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Ashlesha

@SheWantsFanfic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: sakina1267
Read all the parts in one go Woah? Really? Cool!
i am awestruck... 😳 And I a, blushing
all the parts are brilliantly written this update is full of mysteries...
randhir and parth both looks evil In their own ways yes!
is randhir backstabbing sanyukta?? All will be revealed
scared for sanyukta... Lol. Really Saku?
urgh!!... Ash you need to update this fast... please please

Updating today love, don't fret!

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Ashlesha

@SheWantsFanfic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: Paravi
Shit man...!! Why do I always miss such brilliant works?? I don't know Janu!
God Kyu???
Read all the parts in a go...!!
I mean wow.. Awesome ff partner...!! *giggle*
Really loved it...!!
Parth and his cruel intentions... Oh, very very cruel ones😳
What's happening??
Is randhir also cheating sanyu??
Poor sanyukta...
Really curious to know about the girl
Update ASAP
Thanks for the pm
Love Janavi

No probs girl!

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Ashlesha

@SheWantsFanfic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: Happy_hippy

Updating today itself!

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Ashlesha

@SheWantsFanfic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: Moony87

Its f**kING AWESOMEEE.. So many mysteriess.. And both men HOT AND EVIL.. LEKIN VIDARTH MAANGTA MUJHEEE

Aww moony!!!

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sakina1267

@sakina1267

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

res yayy I wanted to be first... I vl try ash to give a long review.. loved it nd love you... unres
ah I so love you... nd also hate you at the same time, you almost killed me by suspense...
I thought parth was getting intimate with sanyukta uff this thought itself makes me feel like puking... sarth are unbearable... nd also thinking randhir backstabbing sanyu...
I'm relieved that parth has kidnapped vids because vidarth are meant to be...
parth is evil in this ff nd thats what make him more hot... hehe vids in salwar kamiz...
nd I liked your poem which added more beauty to this chapter...
I guess I told you before also but if I didn't then Im telling you now... you are an amazing writer nd I love your works... update it soon dr nd yeah I'm on mission now stalking your ff hehe

Edited by sakina1267 - 10 years ago

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don girls

@don girls

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

Awesome update
So it's vids that was taken by Parth
I thought that it was Sanyu
Update soon

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Loved d Update!!!

Dis update was a relief...its parth n viahushi n sandhya...:)

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#168

I can't comment in detail, but bloody hell for the poem!!

I loved those satin coated steel lines! Mwh..

And and and the very last part where Parth asked with subtle anxiety as she chewed the sandwich.. So cute. Dark yet cute.

😆

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Mukta

@Greys_Anatomy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#169

Nice and kinda hot 😉😉😉😉😉😉

Thamks for the update 👏👏👏👏👏

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#170

Omggg moi dead after reading this
Mane seriously moi shocked beyong imagination

All that tym I was thinking parth kidnapped sanyu
Bt freaking no she was vids god

Meko toh lagta h mje firse ek bar sb kuch phadana pdega
Really this is the best twist ever

U r the best yr
Luv u

Vids lossing her cntrl with parth
He luvs her so much bt rite now he's sum one else

This part was really dark
Moi luved it

Now I think in car the girl was sanyu
Yr vidharth mystery kafi haad tak clear hogi
Bt sandhir is still a mystery to me

Rd fb scene awsme

Rd was an evil
Is he changed r not

So many ques hovering my mind

Cnt wait update soon

Keep smiling