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Posted: 11 years ago

What to say Sandhya...awesome update...very emotional...what a terrible human being...Arjun Mallik...I just hope now the society has changed but I don't think so...we still have people like him in this world. Ahalya knows about her husband but she still got Greeshma into the Sheesh Mahal...it just like she was the one who helped her husband...but I know she is a gem of a person...who again helped her. I have no idea what will be Garima's reaction after knowing that Arnav is Arjun's son. Anya is step sister of Khushi...what will happen when they all will come to know the truth. Looking forward to the mystery unfold next week...OMG...it is going to be long wait.

Hats off to you as it was taken lot of strength on your part write this update...it seems that I am watching some old movies where the Zamidars are like Arjun Mallik.

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Posted: 11 years ago
I am not at all guilty for being not punctual and lagging behind with the updates because reading the past few updates together gave me a chance to enjoy the myriad of emotions flowing in with every update. There was purity, sanctity, happiness, misery, love, pain, hatred, jealousy, pity and so many more. The past few updates definitely were power packed.

The complete temple sequence was so amazing. Definitely my favourite. It literally managed to etch out a feeling of calm inside me. The fact that he has been to the temple only for the women he loved made it all the more special.

Who knew a shady and not so equipped hotel would witness and shelter the deepest of his secrets or a barren shore would witness their confrontations, see their tears intermingle and souls intertwine like two snakes do. I completely side with her decision of taking a day at a time and not rushing in this time because doing the same earlier did not favour them.

For a second I felt she was guilty for trying to move on while he continued to watch over her. But then she was simply not to be blamed here. I am rather glad she took such a decision because it helped her realize the place she truly belongs in.

The past definitely was a no less than a brutal shock. I never ever thought of such a possibility. Arnav's mother had to bear the brunt of his father's infidelity. Now it seems he is standing at the same crossroads as his mother was in the past. I only hope he follows his mother's footsteps and takes a decision backed up by rationality. I wonder what twist will you bring in as a solution for a dicey situation as this.

Waiting for the next part.
Update soon. 😊
Edited by sk2405 - 11 years ago
bkamber thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Reading the chapter this afternoon.
Will be back a little later.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sandhiya, an awesome chapter.
👏
First the story of Gareeshma, how sad. First she is intelligent enough to win a scholorship to a university, then her dad has a stroke, she is then left to fend for herself. Untilnshe is taken in by a woman with a heart of gold, but one which either trusts her husband and refuses to believe that her husband is a nasty piece of scum, or she understands that these things happen and foolishly allows a beautiful girl to stay under her roof. Either way, Gareeshma is left there to bear the brutality of the world. I hope life is better than it was lets face it what 30 years ago?

Now there are two thoughts one is that khushi is Arnav half sister , Nanni convincing Garishma to keep the baby, especially as she cannot have any more. OR the baby was Anya or Anjali. No dates, so its possible that Anjali is Gareshmas daughter. Khushi could have then been adopted.. considering it would take a couple of years for Gareeshma to complete her studies, marry and then decide to adopt or maybe fate decided thst Gareeshma deserved to have a child of her own she could have been a testube baby! After all Gareeshma is an educated girl. I dont know... if its the latter Anjali finally gets to be in with the three musketeers. If its Anya no issues there either and in both Khush can still get together with Arnav. If Arnav and Khushi are blood related 😭. Need to go back to check out the names of Arnav parents...

either way awesome episode, hat s off to your storytelling, you had us guessing as to who the girl was in your prequel , even now who is this baby. AMAZING 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

The much awaited unveiling of the past brought to fore the repugnant realities of feudal domination and subjugation. It was heart breaking to read of the humiliating massacre of the 'essence' of a promising young life 'Greeshma'. It is an appalling fact that even today monsters like Arjun Malik continue to prey on the poor and helpless, while successfully evading retribution for their inhuman misdeeds.

Both Ahalya and Greeshma are victims of primitive authority, yet these remarkable women exhibit an indomitable spirit... Greeshma by deciding to walk out of Sheesh Mahal regardless of her impoverished state, to singlehandedly take care of her unborn child and sick father; and Ahalya who with the complete knowledge of her family feigns pregnancy in order to give Greeshma's child its legal name and respect in society.

You have portrayed all of the above with immense sensitivity and compassion. Kudos to you for keeping to the storyline envisioned by you and presenting it to us with such clarity and honesty.

You do mention Ahalya leaving to visit her ailing father with her mother-in-law, didi and children. Not clear whether the children are Ahalya's and/or her Didi's'... as such the 'baby' could be anyone of the 3 Raizada siblings... waiting for the next phase of reveal in the upcoming chapter(s).

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Posted: 11 years ago
the child is anjali! it couldn't be Anya, the timeline wouldn't match if it were Anya. I mean I thought it was Anya earlier, but I know that can't be it, anjali has to be greeshma's child. besides, you haven't mentioned any other kids of ahalya's yet, so it must be anjali only.

Loved the chapter. Reveal the history soon so we can have more of arnav working his charm on a resistant khushi.

love.
sonia

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya


Okay...here goes.

I wanted to ask those of you who have already reviewed the chapter a question...Make it two...

1. What would most zamindar wives have done in Ahalya's place? (Zamindars leading the kind of life style Arjun Mallik did was fairly common in the era in question here).

2. What would have happened to Greeshma (No family, father paralysed), if Ahalya had simply given her some money (say 5k INR) and left her to her fate?

Look forward to your views :)



Women are know to tolerate their husbands philandering ways for various reasons ...
Firstly ... They are monetarily dependent on them ...
Secondly ... Because of the kids involved ...
Thirdly ... A recognition in society ...
Fourthly ... A fear of the future ...
Fifthly ... Low self esteem ...

Had Greeshma taken money from Ahalya ... although the baby would have grown up with
her biological mother but it would have been without her/his fathers name ... and we all know
what significance that would have had on the baby ... she would have been an illegitimate
child with no stand in society ... So the the best solution was to hand over the baby to Ahalya
to bring up as at least she would have a fathers name attached to hers ...
dsbj thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
mind blowing.. cant wait to see next chapter ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG...wht a twist girl...loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing and superb thriller full update
Arjun Malik was a pathetic man poor Garishma have to go through a lot in teenage
That poor soul was robbed of her innocence and life at such a young age.
But Ahalya was really a innocent and golden hearten woman
Loved the way she stand with Garishma and accepted her baby as her own baby
The baby's gender is still not revealed but i think that its Anya as you said that Ahalya went to see his father with her kids so they will be Arnav and Anjali
And that doctor may be said Garishma that she will not able to conceive again so may be Khushi is not her biological daughter
Sandhya you did a marvelous job with this most awaited chapter 👏

Whats going to happen when Nani and Garima come face to face
And how will garima feel when she knows that she's witnessing her own daughter's wedding
What will be Khushi's reaction on this truth
I think her view wont change on Arnav because of his father as they past that stage

Cant wait fro next update for one week cant we get earlier update
Anyways its really a wonderful update dear
Waiting for next update eagerly

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