MG ff.This life is yours #4 Epilogues 1-7 Page 31/32...thank you 22sep - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I just loved dis ff sooo muchhh...It's Superbbb...loved each nd every part again...don't how many times i read dis ff again nd again...It's Outstandinggg story...waitinggg 4 last part ...plzzz PM me too nd Teaser is Awesome...
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updating..but what to do..this is not the last part😆
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haye haye mysore palace...

Shaadi ki tayari chal rahi hai kya
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I don't find anyone complaining for next not being the last one...😛
update kardo me watiting
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Hai dears,😊
thanks for the friends who gave cmnts n likes😃

once a reader asked me to add sequence of geet doing martial arts..sry dear i forgot the person who asked it..n i couldnt do it like u wished..but hope u will like this..n this update is for u..bcoz this part popped inside me by ur idea

Part 55

Maan saw maharaj walking with slow steps. It looked Unusual to him.

Maan took fast steps and reached him

Maan: erm. Any problem.

Maharaj: can we talk.

Maan moved inside study giving space for him.

Maan showed the chair n both took opposite seats.

Maan broke the silence

Maan: kuch kehnatha

Maharaj:hmm

Both were looking at each other. There was silence n finally maharaj broke it.

Maharaj:im thinking to leave to my state today.

Maan: itni jaldi.cant you stay with us for few more days. Geet will be happy.

Maharaj: I too wish to.but my Kingdom needs me. It's not only me. My state has lost its queen.i cant stay away for long. They needs me.n I too want to be with princess.after a long time I m seeing her.i want to spend time with her n her family.. But a king cant avoid his responsibilities..

Saying it he let a long breathe.. Maan understood the problem.

Maan : ok.

Maharaj still hesitated to say what he want too..silence prevailed between them..

Maharaj: I called you to say thank you.

Maan: why

Maharaj:for being with princess.i know I have no right to say it.but if anything would have been happenned I would not have forgiven myself for entire lives. Rani was always right.but my ego that got hurt bcoz of princess running away.i made it more tough that she never turned back to me.

He sighed heavily

Maharaj:sometimes youngers are more understanding than us.n they teach us the life in few meetings. Like you n ur family...In this one day I ve learned how to be a father.n what miracle a families love can do. U all think of others happiness over yours.there is no ego even if its ur enemy.i feel very low.how small thought is mine.only by age im elder.but your all thoughts are high n the values you gave to your children's are also too high .I can see what mistake ive done. Losing my daughter n living alone. its all bcoz of my ego.

Maan let him pour his heart out. A strong powerful man is breaking his inner wall and opening up. If he stopped he can't open like this later. Maharaj went on with his deeds what he did n didn't. Maan silently listened to all.n then spoke

Maan:maharaj.whatever happened is past.forget it.lets live our present. What's in future we don't know. But we can live the present happily.

Maharaj felt so light after talking to him.

Maharaj:thank u beta..n call me papa..im ur fil..

Maan :hmm ok..ma..sry..papa..

Maharaj:a req from me..will you all come to mysore and stay with me for few days .

Maan hesitated he had lots of works as he missed office bcoz of geets hospitalization.

Like Maharaj understood him he told

Maharaj:I know u have works beta.i wish u all to be there for geets mothers aathma santhi pooja.its next week.i didnt fulfil ranis last wish.atleast her soul will rest in peace if you all are present there.

Maan:ji for sure.

Maharaj was all set to go.he stood in the center of Hall. Geet asked him to stay for some more time. But he denied.he called both his grandchildren s .janvi n abhi both are still not in terms with him.may be the sudden appearance of maharajah or may be knowing the truth that he is their mothers father who didnt turn till now seeing them for once.still they are not out of shock n they treated him like a guest with minimum talk s.

Geet signalled them to go n both moved to him.

He took both in his embrace n stood still for a moment. Only geet know her dad is getting emotional but hiding it behind his Stern face.

Ram singh came n handed him two packs.

Maharaj:I know im not a good grand father too.but I want to give my grand childrens something.first time im seeing you both n I don't want to leave you without giving you gifts. This is not valuable before your love n bond with your family. Im also trying to be one amongst you all. So please accept this small gift.

Maan eyed both to take it. They took it. Jaanvi opened the package n saw a big Diamond necklace with earrings bangles n rings. N abhis gift was too same like it a big stoned Diamond Ring .a diamond pendant with chain n a bracelet. Both had a unique symbol in it..

Geet: papa yeh tho..This belongs to the heir of Kingdom

Maharaj: yes, its hereditary n belongs to the heir of king .I must have given this to you n damadji..but I think u both will be happy to see your children getting it..Once you come their I ll announce officially these both gems are my Grand children. ur mom would be happy seeing it from heaven.

His eyes had a thin layer of tears which he easily hided.

Maharaj:ab mujei chalna chahiye.

He took leave from dadi n all.he sat in his car and looked back at maans family. All are standing there to send off him. It's because of love. No pressure .all have given him respect as Maharaj . That has only made his heart a hard rock n now it can see the love. Shayad if he has heard to his wifes plea.its too late.

He sighed n left to airport with a new zeal.he want to welcome his daughter n her family in a grand way..

Once he reached his state he called his ministers n told them about his new decision. Some were happy some or not. But obeyed to Kings order n fulfill his wish. His last wish as a King. Behind his back the ministers made a personal meeting n reconsidered kings decision..all accepted with a plan..they called their well known gaurds n instructed them what to do when princess n her family arrives..
maharaj on the other side made arrangements to welcome their princess back to home

Maan n family was again pampering geet.n not allowing her to work.her health was normal, but dr.s has adviced her not to stress n get emotional.
arjun on the other side tried to contact jaanvi..but she ignored his calls..sometimes piya was there giving him lame excuses for jaanu not round..

maaneet with family went to mysore after a week..geet has forced her father not to give special importance for their arrival..but maharaj had his own way..he did not make her ways to palace special..but decored the entrance n palace..maneet didn't say their arriving time to mahal..to avoid special attention..only his bg's were there..
geet was on way home..only 1 car was following them with guards..she was getting emotional being in her land after so many years..she felt her heart heavy..maan squeezed her hands saying not to get emotional..suddenly the car jerked n stopped at mid of road..
maan:what happenned..
driver:dont know sir..maharaj specially ordered this car for ur arrival..new hai..dont know whats the trouble..let me check..
he went out..even the guards came there to ask whats the prob..suddenly they were surrounded by many peoples..who had hid their face in mask..they had weapens in hands..the gaurds tried to fight back..but the masked people sprayed something n all fainted in secs..
one of the men ordered maan n others to come out..
maaneet were worried for the others..
masked men(mm):give ur things..
geet knotted her brows:are u thieves..

she asked in disbelief..she cant think of thieves in their city..
mm:then what do u think..
he came before n kept the sword on her neck..
mm:take off the jewels n give us..
maan:hmm..geetu..remove it..n give them..

man doesn't want geet to be hurt by them..
the other men looked at jaanu n asked her 2 remove her jewelery..
geet n jaanvi looked at each other while giving abhi n maan to follow them..before man understood what she is saying geet n jaanu gave a punch to the men who had the sword on them..
mm:you wont listen politely..
he ordered the others to catch them..soon others started to move towards maan n family..only dadi was inside the car..it looked like a war field..all four were attacking them not letting them near ..suddenly what geet thought maan doesnt know..she stopped fighting n maan thought may be she got tired bcoz of her health..the mms surrounded her n man came to save her only to be caught by the thieves..
jaanvi n abhi saw it..n started to fight like a lion n lioness to save their parents..
maan:geet..what happenned..

he was worried for her..
geet leaned on the tree n smiled..kuch nehi..relax karneka mann tha
she winked
maan:this is not time for joking geetu..im worried for u n them..
geet:trust me..they wont be harmed..
she leaned cooly on the tree n watched the fight going on before them..
geet:maan..abhi is also fighting gud..isnt he..

she told admiring abhi's braveness..
maan:ya..oh no..someone is behind him..

but he couldn't move to them bcoz of mm..
he saw jaanvi smacking the person
jaanvi:attacking from behind is not gud..mard hai saamne se war karo..
geet:hmm thats my daughter..

she said proudly..
maan:hmm..i think u want popcorn ..
geet:that would be a gud idea..but we cant get it now..
maan:are u alright geet..how can u be cool when we are trapped n our childrens are fighting there..
geet:are u bored n scared.mr.khurana..

man:geetu..masak nehi hai yeh..

he was getting tensed n trying to move out of their trap..

geet:.ok..lets finish it..
geet:jaanu abhi..finish off soon..ur dad is feeling bored with me..
maan looked bewildered at geet..
maan:u r impossible geet..
jaanu soon kept the sword at the neck of the head..making all gasp..
jaanu:now tell us who are u..u r not a thief..nor a kidnapper..what u want from us..
head of mm:how can u say we are not thieves..we r..
jaanu:im not a fool to listen to u..if u want jewels..u would have made us faint by spraying that liquid on us..if u want us to kidnap u must have trapped us when our parents caught under ur control..so now say..who are u?
he removed his mask..
geet:meet our head of ministry gopal sharma..

dadi who was also trapped in car by them came to them in relief..
all were surprised n asked in quorus:what?
maan:u know it geetu..
geet:na..only after some fight i caught them..so only the drama to know the intentions ..all were behind abhi n jaanu more than us..n thats it..i gave them the chance to be taken care by our children..i think they want 2 judge them..
jaanu abhi:judge..par kyun..
ministers n others bowed their heads welcoming geet n her family..
minister:sry princess geetanjali..we want to know about our future ..maharaj has decided ur family will be the heir of this state..so we want to know the skills of them who is going to lead this state..maharaj doesnt know about this..shama kijiye princess..
geet:forgiven..n so what have u judged..

her body language n her attitude was different from what she was in delhi..a true princess attitude..all were gapping at geet like they have seen some new women infront of them..
ministers n others looked at each others.. he gave a proud smile at abhi n jaanu..

minister:sher ki khandhan hai..both showed us stars in day.n we are happy to have them in our state..

all apolgised to jaanvi n abhi too.. n maaneet n dadi too was equally proud at their childrens..
ministers..princess..lets go now..maharaj will be waiting for us..
geet:hmm..
all sat back in the car n went to the palace..




the whole palace was decorated making maneet n family look maharaj in awe..he welcomed them n took them to the ground where he has made the people of state to gather..
maharaj greeted all n then introduced maan n family..he even apologized for his behaviour to geet before his citizens
..maharaj continued
maharaj:im getting old n i knew now this state needs its next king..n the next heir is humari princess geetanjali..

geet gasped..she didn't expect this announcement..

she stood in her place n tried to stop her father

geet:but papa..

maharaj:I know princess what u want 2 say...

Geet looked at him for answers..what he knew..

Maharaj:if I was the same old father of you I would not have thought about my decision twice..but this is a totally changed man..who has seen desert in few days after queen left..i recognized the importance of family now.i have craved for love n care..n I have seen how to be a lovable person to get your love reciprocated..so,I have decided to give this kingdom in your families hand..the direct next heir of this kingdom is your children..

This was more shocking for all..what is he saying..even the ministers were saying like this..jaanu n abhidya looked at each other..dadi n maan too was shocked at this announcement..

Geet guessed her father is talking about abhi..he is the one born to her..her heart bleeded at the thought..he is differentiating jaanu..

Maharj turned to the crowd n followed his speech..

Maharaj:princess geetanjali is not well..so I know she needs rest..not responsibilities..n I m also getting older..n will go to god anytime..so its high time I announce my grand childrens..im proud to introduce my grand son yuvraj abhidya singh khurana...he is small n still in learning phase..so I have decided., this empire will have the queen for this kingdom..my grand daughter JAANVI MAAN SINGH KHURANA..

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Edited by vrinda22 - 11 years ago
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i know this ff is not like usual one..
its totally differrent
n thats y this story gets less likes..
still im happy ..😃
bcoz of those precious readers.
who are standing with me still in this long way..
thank u all for ur lovely support..
next update also will be today..
surely the last part..
then i ll give u the epilogue...by next week

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😛
upar bhi maine aur neeche bhi...
Exam to check their capabilities 😆
Geet missing her popcorns
Jaanavi got mysore state...Tongue
Geet ki dil ki baath tho rakh hi diya Maharaaj ne...
Edited by JeevanaP - 11 years ago

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