ArHi: TS-Day to be Remembered...{Completed} Shot-3(B) #Pg-10 #13-7-14 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was wonderful update...

Sheetal is not that bad girl... circumstances are created what she is now.. she is acting like b*** but in true, she is not...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Omg that was real shocking dear..
Sheetal and her story...

Cool update
Waiting for my arshi.

But why did she tell fake gf...does she know arnav intrest in khushi even before their relation ship started ..???

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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: misscrazyfan

Omg that was real shocking dear..

Sheetal and her story...

Cool update
Waiting for my arshi.

But why did she tell fake gf...does she know arnav intrest in khushi even before their relation ship started ..???


Hey dear...it's that Arnav already made it clear with her that she isn't going to be his real girl friend.

~*~ PARA ~*~

{Even though he was particularly clear about his terms and conditions, of me being his girlfriend wouldn't be real, he wouldn't cross any of his limits with me, I can get to claim of being his girl friend and blah blah blah}

~*~ PARA ~*~

Here he clears out that she wouldn't be his real girl friend, but a girl friend in name. Hope you got it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Sravs, you did a great job dear! From the start, i was excited for sheetal's POV and this is just wonderful!
Well-written! Continue soon with part-B.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Sheetal is not that bad.. Circumstances make people bad.. So arnav used Sheetal as his fake girlfriend.. Is it because to make khushi jealous.. Loved the part.. Can't wait for the second update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
This TS of yours had made a soft corner for Sheetal in my heart😳 otherwise she is a bitch.
Edited by xVanix - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Amazing update!!!
Sheetal is not what she seems n shows...
n her p.o.v was awesome...
so nicely written...
n hs she fallen fr arnav??
wtng fr prt B..
n thnx fr d pm..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#48


Nice update...
Feeing bad for Sheetal...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Felt bad for Sheetal
Awesome update
waiting for the next part
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
good...thank you for the PM..

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