KriYaansh Drabble : Beautiful Distractions| Chap 4 -Pg 14. |PMs Later.

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David

@arshafan94

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Wow loved ot.

It was an awsum updaye.

What a story.

It was mind blowing.

How true there is happinees and joy at one side and greif on the other.

Felt for the queen Kria

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

straight to the point...wo bed pe leta nd use pata bi nai laga..that warmth was of a person...wo bi zinda..?haaww..me letu or esa kuch mile to mai to laat mar deti hu😆...
who is her sister's hubby..???moron kahi ka...
nice update...
i would love to see sm flashbacks

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Lovely update
krias feeling was beautifully describe
love it

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Mahnaz Gul

@FrozenTeardrops

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

That was Kriya... Wasn't it?
This is epic!
I wonder of a person can be so tired to lie down and notice nothing around.
Great part.

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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Amazing update...

Feel for Kriya...just for her sis she's ready to pierce her heart...where's her sis then???her hubby???

looks like she's drawn rae's attention!

The end...😳 🤢

update soon

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

awesome chapter
so kria is in rey's bedroom
hmmm quiet interesting :-P
waiting for nxt episode

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

edited on p-1😛

now my comments for chappy 2 and 3😛

Part-2

fab part👏

Kria has planned something is t😛

and d kiss

poor rey got shockedwa😆

loveddd ittt😊

Part-3

wow fantastic update upi and snigs🤗🤗

so kria wanted to escape frm her jeeju s t

that bloody a**hole🤢🤢

and rey cant stop thinkin abt kriya😆

m waiting eagerly for d nxt part😈

was t kriya who rey hugged😛😛

continue soonish both of u😛

Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago

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pinky

@pinkypanrocks

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Awesome part...yaar jst loved it...!!

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

finish read all your three parts together... the chapter are fabulous...
i am really feeling bad for kriya as only to save her sisters and is misuse her
and such a moran... and lost the battle and is try to figure to solve it...
do continue soon

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

You guys should be punished, you are simply making things miserably torturous for the readers like me. You are serving a mental torture and enjoying. But then all I need is quick and ______ updates. *you can conveniently fill the blank.* ^_^

I loved a few lines like anything. I love you two for that :*

She never wanted to kiss him ; but she did. She never wanted to break the kiss ; but she did.

But somewhere his mind roamed around her, He was still under the affect of their last meeting where she kissed him.

He shifted on bed until he found a one, a warmth he desired. His arms automatically curled around it, pulling it closer until he could feel every inch of it and after feeling contented, he drifted to a peaceful sleep.

I don't need a word to explain what my mind drifts to, after reading this ;) You have taken me to an all new world of KriYansh. And Probably I can imagine hell lot of things after the last line of the last update, I can run my imaginations :P

And Uppi, this reminds me of Love of Nile ^_^

Edited by -shenz- - 11 years ago