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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update. The emotions Khushi goes through are so beautifully written. Loved the way Arnav comforted her and made realize, her parents are still her parents and their love for her is not going to change.

Oh, that filthy Arjun Mallik. He should not even be called a human. That was really shocking to know that Arnav already knew he is not Ahalya's son. Good thing is he is not facing any dilemma like Khushi. And the love making in the end was hot and passionate. It was not sex, but that was some thing much much more.


Very nice chapter Sandhya.
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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW Sandhya [B]congratulations[\B]on a whole year of DND

I loved how you showed Khushi feelings from utter disbelief to acceptance of the fact that parents are those that bring you up, those that made sacrifices for you, not those that just brought you into this world. Lets face it a few moments of togetherness can never outweigh the years of never ending love and affection of a true parent.

I was so shocked from the last part , either of the two sisters had been my guess, but Arnav never. Garima will get her son back in the form of a son in law, I hope he gets to hear the WHOLE story before be jumps to conclusions. I hope Garima allows them to be together, when She finally realises that Khushi and Arnav are a couple.

As for the second part 😳 but seriously 👏 it was probably needed at this juncture, it was well written and very passionate to say the least

Well done and looking forward to the next part.muuwh
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing superb update..!!!!
Happy anniversary..!!!!!
khushi is so broken...!!!!!!
aranv knows the secret from 15 years.. he is calm and supported khushi..!!!!
he make her understand how her parents are best..!!!!
truly ahlyais arnav's only mother..>!!!!
and love making is so passionate..!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful and sad to. What both had to go through but am glad they are finally together. And am sure they can stand against anything that destined throws their way.

Amazing way of describing their sorrows.
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Posted: 11 years ago
when everything deems dark and dusty...there is nothing like holding ur love one hands... and u just know u can face all hardship..
it was an amazing chapter...
the way Arnav supported Khushi...was simply mind blowing... just speacking out and shareing makes things so simple anyone who read this chap will see that... loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...
sorry for the lack of detailed comment... I'm at loss of words right now :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
It is amazing and fabulous update. The way you write today's chapter, simply brilliant. Can't get better then that. I am just speechless reading how you show their pain.
Its like a joke that fate is playing with them. When everything is getting in track and becoming normal, it got crushed.

One thing which I liked most is that this time what ever was the situation, arnav didn't let Khushi get away from his sight, he knew that if let this go then he might lose Khushi again and he can't let that happen.

I was shocked to know that arnav knew the truth all these years, so I can say that he was not at fault at that time when he told Khushi to go away. Because he was aware of his demons and was afraid that they could ruin Khushi too.

My heart goes out for both of them. Their situation is more or less same. Now waiting for the sunrise after this storm. Hope it could clear every thing in morning and make it fresh and clean, like a new and bright day.

Can't wait to know will nani disclose this secret to everyone or all of them are again going to hide it.

Last not the least their love making part. My god it was out of this world. It is written so beautifully.
Glad that they reach for each other same time and they did this because this going to set every thing right between them and calm their mind and heart. It will heal their soul.

But I have a question, why Khushi said that she is protected? was she expecting this and she was ready for it to happen?

Congratulation on DND anniversary. Though I joined you in middle of this journey but glad that I did and got to read such a beautiful story.

Thanks for such a brilliant update and pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Good one..
perfectly portrayed the emotions and their plight..

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Posted: 11 years ago
Sandhya, you have outdone yourself with this one...

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