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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: santhiyaa_J
Wow awesome👏 bringing Rain is just😎

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: PARVATHY44
Suberb update.Thought the truth would be out in this update.But seems like we have to wait 4 some more time.Thank u so much 4 the Eng translation and pm.

truth will take little more time but when it comes out it will be damaka😆

welcome.. any suggestion is welcome😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: kalyani_shiva
Great update, Shavii, ncely wriiten innocence of Parth and Krishna's naughtiness.
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And thanks for the PM

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thanks for the forum infor😊

thanks for ur guidance i will find out

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: anshikashaheer
just awesome!*❤️loved it shamu!!!!*🤗😳this line is amazing-" ye madhav ne muje kis duvida mein fasa diya.."ye hai madhav ke innocent parth ka fav line!!!!*😆🤣❤️aaw parth is such an innocent baby..❤️☺️and madhav is freakin naughty!*😆aur parth ke saath toh madhav ...superduper naughty ho jate h!love ParAv*🤣❤️kya romantic update thasoo sweet😳😃very Beautifully written❤️🤗like always loved it😉😳
do continue soon sis😛

thank u anshu

kyunki duvida hi to ek achhi suvida ki rasta hain😆😆😆 teek kehrahi hoona mein

paarth innocent and madhav naughty and subhi is combo and baby ho tab kaise hoga😆😆😆😆
paarav rocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: pango
awesome update
loved it
thanx for pm
waiting for next part
continue soon

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welcome..

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next update in few hour

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Very Beautiful...
Cont sooon
Thanks for PM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: pango
Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Very Beautiful...
Cont sooon
Thanks for PM

thank u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

next update on the way 😊😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

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she ask aapko rasta kaise pata? He says sanaysi hoon pata chal hi jata hain... they walk... and suddenly she slips and he holds her... his long beard hair falls on her face making her sneeze... she says aap ye baalon ko hathayiye.. hamri mooh par girne se hamein cheekin arahi hain... aap ise kat kyun nahi lete... he ask kyun tuje pasand nahi hain isliye? Pyaar to nahi hoga humse.. she says nahi too bus si roop mein aap bahut daravani lagrahe hain

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