Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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hydsri

@hydsri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

loved it Smita/Rashmi. these short stories are so sweet and to see this romantic Arnav is a treat.

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suri2610

@suri2610

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Posted: 11 years ago

#242

Cute OS ENJOYED EVERY BIT OF IT

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 11 years ago

#243

such a cute one.. loved this Arnav...

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Moumita

@_Oorja_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Fury transformed her face. "Not just strangle him. I will kill him and dance on his remains," she claimed.

I was laughing like a maniac Smita!! how did you manage to come up with this??🤣

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Moumita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#245

Saasumma, you came here to repair your heart, but lagat he your grandson has lost his heart here. Ab kahan jaake dhoondein usse, Hello Hi Bye Bye?" Mami laughed.

and in the end Mami took the cake...

seriously Smita how could you?

how could you think and write like this?

I mean I am grinning all along... laughing in places... and even rolled off my bed once. Such was my condition.

Saute to you!

Not all has the capability to make people, smile or laugh but you do it so beautifully!

Kudos to you!

come up with the next one soon...

Edited by Moumita_2014 - 11 years ago

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neha2013g

@neha2013g

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Posted: 11 years ago

#246

awesome os... loved it

last line by mami was the best :)

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thephoenixenigm

@thephoenixenigm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#247

an endearing update 😊

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#248

Section 1

Interesting... got me curious as to what will come next...
What happened to nani? what is the story line ? so many curious question
Now gonna read the next section

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#249

Section 2

Loved their first meeting... at the time when they are surrounded by sadness...
True to her character ... kushi saying all that to arnav..😊