KriYaansh Drabble : Beautiful Distractions| Chap 4 -Pg 14. |PMs Later. - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Awsm update pls pm me wen u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pls update yaar,its an amazing story,
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ok so I love dese royal stories specially based on KR
n dis one is simply fab
Awesomeness at her best
so loving dis royal story
can't wait to read more n more of it
update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 4

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He shifted on bed until he found a one, a warmth he desired. His arms automatically curled around it, pulling it closer until he could feel every inch of it and after feeling contented, he drifted to a peaceful sleep.

Things were way too much different for her. Kria, who practically hated men because she didn't needed them for anything. Her own rules and boundaries revolved around her conducts. And here she was sleeping in his arms unknown to the world outside, In fact unknown to her own conscience.
He woke up adjusting his vision to the brightness. His view was blocked. He could feel her fragrance. His face was nuzzling into her hair while he slept to her side and his hand was on her waist. He felt smooth on the fingers, they traced unintentionally and she moved slightly. That was when he realized he was holding her close. Mesmerized was an understatement to describe his condition. His practical mind was screaming to avoid all these emotions but his heart listened to none. His eyes were gently absorbing the sight in front of him.

Beautiful, was all he could think about her. He have seen lots of princesses who wore heavy jewelries to look pretty but here she managed to blow him by her simple pure beauty. Her beautiful dark eyes, her sharp nose, her beautiful lips curved into a ever pleasing smile and her dainty fingers resting on his bare chest just above his heart. He wanted to lock the moment if it was possible. It felt good to be close to her and he couldn't even tell why. And then he saw her lift her delicate eye lids, he froze in that moment when she looked in his eyes.

Shocked? Afraid? He couldn't decipher what was going in her mind. And he was finding it strange, Why was he trying to read her mind? He was walking on the edge of his sanity and was about to break apart when she parted her lips involuntarily.

He stared at her trying to decipher the feeling her eyes portrayed and his gaze shifted to her lips and he wanted them to feel them in his. Just like last night when she kissed him. Wasn't she the one who made a move on the first place? Glancing at her eyes, he intentionally leaned in closer to her lips. He could feel his heart stutter though he knew he wouldn't kiss her.

This was surely not good, for him and for them. Of what it felt like eternity he regained his consciousness, unwillingly turning his gaze towards the delicate position they were lying. He was about to move back when he heard somebody shout. When did the door got opened? Was the first question which strike him, but he realized, they were way to much lost to notice anything else.

"Raee.." He heard a familiar feminine voice scream. He immediately moved back, but it resulted to more complications when the accidental knot pulled him back, Kria was even more closer to him now. Their lips were away by inch. He gasped. His breathing was getting rash and giving a final pause, he got up from the bed, facing the women standing on the door.

The lady's eyes glinted with fury at the image they made. She pointedly oogled at the girl who sat up on the bed behind Rae and then she averted her gaze back to Rae.

"Rae, Ministers want to meet you" She spoke in her dry tone, eyeing at Kria.

"Yes..Yes Mother" Rae replied. He made his way straight out oF the room though he wished to have a look of Kria before leaving.

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Edited by snigdha_arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
SHIT This was so well written..

MY Upi and Jerry nailed it...

This was so intense...

Choice of words and this beautiful scene...Perfect Combo.

I want next update soonish.. 😛
Edited by Endurance - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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holy Shit it was to gud Uppi nd Snig 👏 The Scene was awesome Emotions was so Convenceing 👏 Love the whole thing Its fab Loved it so much They r sleeping in each other arms 😳 that to so close yr And Last who is that Lady Kria pe shak karegi sayed poor Kria Intresting Awesome great work Do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Omg
Abhi to rae was adoring kria
N uski mom ne entry mar di
Ye kya tha
Hope iski wajah se kria pe koi musibat na aajay
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wauh
beautifully written
amazing
now what gonna happen his mom saw kriya ??????????
suspense erghhh...
i hate suspense u left at d end
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awhhh...
rey wanna see her 4 d last time


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome... loved the way everything was penned!
His emotions were beautifully written...just superb and perfect!
Loved it...update soon

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