FF- lover turned villian(mature+dark)last part on pg 30 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Guys thank you so much for liking my ff..the dark part is here..but no one knows when the game changes.. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you guys for liking my ff..I would urge you all to pls leave behind comments..thank you sooo much and some people were guessing that who is the culprit for brainwashing sandhir then pls keep guessing..and don't worry I like peace and now I making it a little mature too because there are more ff's also with mature content so I need to bring that quality in my writing to push my story..so sorry Mandy pls warn me if it's wrong but pls try to overlook..so here is the next part!!

PART 4- the real shades of people coming soon!!!

Sanyu woke up in the morning with a sound of thud..sanyu nervously gets up and sees randhir in the kitchen making food and there is a broken glass on the floor..she sighs a relief because after the nights incident ..but sudy her eyes felt on a sandwich on which it was written sorry!!!
Sanyu- raaan..dhir.. Yeh kya hai.??
Randhir- sits on his knees- sorry sorry sorry..pls sanyu mujhe maaf kar do!!agli baat Mein gussa nahi hunga..plsss..main kisi aur baat se naraz tha..sorryy(and makes a puppy face)
Sanyu- sits on her knees with him and kisses him on his forehead- it's okay.. But promise no gussa..
Randhir- takes her in his arms and takes her to the bed room..Pakka no gussa..
Sanyu- kisses him on his nose- Acha ab office ke liye ready ho jaayo..

IN THE AFTERNOON
randhir goes and meet dada..dada tells him to seek revenge from the girl and leave her before he falls for her!!randhir listens him carefully and obeys him ..randhir goes from there and dada goes in flash back..

Mr aggarwal- aaye ladke tu yaha ka Malik nahi hai naukar hai..jaa kaam kar aur jaldi jaldi haath chala jaise Zubaan chalta hai...
Dada- ji Sahab Ji!!(and clenches his fists)
After a while mr aggarwal comes there and sees dada washing dishes in a hurry..
Mr aggarwal(in a sweet+ sarcastic tone)- itni jaldi Mein Kyu kaam kar rahe ho??
Dada- woh woh(scared) mujhe bahar Haan tha dosti ke sath jaana tha..
Me aggarwal- slaps him hard and throws him inside a room and says abh yahi Iss kamre Mein pade reh.. Yaha se baje nikal na toh dekh liyo..sirf khana banane ke liye bahar aayo !!!!


Dada has tears and says randhir ko toh Maine apne jaal Mein fasa diya..ab randhir ko lagega ki woh apne maa baap ke khuniyo ka badala le raha hai lekin woh toh unki hi madad kar raha hai and smiles evilly...
Randhir returns to home..he enters the house with the duplicate keys.. But what will he see was unexpected sanyu was there listening music in her earplugs but what was more important was that she was wearing his shirt..and dancing on the bed..he was falling for her but was determined not to loose his control..suddenly sanyu was about to fall but randhir saved her..they had an eyelock..sanyu pecked him on his lips..
Sanyu-hi!!tum aa Gaye..
Ran dhir- Haan..woh Bohot raat ho gayi hai!!dinner karte hai..
Sanyu- Haan chalo!!
They both eat the dinner..and sanyu kept the dishes in the kitchen and washed her hands and went inside the room..randhir was sleeping ..
Sanyu- randhir tumhe nahi lagta Aaj kal Bohot hi zyaada ladai ho Rahi hai..you know let's..you know what I mean..
Randhir- kya I don't know..(being innocent)
Sanyu jumps on him and kisses him passionately..
Sanyu- ab samjhe and starts unbuttoning his shirt..I think we need to do this randhir..
Randhir- sanyu abhi aise hi..
Sanyu- kisses him on his face and bites his ear!!and unbuttons her shirt..or should I say his shirt only as she is wearing his shirt..randhir gets flowed and pulls sanyu down and turns her under him..
Ran dhir- now I get it!!so my turn and with this he kisses her on her face..he didn't left a single spot..sanyu hands were on his belt..it was not opening..
Sanyu- belt hai ki RAssi Khulne ka naam nahi le Rahi!! 😡
Randhir removes her hands from his beltand opens it- done!!
Sanyu slids his pants down and says now done...
Randhir also slid her shalwar down and covers them with blanket and switched on the ac..
Ran dhir was not thinking of revenge he was just seeing the girl in front of him..he kissed her on her jawline and then neck and her cleavage..sanyu slid his boxers tooo...randhir unhooked her b*a and kissed her passionately..soon randhir entered sanyu first she was feeling pain but when she felt a soft pair of hands stroking her hair and cheek she started feeling beautiful..the bed sheet had blood spots!!
Randhir stopped and layed beside her and hugged her tightly..

Precap- why randhir why?? Aisa Kyu Kara??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

🥳res moi 1st

what the hell yaar that dada😡😡

huhh rd ko jaal me phasha liya😡

pity on sanyu use to kuch bhi nahi pata

it is amazing dear

btw thanks for pm me😊

Edited by cuteparsh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Amazing concept
And I really liked this new twist
Please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
I really liked it thanks for pm ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wowww awesome update dear 😊
this Dada what is his Vendata 😲 and why did he say that he trapped Randhir...and also Randhir is unknowingly helping his parents murderers ???
So many mysteries to be unfolded !!!
and SanDhir's first night...described beautifully...
thanks for the pm 🤗
UPDATE ASAP
Edited by gossipgirl12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NYC update so Dada is bhnd all this 😡 plz update next part soon and pm me if pssble 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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THIS WAS JUST TOO GOOD.
aND WHY dADA IS WORKING FOR aGRAWALS AS SERVANT😲😲
iS HE BETRAYING rANDHIR?wHAT DOES HE MEAN hE'S HELPING HIS PARENTS ONLY.
pLEASE UPDATE THE NEXT PART SOON
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: anjipankaj

THIS WAS JUST TOO GOOD.

aND WHY dADA IS WORKING FOR aGRAWALS AS SERVANT😲😲
iS HE BETRAYING rANDHIR?wHAT DOES HE MEAN hE'S HELPING HIS PARENTS ONLY.
pLEASE UPDATE THE NEXT PART SOON



He was working in childhood..and then he became a gangster!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
wow what a update .
read previous 2 updates in one go...
what is that rd doing m sure it will be very late when he realized his mistake
thanks for pm

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