingers she pulls her back saying ye mein nahi karsakti.(I can't do this). he ask kyun nahi... kyunki hum ... kyunki aap kya... she says shouting kyunki mein rajkumar arjun se prem karti hoon in an moment of sec unknowingly and realize she has blurt the truth.. he was happy he says rajkumar arjun hum... (she at moments end ups shouting she loves rajkumar arjun)

What is going to happen keep guessing will he say the truth? will they consummate their marriage?


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Edited by shavii - 11 years ago
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He was overwhelmed as he wanted to hear the truth and he heard it he was smiling he open his mouth rajkumar arjun hum, she says muje maaf kardjiye(forgive me)... shayd muje ye sab nahi kehna chahiye ta(I should not have told u all this)... and break down crying...he was like why she is crying she will smile when I tell the truth.. she says hum aapse maafi maangte hain(I am asking forgiveness from u)... hum aab aapki patni hain(I am ur wife).. ye baat hamein smaran hain(I remember this)... aur jo kuch bhi kaha... wo satya hain par ye bhi satya hain hum aapki patni banchuke hain(whatever I said is truth but there is also another truth which is that I am your wife)... hamein waqt chaiye beete baaaton ko bhool jane mein(I need time to forget the past)... he was shocked... he was like omg.. he says nahi tum.. hamein.. she says muje smaran hain mein aapki patni hoon parantu muje kuch samay ki avaishkata hain,(he says I am, but she says I know I am your wife and I need time ) mein samaj sakti hoon aap meri pati hain, aapse meri shaadi hua hain... parantu... mein ye baat sweekar karne ke hetu waqt ki jaroorat hain(I know, I am your wife but to accept it I will need some more time)... arjun was stunned thinking madhav ye kya horaha hain(madhav what is happening?)... aapne phirse muje duvida mein daal kyun dete hoo ab mein kya karoon(u would me in dilemma what shall I do now?)... sach batadoon parantu... subhi says muje maaf kardijiye ga(what if I say truth to subhi will she forgive me?)... parantu ye bhi satya hain ki aap ne mujse shaadi kyun ki mein nahi jaanti but ye shaadi ek sazish ti itna jaroor jaanti hoon... (I don't know why u married me but I know this wedding was an plan of yours)he was like madhav aapki kiye huye saazish ko meri samjti thi hain... mera sirf itna kasoor ta meine aapki saazish mein saaath diya... aap muje duvida mein baar baar dal kyun dete hoo? (madhav she thinks the plan was made by me but truth is you made it. My only fault was i supported in your plan)

He couldn't see her crying more... he says tum virshram karo mein bahar chala jata hoon(he says u take rest I wil go outside)confusing subhi too.. she says bahar to baarish hain(she says but it is raining outside) he says uska chinta mat karna... mein kud ka suraksh karsakta hoon(he says u need not worry about it I can protect myself) and goes.. Closing the door.. which was made of dried hays... combined with woods.. it was his luck that rain stopped(lagta hain indra dev apni bte ko kasht (trouble)nahi dena chate hain) he start to walk and roam around that place... subhi was also sad... inside.. Thinking what will be her hubby thinking of her? She should have not opened her mouth but why she did that? What made her confess the truth.. why she couldn't stop her from telling truth the person whom she is married... when she met his eyes with hers something happened something similar what was that she was not able to understand...

Arjun was like ye rassi se adeek lamba keech ta jara hain(he think it is dragging more than an rope length) I want to tell the truth but matter is getting worsen day by day... on tom morning I will tell the truth but what if she get angry on me, no she won't but he smiles I can play with her some time teasing her around... aur mere bare mein kya kya sochti hain ye bhi jaansakta hoon (I can also findout what she thinks about me)... this will be an better time... And smiles.. aur jab ip pounchenge(when we will reachindraprastav) I will tell her in that time I got 2-3 gaps where I can talk to her and know her better... he smiles.. whole night she cdnt sleep nor him she was sitting inside the hut and crying and he was outside protecting with no sleep. She was all in thoughts thinking what she was doing was right? Was she was betraying her husband which her destiny has chosen? What about her love for rajkumar arjun? Why no one understood it? Not even arjun? He may be did not see the love for him... in her eyes? But what if he had come would have married to her ? after all she was supposed to be married to dury his cousin brother, in all that he was married to draupadi already , whom he won in swamyar and brata Krishna told her about how much draupadi was fond of him.. and no other rani was allowed in indraprastr wo what if he had married her? Would have loved her or may be not that is the reason she was married to someone else.. even brata Krishna stopped it, it means arjun and she was not meant to be together and cries... but what about her love which was in her heart which had one name arjun.. whom she was in love and whom cannot be her as she was married.. the harsh truth made her heart get broken into piece again and again...

The night flew and the sun rises he enters the hut sees her leaning over the bunch of hay.. she was in sitting and sleeping holding the cloth pouch which she carried with her... he felt more in love with her.. she looked soo beautiful while sleeping also... she looked soo innocent in time he also figured that she was all in tears as her dried tears appeared n her face ..Making her kajal move from her eyes... he smiles thinking when she will know the truth he would make sure she doesn't get water let out from her eyes.. in name of tears... he promised to himself he will not let her cry any further... he will protect her from the tears... if it falls out from that eyes he will take it away before it reaches her cheeks.. he did not have mnd to wake her up but he did not want to leave her alone and go for bath... so he decide to wake her up he called her but she was in deep slumber when he sat down placed his gandeev without making noise and he called subadhra ... she says rajkumar arjun... he smiled thinking even in sleep she was taking his name... and he was not able to tell the truth... he says hum raaj kumaar arjun... nahi bulki hum aapki pati hain(I am not rajkumar arjun but I am your husband).. when she says kounsa pati? Hamari shaadi nahi huyi hain(she ask whose husband?i am not even married)... he says neend se jagayiye subadhra .. aap yahan hain apni pati ke saath(open your eyes , u r with your hubby) she open her eyes and get shocked.. she says aap... she realizes where she was and says hamein maaf kardijiye hum jyader deer tak nidra mein te(she says forgive me I overslept).. he says koi baat nahi... chalo nahane chalo subh hogayai hain(he says it ok we need to do our morning routine )... she realize and sees him.. he says fikar mat karna... meri paas meri gandheev hain meri raksha hethu(he says don't worry I have my gandheev to protect me)... shocking her and he goes smiling...

She says hum yahan kaise nasakte hain? (she ask who can we bath here?)Seeing around all open as she had her own place in palace and it was different here... how she will bath in such a much open space when he realize he says adaaadt daldiye(start practicing)... she sees him.. aapko hamare saath jeevan mein age badna hain(u need to move on with life with me)... aur hum rajmahaal ki suvida to nahi desakte(I can't give you rajmahal facilities)... she then says muje smaran hain yaad dilane ki jaroroat nahi hain(I rem , don't keep reminding me)... but still did not know how she will manage but rem the scene where arjun saved her ... jumping inside the water... he ask kya hua... smiling knowing what she would be thinking.. she turns and says aap yahan hain to mein kaise nhavoongi? (when u are here how can I take bath?) He says to ye baat hain... he used his ghandeev and made arrows like wall near the water flow and says ab to aitraaz nahi na(now u don't have any problem right).. he then says hum wahan baite honge nahane ke baad(he says he will be waiting there after bathing)... and shows the place and goes for his bath... He think what an wonderful journey... where the situation has made him to put arrow blocks in between them... otherwise.. she blushes... he did not understand when he did became such romantic... he offer prayer and bath and comes out... changing and goes to sit down but seeing apple tree he goes to pluck. First he hit with arrow and when apples fell down he places his gandheev and starts to pluck apples when suddenly he felt something.. and when he sees some horrible animal human creature and they have fight when... that creature hit arjun and make him fall and it attacks arjun... arjun was hurt.. his gandheev was faar away.. when creature was about to bite arjun suddenly it got it by gandheev s arrow.. Making the creature move away from arjun. he was shocked to see subhi was the one hit it.. when the creature raise to attack subhi she hit with more arrow making it fall...shocking arjun... seeing the perfection..

Next arjun subhi talk while subhi applies medicine saying her brata thought her .. he ask on archery when she says her brata thought her... he says achha karleti hoon she says but not more than.. raaj kumara r... but stop herself from saying.. Saying her brata himself told he is best.. arjun was smiling..and later they eat fruits. She says aap aram karlijiye(rest).. when he says he is fine... they need to get horse and move on to their home.. they go the place inside the gaav(village) to get horse... he says cover urself and cover her up.. with his stole... saying he doesn't want to invite unwanted robbers... and they walk... and when he was busy buying horse...she turns around.. and seeing flute been sold she was seeing and get one... as it will remind of her brother when such talks arise and he challenges her... as she says no one can play flute better than her brother nor no one can shoot arrow better than arjun in flow and she get into trouble and he end up challenging her and it shocks her as eh decide to fight with arjun... she too agree saying... he will eb defeated... he says if he is defeated he will give her away to arjun shocking her...

The conversation start when subhi says no one can play flute better than her brother..

Arjun: wakiyi aise hain? She says haan meri brata ke alawa ko aur achha nahi bacha sakte hain(she says no one can play flute better than her brother)... he says agar meine bajaliya too(what if I play he says) she says aise hohi nahi sakta(she says it can't happen)... Baaki ka to pata nahi rem arjun playing veena.. par ye bansuri sirf meri brata hi sabse ache bajate hain(she says other instruments I may not know but yes for sure flute can only played best by my brother )... aur unko isi wajese log muralidar bhi kehte hain.. murli bajate haina.(she says so only he is called muralidar as he plays it). Smiling... he says... waise ye batavo... meine suna hain ki tumhara brata shree ne 16108 raaniyon se shaadi kiya hain.(he says btw I have heard ur brother married 1600108 queens). kya sach hain(is that truth?) she sees him and says haan.. he ask ye kaise sambhav hain? Kyunki meine suna hain(he ask how it is possible? Because I ).. she says cutting him in middle kyunki meri brata unlog ki jaan bachana ke hethu vivah kiya ta(my brother married them to save their life).. aapko nahi pata hain us rakshahk narakasur ne 16100 ladkiyonaur aurotan ko apne kabo mein raka aur unke saath buri vevahaar kiya(she says u don't know , devil narakasur captured 16100 womens and spoiled their life )... aur meri brata shri Krishna and meri bhabhi satyabama ne jagar unse yudh kiya aur unko maarkar us 16100 peedit aurothon ko rescue/bachaya(my brother and his wife satyabhama went and fought with him and defeated him he rescued all of them from him) ... aur jab unhone jaanlene chale gaye.. brata ne unse poocha wo jaan kyun lerahe hain to unhone kaha ab unhein koun apnayaega kyunki ab wo apni pavitra ko chuke hain tab brata ne ye kaha... pavitr man ki hoti hain shareer ke adhik and wo maan se pavitr hi hain...(when they were about to take their life he asked why they were going to take their lifes? They told him that they have become impure and nor their family nor anyone would accept them so it is better they kill themselves) aur logon ne poocha koun manega koun unhein sab janne ke bawajoot vivaah karega?(they even asked who will marry them after knowing they were been spoiled by the devil?) To brata ne kaha ki wo swayam sabse vivah karenge... aur vivah karliya.( then my brother told them all purity is related to heart not with body and he will marry them and married all of them). he says adbhoot(wonderful).. hain tere brata ... unladkiyon se byaah karliya jinki saath bura hua hain(he is awesome married the persons who were spoiled by the devil).. she says brata kehte hain.. un ladkiyon ki galti nahi ti aur aise logon ko pyaar ki bahut jyada avashyakata hain.. aur aise ladkiyon jeene ka pura adhikar hain(my brothers says , in all that the girls were at no fault and they need more love and care, they have full rights to live their life)... aur inlogon se vivah karke meri brata ne sab ko ek nahi jeevan hi dediya(she says marrying them my brother has given them all new life )... aur pyaar(love) he ask.. she says wo to sabse karte hain(she says her brother love all of them)... meri brata kehte hain pyaar baatne se badta hain kaam nahi hota... pyaar to wo hain jo wo sabse karte hain.. bina bedbaav kiye(my brother says love is one thing which need to be given to all and when love is shared it only increases, he love them all unconditionally )... he ask ye kaise sambhav hain ?(he ask who it is possible ?) she says brata kehte hain sambhav hain(my brother says it is possible)... kyunki pyaar ko koi seema nahi hoti(my brother says love doesn't have an end).. pyaar to sabse kiya jata hain. Aise brata kehte hain. Unhone ye bhi kaha ta sabse badi udaharan wo kud hain.(he says love is one thing which can be given to all and he is himself an example as he loves every one) wo to har kisi se pyaar karte hain.. ye alag baat hain log unke upar laanchan lagate hain par meri brata bahut achhi hain,. Pavitr jal jaise(he loves everybody but still people blame him but I know my brother is like pure water)... he then smiles because he wanted to make her get trap in his words so that he can achieve what he want ... he knew the answer what she said but want to hear from her..

He says teri brata mahaan hain ye to manta hoon kyunki aise ladkiyon se byaah karliyaa jinki ke saath itna bura hua hain par koi aise nahi karte(he says i agree u r brother is great person, but it is not necessary everyone does the same after knowing about the girls and what happened with them?) ... kyunki har koi itna mahaan nahi hota jo apni pyar ko baat sakein.( because no one is soo great who can give love) . . she says kyun nahi(she says why not?).. in just short of moments she says about arjun winning the swamyar yet had to share panchali with his brother just because his mother ordered unknowingly he says pyaar baath na alag baat hain aur ek peedit ladki se shaadi karna alag baat hain...(he says sharing love is something else and marrying an such girl is different) she sees him... he says tumhein leleo agar meri aur arjun ke saamne hogaya aur yadi hum donon ke beech hamari gandheev ki yudh kar ne ki baari ayi... aur agar mein haar gaya ussse jo zindagi mein nahi hoga.. lekin agar hua kya wo tuje apnaya ya phir tukrakar chalajayega... kyunki tum ne swayan kaha tumein rajkumar arjun se pyaar hain... Shocking shubhi... she sees him in shock... aur agar mein arjun se jeet liya to tumein manna hi padega ki meri sabse bade danurdaari hoon... she was in shock.. she says aap ye kya kehrahe hain.. ye saab... he says bolo yadhi mein arjun se haar gaya kya wo tuje apna lega.. apni patni ke roop mein? Muje nahi lagta aise hoga... kyunki koi ek pati ke chodi huyi aurat ko nahi apnate... she ask ye aap kya kehrahe hain... he says wahi so satya. Hain agar mein haar gaya mein tumein chod doonga.. par kya wo apna payega? (he says take ur self as example, if some day me and arjun come face to face, and if something led to fight between us , and if by chance, although it is not possible still if I loss to him will he accept u or leave u? because u urself confessed u love him .. she was shocked he says if I win arjun u have to accept I am bigger archer than arjun , she ask what u r saying? He says tell me if I loose to arjun will he accept u as his wife? He continues saying I don't think so after all an women left by her husband cannot be accepted by any one not even by arjun. She ask what u r talking about.. he says talking about truth of reality , tell me will he accept u after I lose to him?)

She says bankijiye aise mazaakein humein pasand nahi hain.(she says stop this matter here I hate it even in fun talk). and goes but he take hi danush and shot arrow stopping her as it come and hit the ground and stops her from taking another step he says bina jawab diye hum jaane nahi denge(without getting my answer I won't let u go)... he says sawaal jinse poochna chiaye hum unhi se poochlenge.. prantu aap se jo mein prashn poocha uska uttar aap ko dena hoga... kya vishwas hain aapko aapki priya arjun aapko apna payenge... yadi hum har gaye too(he will ask the question whom he need to but before it she need to answer him will ur lovable arjun accept u?)... she sees him.. he says muje jawab pata hain kabhi nahi.(he says I know the answer he won't). and add fuels to her anger emotions and playing with her emotions to make her speak her out more.. . kyun ki koi aapki brata shri Krishna todi na hain maha yodha na maha gyaani hain.. na bade dil ke insaan hain(he says not everyone is like ur brother Krishna who is great in all) she says aise kuch nahi hain meri brata ne swayan kaha hain.. rajkumar arjun ka hriday ati komal hain(my brother has told me arjun has got the softest heart).. aur wo kisi bhi peedet shri ko apnakar zindagi denge(she says he will accept such girl for sure)... he ask tuje bhi(he ask u also?)... she says haan in an fraction of words.. he laughs and says mein tuje chunati deta hoon yadi arjun ne mujse yudh karke jeet liya mein swayan apne aapko katam kardoonga aur tum uske paas jaasakti hoo aur agar meine jeet liye to tum bina koi shart ki muje apna logi... bolo manzoori hain... She was shocked.. agar yadi tum ne chunati sweekar nahi karna chati hoo too tumein apne aap ko aaj raat ko dene hoga.. aap faisla tumein lena hain... she was stunned... (he laughs and says I am giving u challenge if arjun fights and win against me , I will let u go with him , if he loses u need to accept me without any condition , tell me will u accept it? And if u don't want to accept the challenge u need to accept me in every way that to tonight itself, will u he ask)

What will be here answer?😊


Edited by shavii - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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finally i am able to post
you know i was trying since when to post the comment,even tried to pm you but it was not working out!
ye me first!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🥳
I LOVED YOUR OS !!!!!!!!!!!!😊
wow arjun is so naughty jo aisi shart rakhi😉
and yes you posted a good message about abused victims that they are not impure but if their heart is pure then purity of body doesn't matter👍🏼
wow ek stri ne arjun ko bachaya *whistles*😉😆😳
awwe looking love of your life sleeping like that 😳
arjun is really having fun while teasing her😉 socho jo ladki arjun ko bacha sakti hai usse jab pata chalega ki he was playing ariund to wo uska kya haal karegi?😉😆
you can make one part that when she realizes that this is arjun tab wo usse thodi der punishment deti hai like you know not letting her come near her something like that😉
loved the os
please do continue soon😊
Edited by nuckts - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow! Three updates and all at once? Loved all the three parts. Was waiting like hell ki Arjun sachchai bataye, but he didn't! 😆 Kab tak wait karna padega?? LOL. Keep up the good work. And thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
3 updates together!! Lottery!! Loved them..👏👏 pls update soon..very eager to know the next part😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for that story. it was make me so happy cause many topic about arjun and drupadi not arjun and subhadra... so i hope u can continue this story and maybe add more english translation cause i dont know hindi language. waiting ur update as soon as possible 😊
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oh oh wat all i ve been missing????? wat a lot of twists and turns... wen will arjun say d truth yaar... u r playin wid an innocent girls life😉

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