Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8) - Page 23

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pinkly

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Posted: 11 years ago

Oh, I loved this story. Such cute and sweet one. The arrogant ASR never wanted to marry. The way ASR and KKG met in the hospital was very nicely written. I liked their conversation and the way they consoled each other. You always show so much love between the family members, and that is the most beautiful thing in your stories. I liked it very much.

The pictures were awesome. The picture where Arnav is holding Khushi on the beach is so beautiful.

Please write the next OS soon.

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vaishnavi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thise was sooo muchhh wonderful Os...
Really Attack ne miladi jodi ..

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hararnav

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Posted: 11 years ago

thts one of the sweetest n cutest story

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IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

Liking these simple sweet stories a lot.

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l.savitree

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Posted: 11 years ago

So cute & lovely OS .Enjoyed reading all parts

You rock as always👏❤️

Thanks for the mail

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amaypranay

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Posted: 11 years ago

Fantastic! How well you write, your OS's are amazing too...

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smiley-shiney

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Posted: 11 years ago

Lovely

waiting for the 4th OS

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Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

That was so sweet. Loved it

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Arshi67

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Posted: 11 years ago

Such a lovely, gentle, feel good story.

Dr Sinha's medical centre really is a special place!

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IPKlover

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Posted: 11 years ago

Smita darling...please continue these stories...they are beautiful!!!! 😃👏😳

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