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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 6

Kitna tension se bhra update tha Umang and Neel...god...Neel ne to bechare Umang ko hi suna dala And Aniket, iski timings se to me bhi pareshan hu! Kya yar kya karta hai? So Umang is going all the way to help His juniors...go boy go Ahaan..Dev must be having exquisitive eyes but not more than you! ...(Mene kuch nhi bola Aniket) ...so finally they remembered to wish the b'day boy! And Haha U can trust umang Aniket, he is not Anudeep and besides Neel is involved too...toh he'll be there!


Oh thank god is bar mera ph nhi kata..! Me kitni tensed thi Umang and dev ka convo..rofl...too good... mast update tha...! Mja aagya.. update do-chaar din mein

Aniket and his cell...rofl..tensed hai bechara mera hero...but yes I do agree with Umang here...Ani you should give priority to ur grp mates when in a grp...but dnt worry once things are settled..u'll be back to ur real self..!! and I'll make sure that ur bday becomes memorable...dur hui to kya..dil me tumhara naam hai... Hmm so Dev ko Aniket se prob hai samajh me ata hai, Ani ko bhi prob hai? Koina, this will be sorted as well oh Neel, u are so cute, juniors ke rehte seniors kam kaise kare? well, agar seniors are like Umang-Neeshi and gang we dnt mind doing something for them! Hahaha mobile classes, Ani beware Umang-Dev ka convo...was fab..!! Especially his reply to dirty vala thing And neeshi-neel ko bhi tabhi tapakna tha jb umang ne use apne hath se khilaya and on top of that, umang ate her jootha...and neel as always in his usual self teasing his Miss Universe Well, this was a splendid update...!!


Hahahaha ab questions ke answers to dene hoge, karne se pehle sochna tha Koina, hojata hai, abhi aur hoga... Neel ki protective streak to kamaal ki hai...! Vo khud hi itna kamaal ka hai...!! obvio as long as u r wid dev, koi kya bigad lega uska so dev ne baat kar bhi li bdi fast hai arjun and neeshi saath saath...kitne dino baad ...!!!


Huh...mera dil toot gya...if any one person I loved with all my heart and soul in this fic apart from Aniket it was Sheena...!! (I love some one else too...for obvious reasons...writer ko samjhna chahiye)

And what did she do? Too bad girl...too bad...!!!

Ab mujhe aake mnao...varna bhad me jao...!!!!

Me bhi aungi party mein...mere bina Ani ka bday...complete nhi hoga..!!

plzzz


Love Aniva!

Edited by Rajat_Fanatic - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi.. My name is Deepika.. U can call me Veera since there is another Deepika here.. Am a very big RTMC fan.. And 2 say the truth, I love ur sense of writing.. Just now read all the parts in one GO.. My LIKE button isn't working... Else surely LIKES for all chapters.. Can I have PMs for ur updates ? 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey debs...finallly cud manage to read it thoroughly...n do i need to tell it was fabbb...!! U rockk gal...just plzzz dont leave it unfinished n do complete ur other ones tooo..! U Knw i likr all ur work na... 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajat_Fanatic

Me first...me first...me first...!!

On chapter 4 and 5!


...Umang understood Dev ke intentions..!! This remebered me of our school days...we class mates used to fight alot...itni bjate the hum ek dusre ki at times even in front of teachers...but mzal hai koi bahar vala aake kuch bole..the whole class used to stand up for the person..irrespective of the fact that we hated him/her! 😊


Umang to smart nikla...!!! 👏


Aniket I miss you..!! 😭

Mujhe lga hi tha Dev investigation karvaegi with her statement "alright" ( Hah, smart me ) Oh god, ye Umang jaise log duniya me nhi hone chahiye! They make people like me suffer with taunts and humiliation..! Marja gud kha ke..huh. Ye Sheena ki bachi, kuch karke to nhi aayi? I mean kahi use uske bf ka pta to nhi chal gya?? Umang-Arjun ka part..hahah damn hilarious and last part ke liye 😆 😃

Le ye Neeshi thi, me Sheena samajh rhi thi Lol telepathy connection of Umang and Neeshi Jealous Arjun? Finally bhga hi diya use But boy you have to strive hard for her There are always somethings behind such dreams in fics/movies/shows...I'm sure yaha bhi hoga kuch! 😕


Gosh, finally my hero is here...! 👏

But one sec? You disconneced...tu ghar aa beta btati hu tujhe...!! 😡

Happy Birthday Aniket...! 😳 😳

Anudeep you B******d..!! 😡 Ek to tune Aniket ko prob me daala. Dn Dev ke sath..you watch...your death is coming! 😡

Dev, mene to pehle hi kha tha..Aniket isn't bad...he is a ...me kyu btau?? It is my privy thought of him, jo vo bhi nhi janta...😉 😳 ❤️ ☺️

Love AniVa...!! .



Tu sacchi mahan h. Aur pagal bhi. Hadh h. Aniket ki deewani. Dev has every reason to be angry with aniket. Khair, thanka for commenting dear. I love your detailed comments. Neeshi ka raaz jaldi bahar nahi aayega par sheena ka aa jayega. And well, usme kuch khaas nhi h. Sheena galtiyan karke seekhti h. That's her plus point.

Umang jaise log hone nahi chahiye??? U sure? Coz I thought RT is also talented, just like umang.😉

Khair. Keep reading Aniva.

Lots of luv
Flavia
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia



Tu sacchi mahan h. Aur pagal bhi. Hadh h. Aniket ki deewani. Dev has every reason to be angry with aniket. Khair, thanka for commenting dear. I love your detailed comments. Neeshi ka raaz jaldi bahar nahi aayega par sheena ka aa jayega. And well, usme kuch khaas nhi h. Sheena galtiyan karke seekhti h. That's her plus point.

Umang jaise log hone nahi chahiye??? U sure? Coz I thought RT is also talented, just like umang.😉

Khair. Keep reading Aniva.

Lots of luv
Flavia


Hone chahiye...hone chahiye..me to mzak kar rhi thi.
Rajat is the best koi kuch bhi bole.😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aur vaise bhi vo payr hi kya jisme aap uske deewane na bno. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajat_Fanatic

Chapter 6

Kitna tension se bhra update tha Umang and Neel...god...Neel ne to bechare Umang ko hi suna dala And Aniket, iski timings se to me bhi pareshan hu! Kya yar kya karta hai? So Umang is going all the way to help His juniors...go boy go Ahaan..Dev must be having exquisitive eyes but not more than you! ...(Mene kuch nhi bola Aniket) ...so finally they remembered to wish the b'day boy! And Haha U can trust umang Aniket, he is not Anudeep and besides Neel is involved too...toh he'll be there!


Hahaha. Kya karen Apu. Umang bechara to aankhon me hi ulajh gaya. Not his fault,you know.😛 And well, aniket ko time lagega sabko trust karne me. After all, wo hai hi aisa. Neel helps everybody...no worries there.


Oh thank god is bar mera ph nhi kata..! Me kitni tensed thi Umang and dev ka convo..rofl...too good... mast update tha...! Mja aagya.. update do-chaar din mein

Aniket and his cell...rofl..tensed hai bechara mera hero...but yes I do agree with Umang here...Ani you should give priority to ur grp mates when in a grp...but dnt worry once things are settled..u'll be back to ur real self..!! and I'll make sure that ur bday becomes memorable...dur hui to kya..dil me tumhara naam hai... Hmm so Dev ko Aniket se prob hai samajh me ata hai, Ani ko bhi prob hai? Koina, this will be sorted as well oh Neel, u are so cute, juniors ke rehte seniors kam kaise kare? well, agar seniors are like Umang-Neeshi and gang we dnt mind doing something for them! Hahaha mobile classes, Ani beware Umang-Dev ka convo...was fab..!! Especially his reply to dirty vala thing And neeshi-neel ko bhi tabhi tapakna tha jb umang ne use apne hath se khilaya and on top of that, umang ate her jootha...and neel as always in his usual self teasing his Miss Universe Well, this was a splendid update...!!


Dev and Neel ek dusre ki tang na khinche to kaam kaise chalega. After all,they are the best of friends. Hai na.

Umang and Neeshi are adorable. They make such a cute pair. Personally,they are my favourite. 😛


And aniket, he has a lot to learn.


Hahahaha ab questions ke answers to dene hoge, karne se pehle sochna tha Koina, hojata hai, abhi aur hoga... Neel ki protective streak to kamaal ki hai...! Vo khud hi itna kamaal ka hai...!! obvio as long as u r wid dev, koi kya bigad lega uska so dev ne baat kar bhi li bdi fast hai arjun and neeshi saath saath...kitne dino baad ...!!!


Huh...mera dil toot gya...if any one person I loved with all my heart and soul in this fic apart from Aniket it was Sheena...!! (I love some one else too...for obvious reasons...writer ko samjhna chahiye)

And what did she do? Too bad girl...too bad...!!!

Ab mujhe aake mnao...varna bhad me jao...!!!!

Me bhi aungi party mein...mere bina Ani ka bday...complete nhi hoga..!!

plzzz


Hehehe. Arey sheena is just a human. Jaise uske samne scenes n situations honge waise hi react karegi na. Manane ke liye mai aaun ya aniket ko bhejun??? Haan aa jana. Agar tujhe teri padhai se mukti mile to.


Thanks for your detailed comments Apu. Lovr you too.

Love Aniva!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajat_Fanatic

Aur vaise bhi vo payr hi kya jisme aap uske deewane na bno. 😉


Aur isliye umang jaise log hone chahiye. Jo pyaar me deewane ho. Inspite of having a sharp mind, they chooae heart over head at the right time.😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you dear.
will update now.
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Originally posted by: veeranu

Hi.. My name is Deepika.. U can call me Veera since there is another Deepika here.. Am a very big RTMC fan.. And 2 say the truth, I love ur sense of writing.. Just now read all the parts in one GO.. My LIKE button isn't working... Else surely LIKES for all chapters.. Can I have PMs for ur updates ? 😳


Hello Veera,

welcome to the world of Dev and ... 😉 Try guessing.

IF ko sach me tumse koi prb hai. This is the third time I Am typing a reply to your comment.

Thanks a lot for your appreciation. It means a lot to me.

I will update today and send you a pm. If you can then do send me a buddy request.

Lots of love
Flavia

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