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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#631

my my my - what did I just read now - that was A ANNIVERSARY UPDATE - truly a special one sandhya

Loved the way arnav stood by her - he knew about his parenthood - this guy is one great character - every reader who despised his behavior initially, who pointed fingers at him initially would truly stand by me when I say that this guy has proved to be a real hero - what a twist of events in the last two updates sandhya - hats off to you

loved it to the core - oh oh their first time was so special and this time tooo it turned out to be super special hot update

already waiting for the next - sorry cant help it sandhya

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#632

Congrats on 1 year Anniversery.

Thank you for not making freakout like i thought they would.

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aaee

@aaee

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#633

I am blushing all over. What a treat for the one year Anniversary of DND. Great job. I am glad Khushi has figured out that biological ties are secondary to the ties of heart. I am glad Arshi are were they should be wrapped into one another. World right now is perfect...

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#634

Happy first anniversary dear Sandhya and DND ...

Haven't got over the shock from the last chapter and now another shocker ! 😲😕

"Khushi sobbed loudly. She wept bitter tears for her lost privilege, for she no longer had the umbilical connect with her mother and the right to take her father's love for granted..."

"Try stepping out of Sheesh Mahal, Ahalya. Just try it. It'll the last time you'll see the children. By now you should know that Malliks are far more powerful than Raizadas. And you may as well kiss Arnav goodbye right now. You have no right over him. You are not his mother. And don't think I want him because he is my heir. That lower caste woman tarnished his bloodline. He'll be as good as a servant to the Malliks when they come to know that he is my bas***d. And I'll tell them. You know me well enough. Don't think this is an empty threat." 😲

"My mama is my mother. My only mother."

Just too much for a young boy to bottle up all these years ... God ... he must have lost his youth and grown up that very night ...

The realisation "Khushi felt amazingly buoyant. And she knew it was thanks to the man who stood before her swirling his drink and studying the amber liquid as if it held all the answers..."

Ahh ... but the ending was so satisfying ... two lost souls finding solace in each other's love ...

will be back ...

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smric

@smric

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#635

HAPPY ANNIVERSARY!!

Ohh god its been a year but it seems like i have started reading it last week..its been an amazing journey. All thanks to you and your amazing writing. Thank you for that.

About the update...as usual surprising. I was expecting distant and cold khushi. But it was a relief to know khushi found whatever little bit of solace she wanted in arnav, in his presence. She trusted him for him to be there for her..and it was a progress. Arnavs revelation about his father's exact words were so shocking. He dealt with it for 15 years n 11 months..ohh poor arnav. He is a strong man..he has always been a strong man..for his sisters, for family, for nani. I love his character more.

Khushi went through another trauma created by someone else..it seems she has been constantly getting punished for others miseries or mistakes. But she comes out strong. Demanding what she wants n getting it.

And the hot encounter was so hot that i coudnt read it..had to read it slowly to give time for steady breathing😳 you give us joy when least expected it..actually when not expecting it at all😉

It was one of your splendid update. Revelations, understanding n finding love all in one.

Thank you for the update. 👏

Edited by smric - 11 years ago

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manali garg

@manali garg

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#636

Arnav being her pillar... great... Acceptance by khushi...superb... they becoming one again.. mind blowing... in all a hot, emotional update...loved it...

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Uzii

@Uzii

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#637

Beautifully written,so Arnav knew tht he is not aha lay son but it was very nice how he supported khusi n made her realize tht no matter wat they are her parents n who knows better then him.

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koisk

@koisk

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#638

Hmmnot what I expected but still 😳

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rizib

@rizib

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#639

That was brilliantly written!! I was so confused and terrified after the last update.. You did a fantastic job here, settling the major issue about these two..

About the explanations coming ahead, if this has been resolved then I'm sure what's coming up is nothing, compared to this (I hope so)..

Khushi's thoughts in the beginning were so heartbreaking, and to think that it had to be Arnav's biological mother!! Anyway, all's well that ends well..

BTW, there's a small typo I wanna point out my dear DND author.. Instead of DNA at one place it's typed as DND.. Just wanted you to know.. :)