Crazy but Cute (CH:3) 18/9 pg:9 (NEW) PM later :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yeah Yeah I know I already have 3 ongoing FFs in IF and still I am daring to start a new one.

I promise to finish Before its too Late very soon...

and other two U2 and ILTWIH both I will update simultaneously, so don't worry you will get update for every one at least once in a week (if there is a change I will surely inform you all in advance)

Now... actually I was lil tired of writing all serious dramas so I though of writing something light and fun as my stress buster and then I came up with an idea and here I present the first chapter of my crazy SFF


Crazy but Cute

Again Thanks to My Darling Chav for this crazy-cute banner...


Chapter One: A for Awkward


"AAA..." two women screamed in unison.

"What the...?" A man only in his boxers and highly aroused fell down from the king size bed unable to withstand the sudden push as his partner sprang up on bed in a sitting position

"Sorry... Sorry... Sorry" One of the women among the two present in the room had her eyes closed while profusely apologizing for the reason she wasn't sure about herself.

"Who are you?" the other woman only in her black bikini and panty asked furiously covering herself as much as she could in the white sheet on the bed.

"What are you doing in our room." the man asked looking daggers at the intruder, who stood on the other side of the huge bed, her eyes still closed and her hands clutching the side of her baby pink PJs. Her open burgundy hair forming a halo around her oval fair face. If it would have been any other time he sure would have taken a minute or two to admire the beauty before him, but right now he was too mad to notice.


"Your room?" her eyes shot open in astonishment.

"YES" the man and the other woman said in unison.

Her eyes turned into saucers on her face as she ran to check the room number.

The color of her face drained as she saw the number 409 on the door. Her eyes darted between the almost naked people in the room and on the number plate of the door a few times before she gave an awkward smile to the couple who were spitting fire through their eyes in her direction. Never in her life had she felt this embarrassed before. She decided to go and get her still unpacked luggage form the wrong room and go check in her room. The right room.

Wait! But where is her right' room?

She clearly remembered when she had checked the room number before entering the room it said 406 then how come in an hour it became room number 409?

Confusedly she looked ahead and found another door in opposite side had the same number on it 409.

How in hell this is possible?

She again looked back on the door before which she was now standing and suddenly it clicked her.

She checked the metallic number 9 again and sure enough it was loosely dangling from its hinge.

So this is how room number 406 became room number 409!

The breath she was holding left her in a whoosh, when she saw she was indeed in the right room.

While she was solving the mystery of changed room number the patience of the man inside the room had worn off.

He came here expecting a wild passionate night with his current fling but instead he got the most embarrassing shock of his life.

A woman, already sleeping on the same bed where he had already started to execute his plan of a night of wild sex, not noticing the slim figure sleeping in the corner of the bed under the duvet, in their highly aroused drunken dazed state.

Sh*t!

He ran the fingers of his both hands in his midnight black thick mane agitated.

His fling looked equally miffed as him, and red as a tomato in embarrassment and fury at the same time.

As soon their eyes met she whined "Darling do something. Throw her out of the room. This is so embarrassing."

He rolled his eyes as if he was enjoying. He looked down and found his arousal still very much visible and felt his ears heating up.

"F*ck" never in his life had he faced such situation. He hurriedly walked towards the wardrobe in the room and took out a robe. Tying the robe around his torso tightly and securely he walked over to the woman still stood like a statue on the threshold, lost.

"Are you going to stand here all night?" he hissed successfully startling her out of her thoughts.

He watched amused as she jumped on her place and staggered back, hitting the back of her head on the door frame in the process.


"Ouch!" She yelped in pain and started rubbing the place where she had gotten hit.

"Sorry" she apologized again making him sigh exasperatedly but what she said next made him embarrassed to a whole new level.

"Umm Mr. I am sorry to break this to you but I am in the right room where as you have intruded in my room by mistake."

Seeing him about to retort she held her hand out and said "Let me explain first...

"You see this number 9 is not really number 9, it is number 6 which is a little loosely fit on the plate. (Showing the number she explained with her hands and eye movement like she was explaining a five years old) So it may have happened that when I have had closed the door after checking in it had turned by the force of it and became number 9."

She pointed towards the actual room 409 as she continued to explain "Now that is actually your room." and as she saw color creeping up on his face she somehow felt pity on his state and hurriedly tried to pacify him in an attempt to get him out of his misery so herself, but making him feel more mortified in the process, unintentionally of course, "No ... no problem... it happens... you know... you were... umm... not really... not really paying attention ... you know you were busy... in other... other things.. (she eyed the girl who had no clue what they were talking about and had her eyes zeroed on them) so it's really okay."

He looked away not really able to form any word, redness of his face could beat his girlfriend's a while ago, any day.

"You... you do one thing... stay here... I will shift to that room... you are not really in a state... (she eyed his bulge unable to help before looking away saying hurriedly)... you not really in proper shape to shift right away and I need to sleep NOW so I will go."


She almost ran in the room like some mad dog was after her and got her red trolley bag from the corner of the room and her discarded clothes from the couch, where she had thrown them before going to the bed. She came back in record speed and spread her hand before him for the card.

"The card please" she said not meeting his eyes.

As he walked in the room to get the card from his trouser pocket he shook his head feeling himself the biggest fool on the face of earth.

How could he miss that? The door of the room was already unlocked when they had stumbled inside kissing the daylight out of each other.

He came back with the card and as soon he handed it over to her she clutched it tight as if her life depended on it.

She smiled nervously before making a dash towards the other room and as he looked on amused, the awkwardness forgotten for that little moment, she just ran in the room and closed the door with a loud bang behind looking like she was the one who had been caught in the act not to mention ALMOST NAKED AND AROUSED.

"She is crazy but she is cute." He thought smiling genuinely for the first time but soon his smile changed into a rueful sigh as he turned to see the woman on the bed looking at him alluringly, all ready to get back to the business again.

That is all she wants from him! Oh no not really! How can he forget the name and fame which comes after being tagged with his name, Arnav Singh Raizada, the young entrepreneur of the year.

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So guys tell me how it is? shall I continue? is it worth?

please let me know...


Index:

Chapter One: 108882847

Chapter Two: 110075598

Chapter Three:


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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was something I love to read! Will wait for the update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome.👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

It looks like fun.😆
I can't wait to read more.
Thanks.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was nc
liked it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start. pls continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thats an interesting start!
Would love to read the story!
With one look at the girl, ASR realized the difference between the two women! Rose and a weed!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing
Loved it
It was actually embarrassing and awkward situation which was very funny
Thanks for pm
Surely continue
Would love to read more...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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That's an amazing start
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesomeness dear
Please continue.
Looking forward to seeing more.
😭 Arnav is playing boy😭
Arnav was😳 in front of khushi😉
Lovely starting ... please continue soon.
Can't wait for next update.

Unknowingly Part- II ... story is fabulous ...
And I read 5 or 6 updates😊 3 weeks ago ... and send my buddy request ...
Thank you so much for accepted it ...

I'm really sorry for my late reply.
But I promise to be continue after Ramadan ...😳
I'm taking a leave for a month of Ramadan And will be back after Eid.
Please keep me in your buddy list.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was absolutely hilarious ...and she is cute apologizing for their mistake and choosing to save herself from an embarrassing situation...
Looking forward to read more...

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