Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#791

Amazing ending to an awesome story!!!!!

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#792

A superb story with equally superb dialogues
Loved the last part
Beautifully written
Thank u :)

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Meerah14

@Meerah14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#793

that was too awesome...truly...arnav is damn so romantic and cute...lovely...

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#794

Loved the enacting of the play.

And the proposal.

The end was superb.

Utterly romantic.

Loved reading it.

I wish and hope you are going to write a sequel.

Would love to read the about the wedding and after.

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#795

A perfect end to a perfect story!

Their intense feelings for each other so romantically articulated.

Thank you Smita for a wonderful tryst with our favourite couple.

Thank you Rashmi for ... everything bas!

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#796

Smita, another superb story. I wish you write more and more such wonderful stories. 👏

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daljeet

@daljeet

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#797

Wonderful story. Loved this last sections more than the previous ones. The Heer-Ranjha scenes and dialogues were superb. Hats of to you dear 👏

Waiting for your next OS. Cant get enough of your works dear :)

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pmehra300

@pmehra300

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#798

Awww... That was so beautiful
Loved it

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#799

Absolutely brilliant 👏 The Heer Ranjha play was hilarious. I never thought I will use the word hilarious for a tragic love story 😳 Loved Arnav's and Khushi's confession. The tradition of interruption was also maintained 😆 At least it helped them to get married soon 😃 Loved it ❤️