Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#712

Mind blowing - awesome update smita
Rashmi, 🤗

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Saare jahaan se acha Hindustan hamara

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sonal

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Lovely update...

Arnav having his own way to make khushi realise about their feelings...

Happy Independence Day😊

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yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Wonderful update...thanks for the PM

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RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome updates. The last chapter was HOT ☺️ But loved the first chapter of this update the most. Arnav hiding from Khushi so that she doesn't tie him a rakhi was hilarious 😆

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Arshi67

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Wow Wow and Wow!!!

Such a beautiful sensuous scene.

Lol at Arnav wanting to stay away from Khushi while she's wielding a Raakhi.

I loved the way you described what Khushi was feeling when she first saw Arnav.

Their 'courtship' it totally 'ajeeb but cute'.

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Arshipriya16

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hey di nice updates I just read last few chaps n they were awesome specially the rakshabandhan one how he was hiding from Khushi. that was hilarious. N the romance was full on mode waise ye Arnav apni feeling share kar raha hai ye padhkar achha laga.

Tum ye na samzo ke hum insaan nahi,
karharte nahi to kya hua? dard hume bhi hota hai,
Kuchh dikhate nahi to kya hua dil humara bhi rota hai,
Khoon dikhata nahi to kya hua ghav hume lagta hai,
Dil dikhata nahi to kya hua? Dhadakta to ye hamesha hai,

Sirf tumhare aur tumhare hi liye... Hamesha...

Kaisi lagi? Bohot dino baad likh rahi hoon so itani achhi nahi shayad but try karti rahoongi humesha aur humesha ke liye...😉😉😉

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smitar

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Arshipriya16
Hey di nice updates I just read last few chaps n they were awesome specially the rakshabandhan one how he was hiding from Khushi. that was hilarious. N the romance was full on mode waise ye Arnav apni feeling share kar raha hai ye padhkar achha laga.

Tum ye na samzo ke hum insaan nahi,
karharte nahi to kya hua? dard hume bhi hota hai,
Kuchh dikhate nahi to kya hua dil humara bhi rota hai,
Khoon dikhata nahi to kya hua ghav hume lagta hai,
Dil dikhata nahi to kya hua? Dhadakta to ye hamesha hai,

Sirf tumhare aur tumhare hi liye... Hamesha...

Kaisi lagi? Bohot dino baad likh rahi hoon so itani achhi nahi shayad but try karti rahoongi humesha aur humesha ke liye...😉😉😉

Bahute achi he, Nandkisore! Thank you! Aise likhthi rehna! Have added the poem to the blog.

Edited by smitar - 11 years ago