Originally posted by: Yagyaseni
Sorry, tia I was in a hurry so i couldn't give the detailed reply which i wanted to give. Now here is it:
I just loved the way you developed the bond between arya arjun and putr Iravan which was to be bridged in the first few chapters. Maybe that distance was due to the fact that he was uloopi's son.
Loved the paternal affection of arya nakul and arya yudhistir which also showed how united pandavas were.
The words which showed that heights of maternal affection like a "mother need not be introduced to her children" said by both yagyaseni and subhi just made me speechless
Bonding between my UPs, abhimanyu and iravan was also shown well.
Mere bhratasri govind, you showed him being omnipotent through your wonderful writing in a different way
Iravan's each and every feeling was well defined and well symbolized
Arya Arjun, the waves of feelings which you created for him was awesome. In the last part where you showed that he found peace in lying down with iravan was superb
Subhi, maternal affection was shown well
Lastly swayam ham, the way you showed her kindness, maternal affection and warmth of her love was just marvelous.
Hope i am not too late in doing this!!! Update soon!!!
Please do read my new fF on ArDi when you get time!!
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