Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#691

i loved them smita di

last chapter was seducing and sensual adding to the spice of the first 3 chapters

21 and 22 were full of emotion and pov of arnav and khushi whose feelings were expressed in perfect words👏

heart melting chapters in all together 👏

love u di and rashmi for the update and mail

waiting for the next update

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Arshifan4life

@Arshifan4life

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#692

Wow amazing update really nice loved arnav

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#693

yehi pe rukna tha? maar daalaa!

btw the line about ASR staying away from Khushi and her rakhis was killer😆

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#694

Very hot indeed. So Arnav has decided to tell Khushi his feelings for her. I'm so happy. This play is going to be amazing.

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#695

waiting for the drama now.. loved it..

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Anuradha

@lovebarun...

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#696

how can you write so beautifully.. hats of you girl...👏👏👏

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Meerah14

@Meerah14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#697

that was too lovely...awaiting for the heer and ranja ho por their heart

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just4this

@just4this

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#698

so asr using his charms to woo kushi this time not bad

all is fair in love and war

well written dear

thank u

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#699

khushi is yearning for love , she feels a sense of belonging with Arnav so she was hurt badly when Arnav spoke very badly about her relationship with NK . Arnav is hell scared that NK will make khushi tie rakhi in his hands (lol) , even the fandom would have strangled NK if he had proposed the idea of rakhi . Arnav's proposal is making khushi go weak in her knees , the last part where Arnav asks what is he to khushi is damn romantic , loved it

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hydsri

@hydsri

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#700

left us again at a critical juncture. Super. Poor Arnav trying everything he can. I do hope Khushi goes to Kanpur. She cannot give in just yet :) Arnav needs to do more.

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