Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#231

such a beautiful story!!! loved it.. God ARSHI met at hospital and within a day arnav proposed and want to get married asap.. kkg ka jadoo sar chad kar bola aur asr gaya kaam se.. thanks a ton Smita for giving us such wonderful stories.. i am loving all of them.. best wishes dear 😃

thanks for mail 😊

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rana5

@rana5

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#232

Such a sweet ASR! His heart is truly lost. I loved this one, I wish you would continue it but on the other hand, I would rather have a new one with a new meeting!!

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arshi_1982

@arshi_1982

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#233

O it was hilarious and cute.😉

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#234

Loved it, plz write more.

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Spoonai

@Spoonai

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#235

This was really good, I enjoy it :) sweet, romantic with little bit if pain n naughtiness :) just too good :) loved it plz continue soon :)

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#236

"Heart attacks ne banadi Jodi"

Smitha, you have such a knack to write cute love stories, I am in love with this story too like your other stories.

Each and everything about this story was nice, the way they met each other, their talk, getting to know their families to the final proposal. It was just "perfect".

Edited by canapoem - 11 years ago

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#237

I loved this and I loved Nani's, Anjali's, and Mami's reactions when they first met Khushi. I also loved how they just seem to know that Arnav wants to marry Khushi and that little joke they played on him was hilarious.

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nihasan

@nihasan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#238

Hee hee...

Only asr can propose kkg like that

Truly wonderful..

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#239

Loved the os so cute and very emotional at the beginning both bonding at the hurt of their loved one forming a friendship of trust so cute how he started calling her parent babuji and amma and loved his family reaction when Khushi came looking for him and loved his proposal awesome os loved it .