Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

Oh smita, that was damn cute
Your OS is always a pleasure to read - I loved it to the core
Rashmi, 🤗

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Nishi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

Very sweet ... Loved the os

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pree2605

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Posted: 11 years ago

#263

superrbbb os...
I m sry for commenting soo late...
loved all d updates...
thnxx fr email

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surrazdan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#264

wow.. i always feel blessed when i read ur such beautiful tender story between arnav khushi...

amazing...

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sheshnag1952

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Posted: 11 years ago

#265

nice story. love blooming in the hospital between arnav and khushi. and by the look of it between akash and payal too. loved the story.

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just4this

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Posted: 11 years ago

#266

nice one thank u for the looong update.

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#267

Brilliant story...I am loving this series...thanks for the PM

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MDTharun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#268

Hospital ne bana di jodi Mami is right while Doctors were set to operate Nani's heart ASR lost his heart to KKG .

Well the family members did not intrude between Arnav and khushi . By the time Nani and Babuji got discharged rishtha is pakka .\

loved it

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 11 years ago

#269

This was so heartwarming. Perfect dose of IPK characters with their zany and unique characters in a frothy romance. Loved it.

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abcdefg1234567

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Posted: 11 years ago

#270

Every dark cloud has a silver lining. You have written that concept very well. Thanks for giving us such a wonderful story. Loved it.

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