SwaRon OS: Predictable Swayam

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SwaRon OS: Predictable Swayam...


Okay first things first. This is my first work without anyone else's help. I have no idea if you guys will like the story or not but please do give it a chance.
I know it sucks and is worthless. I really don't know how to write. 😒

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PREDICTABLE! Swayam is so predictable nowadays. I mean his unpredictable nature is becoming predictable now. Take today for example we are suppose to be on a date and i could easily predict each and every moment till now. I was able to foretell Swayam's every move. Swayam was right Predictable Is So Boring' i love him a lot but honestly now I'm getting bored. All our dates seem to be same only the location and the dress changes.


Swayam always says that I should say what I feel. Never hesitate. So I'm gonna tell him that he's boring now, he isn't predictable anymore. I know it sounds harsh but i have to. I can't bare another boring date. I'll tell him the truth in 5... 4... 3... 2... Oh! Shit. I can't I love him too much. I can bare another predictable date but can't bare hurting him. I've already troubled him a lot in the past. I'll simply smile and act as if I'm enjoying myself and NO ONE WILL EVER KNOW.


Sharon! Sharon!' I was shocked as swayam shouted at me.

What happened. Why are you shouting?' I replied snapping out of my thoughts

Kaha khoi hui ho. Last 5 minutes se awaz laga raha hun. Ice-cream aa gayi hain and apparently melt bhi ho gayi hain. Are you alright. Ghar jana hain.'


Shit! Why am i always so deep into my thoughts? Think Sharon think. Give him a good reason. He under no circumstances can know the truth. Just smile and give the reason, he'll believe it.

Oh! I was so a bit tensed about the... the.. the workshops. Yes the workshops' I replied calmly

The workshops?' Swayam questioned

I'm dead.

Ya I mean kal new students aa rahe hain academy main. Batches, dance styles, registration forms, fee structure, board meeting, instructions etc. Etc. So I'm a bit tensed. And collaboration bhi hain so highly tensed.' I covered up immediately.

'Fare enough' Swayam replied a bit convinced. 'But yeh sab baad main sochna abhi finish your ice-cream and then i'll drop you home.'

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Finally! This day comes to an end and so does the date. I'm back in my cosy bed with my thoughts. Good Sharon, very good. I'm proud of you. Tumhne aacha reason diya. Swayam kafi convinced lag raha tha. I just hope that woh apna dimag zyada na chalaye or else he'll figure it out. He always does. I don't know what's up with me? College khatam hue hue 5 saal ho gaye hain and aaj tak mujhe aisa feel nahi hua.

We quiet easily made it through the rough patch and ab toh NYDA & D3 academy ka collaboration bhi ho raha hain. Money problem bhi nahi hain and students bhi kafi hain. Mom ko bhi Swayam pasand hain sab kuch smooth sailing hain, So ab yeh problem kyun? Itni time se koi fight nahi hui na shayad isliye.

Anyway, I need to rest because from tomorrow onwards new bohot kaam hain. Hopefully I'll survive.

** After 2 weeks **

'Congrats Sharon!' Swayam came and hugged me from behind.

Sara kaam khatam ho gaya and most of all collaboration successfully ho gaya. Ab tumhe mujhse koi dur nahi rakh sakta. Finally tum aur main akele, kitna kuch share karna hain tumse. So tonight at 7 if you're free.'

No! Say no. You can't go on a date. But those eyes, oh they are so pretty. Focus Sharon. You can't go. Say no or even better tell him the truth. He deserves to know. JUST SAY NO.

OKAY! Fine with me. Meet you tonight.'

Love you Sharon'. He smiled gently, kissed me on my cheeks and left.

You stupid, coward, idiot girl. How could you. You're a strong confident young lady Sharon. Since when are you afraid to express your own feelings. Tum kab se logo ke bare main sochne lagi. Since the day i fell in love. I could have simply said no but yes kehne ke baad jo Swayam ke face pain smile aai woh nahi dekh pati. Swayam Shekhawat tumhare liye kya kya jhelna padta hain. Poor me.

I was engrossed in my thoughts that I didn't notice Simmi walking down the hallway and bumped straight into her.

'Sorry' we exclaimed together. We got up and started to walk towards the parking lot.

Sharon you mind if i ask you something.' I nodded. 'Is something wrong in your life. I mean nowadays you're so distracted. What's up?'

Should I tell her? Maybe not but a bit company can help. Personal problems share nahi karungi but thodi himat mil jayegi. Can't believe Swayam ke saath date pain jaane ke liye himat chahiye.

Simmi as aaj tum free ho I need your help.'

For what!'

Aaj meri Swayam ke saath date hain. So you know dress up, make up, accessories, heels. What's say?'

Let's have some fun.'

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Sharon What's this? Are you planning on wearing this on your date? SHORTS! Please wear something elegant and classy like a dress or a gown perhaps. Shorts toh tum roz pehenti ho. Just because Swayam says he likes you the way you are doesn't mean you take it seriously. What's wrong with you?' Simmi shouted at me.

'Simmi nothing's wrong with me. I'm perfectly fine. It's just that I know Swayam. He'll pick me up on his cycle and dresses ke saath cycle pain baithna is uncomfortable. So shorts.' I explained

'Well hope that you're ready because Swayam ka call aa gaya hain. He's waiting downstairs'

'Okay bye. Thanks for your help.' I hugged Simmi and left.

Enjoy Sharon.'

I rushed downstairs praying that this date doesn't turn out to be like the previous one. As soon as i opened the gates I got the biggest shock of my life.

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There he was standing in front of his CAR wearing a black TUXEDO holding a ROSE BOUQUET.

A car! Tuxedo! Bouquet! Okay now I'm really feeling dizzy. He handed me the bouquet, gave a slight peck on my cheek and escorted me to my seat. The entire journey my mind was wondering that what happened. Did he undergo a shock therapy or does he has a twin or worse the aliens have abducted my Swayam and now they are torturing him. I was so busy decoding Swayam behaviour that i didn't realize we had just entered a 5-star hotel. A hotel booked only for us. A hotel near the beach.


The manager escorted us to the beach side venue. The view i saw was breathtaking. A table for two stood there in the middle. Above it hung the beautiful lights. On one side was the cold sand while on the other side the waves came poring in. The moon was shining brightly making the night even more romantic. We also had our own orchestra who would be playing soft music throughout the date.

Swayam ordered the food and to my surprise instead of Indian and chat he ordered Italian cuisine, and red wine instead of tea. Sharon aaj toh tujhe jhatke pain jhatke lag rahe hain. If i found myself in a hospital it's all Swayam's fault.

Swayam tumhari tabyat toh theek hain?'

Ya. Why?'

I mean all of this. Tum yeh sab kabhi nahi karte ho. Who the hell are you and what have you done to my Swayam.' I said while pointing my knife in his direction. Swayam chuckled and stood up, leaned on his knee and asked me for a dance. We both were dancing as if there was no tomorrow. I knew i was gonna ruin this magical moment but i had to ask him.

Swayam yeh sab'

I know tum kya poochne wali ho.'

You do.'

Sharon I know you too well'

Ya but I don't. Whenever I feel that finally I know tum change ho jate ho. Not fair.' I pouted innocently.

Actually Sharon tumhe predictable Swayam zyada pasand nahi hain. So change is a must'

Ya I hate predictable Swa... Tumhe kaise pata?'

Last date se idea lag gaya tha and after that tum kafi weird behave kar rahi thi. Intelligent hun thoda dimaag lagaya sab samajh aa gaya.' Swayam smirked

Now if you don't mind can we dance.'

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It felt like eternity standing there in Swayam's arms. Swayam holding me closely to himself. Both of us swaying slowly. When suddenly Swayam broke the hug and started at me. I could see the love and passion in his eyes. His intense gaze was making me weak. In no matter of time he came dangerously close to me. As he came closer my heart pounced hard. It was natural that my heart urged for his closeness when he was around. But one more thing that my heart always experienced was protectiveness. He would never cross those limits though I would be all set to do so. For him my surrenderance was his trust not an advantage. As usual I wanted to feel his lips on mine, but never took that step, instead he would make my forehead feel lucky every time. He came closer I could smell his cologne. I rested both my hands over his nape while his hands were cupping my face. Eventually his nose collapsed mine and what happened next was unexpected. His lips touched mine.

I was struck for a moment. I... I... I couldn't believe this amazement. A long aspired teenage dream, a long awaited urge was fulfilled. His lips seemed perfect for mine. My hands slid into his hair. A tear made its way out of my over-whelmed eyes. We felt each other's lips till we ran out of breath. We could stay there till eternity. He pecked out and looked at me, those tears irked him so he cleared them from my face with his fingers and kissed my cheek. I fell in love with him again. He embraced me again in his arms and we started to dance. Honestly, I was shocked, I still am. I didn't expect this. I've experienced all sides of Swayam but never this one. It was magical. Those few minutes I truly felt that I was on cloud 9. Before I could ask Swayam replied.

I know you were expecting a forehead kiss. As always but as I always say 'PREDICTABLE IS SO BORING'. Aur vaise bhi pichle date ke liye compensate toh karna hi tha na.' I smiled slightly.

I told you Sharon. Tum bohot special ho and hamari first kiss bhi bohot special hogi.' I could feel my cheeks turning red. I nuzzled myself into his crook to hide my blush. I hugged him tight and enjoyed the most amazing date ever with the most unpredictable boyfriend.

I love you Swayam.'

Will always love you Sharon.'


PS. A special thanks to Sanskruti. This OS would have been incomplete without your efforts.

Please do give honest opinions. 😊

Edited by -spongy- - 11 years ago
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I'm so proud that u finally decided to write something of your own sissy
i know ur FF is doing really well but I'm glad u FINALLY wrote something all by yourself
after all sab ko pata hona chahiye ki tu kitni acchi writer hai...

Please don't think that I'm going to flatter you because your my sister ok... i'll give my honest opinion on what i think pakka!!

What do you mean "it sucks and it's worthless"... when will you stop underestimating yourself sissy?
Face it, you're really talented and nothing is going to change that...

Awesome work on the story thought yaar... i really mean it
Sharon's character felt so real, I was actually imagining all her scenes in my head while reading
and the whole concept of Swayam becoming boring was such a great idea!!
but my favourite part was definitely the date
kya ideas the yaar... aur kya description tha... it was literally the perfect date
and when Sharon pointed the knife at Swayam 🤣🤣🤣
Your writing has really improved a lot sissy... i can tell by the way you wrote that really descriptive and romantic scene when Swaron are dancing
And the KISS ☺️ haaayyyeee main toh mar gayi

So basically your OS was really really good... if it was a little longer then it would have been AMAZING 😛
but there is always room for improvement so i really hope u write more
and maybe you should explore with different sides to Sharon also as in different emotions
anyways yeh sirf mera opinion hai... the rest is up to you
but seriously, great OS... I really loved it

- Rae
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i'll give you my honest opinion 😆
OS was very good. considering its your first work on your own..
i loved the story and the way you wrote it down..mazaa agaya padhkar..😃
Sharon's complains about swayam being predictable and the date in which swayam was unpredictable was awesome..
the date was lovely..and so was the way swayam understood sharon's thoughts..
keep writing,
thanks for the PM.

cheers
Nishi

P.S.awesome banner. 👏
Edited by Nishi.Kss - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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like sharon I m on cloud 9 too..
intelligent swayam,
I simply loves this side of him..
lovely os dear..
thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful os...loved it...Awesome concept...Romantic swaron...😳
love the way you have explained it...
thanx for pm...
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Awesome os...loved it...
Swayam and predictable...hmm...well he is in the show...
Loved sharon's thoughts here...she wanted to tell swayam but she couldn't bcs she can't hurt him and she wwanted to see his smile...ohhh...i just loved her thoughts so so so much...
And finally unpredictable swayam...he arrenged a grand date for sharon...ohh...my loverboy swayam...oppss...sorry sharon's loverboy swayam ...and i really liked sharon's thought when he came close...seriously u just beautifuly written it...and then their first special kiss...loved it ...
P.S 5 long years...kuch jyada nahi ho gaya...
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Really amazing os
Loved it
Predictable is so boring

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