new story on arsu- meeting of two-souls part 24 page 58, pr- pg 59 new - Page 16

Originally posted by: kalyani_shiva

The first part total Bhagam bhag Subhi running fro Arjun and Arjun cchasing her and protecting her.

The next part was about the night, Arjun dialogue when Subhadra knew nothing about the first night, ki main tumhe sikha deta hoon... I was laughing, but I loved the cute nok-jhok between both of them.

The third part, disclosing all the secrets and now I am waiting for the next part.

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Originally posted by: luv_sakshi

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WOW!!👏 That was some long update you gave us there!😉..Took me so long to read, but it was all worth it!!👏..Nice Detailing..the Arjun & Subhi Nok Jhok..running away from another..the SR😳😳..were all so Beautifully written!👏👏👏..And the last part on the secret..i thought Arjun will reveal it.but he seems to be getting Playful with Subhi here..😳😉..waiting to find out what happens next!😃😊

Originally posted by: sweetlife

nice

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Very Sweet Range Of Updates !! I'm Really Eager To Know Subhadra's Answer !!

Originally posted by: santhiyaa_J

Wow awesome one👍🏼 so finally she confessed 😉

Subhi just see him for an sec she felt she would win back her life the other moment she thought it was wrong... her situation was like na ghar ka na gaat ka(nor in house nor in road).. but yes she know.. if she get arjun she will be happy.. but very next moment she thought it was totally wrong.. . but it was also unfair to be unfaithful to her lawfully wedded husband... was that correct? Or that her destiny was giving her other chance what if it changes... so many question ran into her head.. Making her more confuse... she wonder even was brata Krishna ka plan to nahi... But she was clueless what truth...was. Her husband whom she is married to her had given her offer.. She wonders can any hubby make such offer. No... but what about her love...? Is her destiny planning her to give another chance? If so why not she accepts it but was it right? Her brata always told there is no wrong right in love so only he went and kidnapped rukmini and married even though she was engaged to someone as nothing is seen in love then why not my love... I trust completely on raaaj kumar arjun... he will surely win and for sure he will accept me... and my life will change the way I want... I will not remain tied with this sanyasi ... she gets happy.. She says mein aapki chunati ko sweekar karti hoon aap raaajkumar arjun se yudh jaroor kijiye aur hamein ye bhi pata hain wahi jeetenge(she says I accept your challenge ,u should surely fight with rajkumar arjun and I very well know he will win).. and goes.. he again shoot another arrow and says agar nahi jeete too(he ask if he doesn't).. she says turning aise nahi hosakta(she says it cannot happen)... wo duniya ke sabse shrethr danudaari hain... aaur ye kud jaan payenge( he is the world's best archer, u will know by yourself) ... aap nahi jaante.. wo guru dron ke shishya hain.(u don't know he is guru dron's student) Brata krishn kehte hain... wo andere mein bhi teer chala sakte hain(my brother Krishna says he can even shoot arrow in darkness).. sochliye (think about it)... yudh karne pehle(before u fight)... ki aap yudh kis maha yodha se karne wale hain(that whom u r going to fight)...she moves taking the arrow and and throwing it away... surprising him but only he had that naughty wicked smile. He says hum bhi kisise kam nahi ye tum swayam jaan pavogi.. priya saki(he says even I am not less to any one u will know it dear friend)... she turned on the word priya saki seeing him in surprise but he was smiling inside the hair garden.

He says nikalne keliye taiyaari karo hum aaj hi yaahn se apni yatra ka shuru karein.. kal madhyam tak hum indraprastav pounchjayenge...(he says get ready to start journey, by today itself we will start our journey and by tom afternoon we will reach ip) she says parantu aapne kaha hum 1-2 din rukenge(but u said we will stay here for 1-2 days).. he says ab uski avaishkata nahi hain(it is not needed now)... and smiles and she was not able to understand it.. they walk away with the horse.. they wind up stuff and he ask her to get over horse she says she can walk.. and show her way.. he then says is she is scad of horse? She says noo not at all and she very well trained in horse riding so as riding chariot thought by her brata Krishna... he laugh saying har baaat par brata Krishna (every time only brother Krishna) , kya tumhare brata ne ye nahi sikaya ki pati ki baat ko nahi inkaar karte?(he ask hasn't u brother did not teach u that u shd not talk against ur hubby?) She says meri brata ke kilaaf mein kuch nahi sun sakti... (she says I can't hear anything against my brother) he says to teek hain godhe par bait javo.. hum donon ko yahan se sandhyaa kaal poorvak is jungle ke raste koo paar karna hain(he says fine get over the horse we both need to crosss the forest before the sunset)... she hesitate... he says tumein gode ko kane keliye nahi kehraha hoon baitne hethu bolraha hoon(I am not asking to eat the horse but to sit over it)... Kahin baagakar nahi lekar javoonga... subadhra(I will not take u and run away somewhere subadhra)... suddenly something stuck.. she heard her name like arjun called her... and arjun realize and keeps his smile and says chalo and make her climb the horse and he too climb and she was not comfortable and ask him to sit little behind he says if he sit behind how he can ride horse as he may fall... She says she is not bothered as she can ride horse very well and he need not worry he says he may fall and promise not to touch her and start the horse ride.. the horse was very naughty and was very fast tooo and arjun had to put his had around her to protect much to her she says mein swayam ki raksha karsakti hoon(I can protect myself)... and arjun knew one thing... if he make her sleep he can ride the horse more faster... so he starts to talk about some war and soon she falls asleep and he knew his plan got succeeded and he ride much faster... holding her... and she unknowingly falls over his chest.. and to protection he tied his uthariya along with her and rode the horse soo fast... crossing the jungle faster than as thought... they reach an safer place near water river side... but she was still as sleep.. he think sothe huye itna achha lagti hain(how cute she looks while sleeping)... but suddenly she got up.. Saying brata Krishna.. he ask kya hua tum teek to hona(are u alright) .. she says haan.. and be quite.. it was dark.. he says hum yahan visraam karenge aur kal prata kaal hum dusra orr chalenge(he says tonight we will rest here and tom early morning we will start back our journey).. she nodes yes.. then he find an safe place and burns logs and offers her fruits for their dinner.. he refuses... he says later he will feel hungry and make her eat... she wonder was he good or bad as he was taking care of her even being in this state... she starts to feel he was not bad but some goodness was there.. then he places.. some cloth bundle and spread another cloth for her to sleep... she ask aap nahi soyenge.. (she ask u won't sleep?) he says nahi agar mein sogaya tumhara dyan koun rakega.. agar kahin rakshask agaya to kalivan ki tarah and laugh(no, if I sleep who will look after u ? what if devil like kaliyavan comes and laugh on her expressions) she was like kalivaaan.. us rakshak ke bare mein kaise pata(she ask how come u know about that devil?)... arjun was caught but says meine suna ta jab dwarika gaya ta tab aur tum bhool gayi tumne hi to kaha ta rajkumaar arjun ki guun gaate samay .smaran nahi?.(when I was in dwarika I learnt about it and also did u forget u ur self-told about him while singing praises for arjun? Did u forget?)she says haan smaran hain aur meri brat aka na har jagah charcha hoti hain kyunki wo hain hi aise... he thinks how can an girl sings her brother song but ofcourse he know his madhav is worth it (yes I do remember and also my brother praises are sung every where)

He says jaise raajkumaar arjun ki charcha tum karti ho kya... (he says like u praise rajkumar arjun)she says muje nedra arahi hain mein sone jarahi hoon.(she says I am sleepy I am going to sleep now.) he says phirse.(he thinks again?). she ask kya mathlab(she ask what u mean by that?) he says itni deer tak sohi phir bhi sone chati hoo (he ask u slept soo long and still u want to sleep again?)she ask to aur kya karoon aap ki taraf jagah kar aapki raksha karoon muje ko aitraaz nahi hain...(she ask what else should I do stay awake and protect u? I don't have problem) he says nahi nahi tum sojavoo(he says nothing u go to sleep)... and smiles.. she goes to sleep murmuring which was not able to hear . he was sitting next to log fire and just seeing her who had slept by now... and he drinks water and one drop of water touches his mid chest where small hurt were present as while she slept on his chest.. some of her head jewels kept touching hitting him unknown and gave small gaaav. He realizes and wiped it with water. And went to talk to his godhi(horse)... which was awake as him.. next morning.. she wake up.. and sees him nowhere and sees he had placed his gandheev next to her and went.. so she take it and goes and moving little away she sees him doing his snaan(bath) and and offering prayers.. and he had no uthariya(stole) and in that she realized his body was much similar to raajkumar arjun whom she had seen secretly while he took bath once... and smiles... but coming out of her thought when she hears him calling uthgayi priya saki taiyaar hojavoo hamein yahan se kuch samay mein nikal hain(he says u r awake my sweet friend? Get ready we have to start in some time)... she says jii and and lift her head to see red darken spot.. in mid chest and she ask ye kya hain.. Pointing out he seeing it saying kuch nahi wo meri patni sote huyi chota sa gaav dediya(she ask what was the red spot pointing he says my wife gave me small scratch while she was asleep in journey time)... she sees him he says tumhara sar ki abhusan bahut tede te isliye teer ki tarah chupgaye... Meri hriday mein(he says ur head accessories is very sharp, it poked him like an arrow in my heart) ... and smiles... she frowns.. she says tehriye(wait).. and goes and bring some labe (remedy medicine)and put over it saying.. ye lagane se jaldi teek hojayenge.(she says u will be fine soon). he ask kyun taaki phirse sar ki abhusan muje gaav desakein.(why so that ur accessories can hurt me again?). she stares him in anger and goes.. he smiles.. he while riding horse ask achha bolo ye labe ka kaam kahan se seeka(he ask tell me where did u learn this medicine?)... mein to bhool gaya teri brata Krishna ne sikaye honge na.(oh no I forgotten u r brother must have thought u right?). she says nahi... ye meine deka ta(no I saw this )... kahan(where) he ask.. hastinapur mein jab mein wahan gayi ti.. aur jab laut te samay ek sainik ko chot lag gayi tab raajkumar arjun ne aise hi kiya aur poochne par kaha ye gaav jaldi bar deta hain... air muje smaran hogaya(when I was returning from hastinapur and when one soldier got hurt rajkumar arjun put this medicine and told it will heal soon and I remembered it).. he was like omg she rem each and every small thing.. by now he was walking and she was over horse... then after some time.. he climb over horse and she removes her head abhusan so that it doesn't hurt him.. and they again drive fast away.. then they reach indraprastav by nearly evening .. . as in-between they stopped at place to offer prayer and also eat.. they reach ip finally

Subadrata was very happy so as arjun but... something happen which shocks both.. What it is ?

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