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Part 56

Geet stood rooted at her place..she was proved wrong..but was so happy..her dad accepted her as grand daughter..she feared if he will differentiate between her both children..but now the fear went off..she was proud of her father.'s decision..but how will abhi feel..she looked at her son..who was hugging his sister with big grin on his face..she couldn't be much more happier.

Maharaj:I wish humari princess geet and her husband accept my decision n do the honour of making her the queen of this territory.

Maan n jaanvi was dumbfounded.. dadi shook man to make him back. she saw abhi crushing jaanu in bone crushing hug...

Maharaj:i have discussed with ministry..n now the head minister will say his approval before you all..

The head minister came in front n started his speech greeting everyone..

Hm:when maharaj told us his decision we accepted as kings order.he doesn't say who he has choose as the next king/queen...but how can we give such a responsibility without knowing the capability of the person..im sorry maharaj..without your permission we took test on princess heir..n both came out as winners..n we can proudly say we accept princess ki beti as our queen..her presence of mind n her way of fighting..everything blowed us..n we have no opposition on your decision..she is perfect for the position..

The loud sound of applause made geet back..she looked at maan waiting for his decision..

Maharaj: came to him..sry beta without asking u both,I took this decision..but u know this empire wants a heir..n princess cant take this power now..n..

Maan looked at the maharaj who was looking at him with expectation..

Maan:I can understand..n I know u must have thought about it..n I m proud too..

Jaanu"but mama..how can i..its such a huge responsibility..

Maharaj:im there for u beta..mei sikaungi tumhe..n ur mama n family is there to guide you..n ministry is there..

Maharaj announced the function will be occurred few days after the pooja for queen.

Maan n geet had a great time to convince jaanvi..n make her accept it..

Maharaj n maneet met alone for sometime..where maharaj discussed with them some more important things..maneet were happy .that maharaj thought about them so much..maan can see the father inside maharaj is repenting n trying to mend things..he is taking so much efforts to keep the mended relation happy..he spent more time with them..he took jaanu n abhi with him wherever he went..he loved spending time with them..if man was not enough of gifting his children n pampering them now maharaj was added in that list too..he brought every special things from every state n gifted both..maneet n dadi was happy seeing the change in him...Vicky n family too called them n cribbed missing them..

Two days later the pooja was held for the queen..geet was feeling emotional..but now her dad was there in her mothers place n loved her like she always dreamt off..she let go off the past n started to live the present happy..

The next day all were back to delhi saying they will be back in few days

Back to delhi only jaanu was tensed..the thought itself was making her nervous..arjun called her often..she avoided it..she still has to settle him for his deeds..he sent her congratulatins msgs..cards..flowers etc..she took them all but didn't talk to him..she went to office n she was unable to work peacefully as arjun again called her to convince n manofy her..jaanu handed the phone to piya n made her say jaanu is busy in works or meetings..when he came to visit her in office too the reply was same..arjun was craving 2 see her glimpse once n talk to her once..but jaanu doesn't gave him heed..

Piya:jaanu di..why r u avoiding jiju..

Jaanu: hmm just like that..

She said with a small smile on her lips..

Piya:what..just like that..di..why I sense something is cooking in ur mind..

Jaanu:u can see ur jiju restless na..

Piya:hmm..

Jaanu:that's what I want..

Piya:what will u get from that..

Jaanu:tit for tat..he made me cry..one way it's a revenge..n other way.

Jaanu stopped saying more..but her red flushed face said more..

Piya:di..batoa na..

Jaanu:tum nehi samjogi..u r small for this..

She avoided..

Piya:to teek hai..mei small hoona..let jijus call come..i wont attend it..n when he comes I ll say jiju..di is taking revenge on u n seeing like this she is happy..

Jaanu:piya..no..u wont say it..

Piya:I ll

Jaanu:piya..then my plan will flop..pls..no..

Piya:then say fully..what are u upto..

Jaanu sighed..

Jaanu:its not easy for me too piya...this distance will make my hatred towards him reduce n this restlessness will increase the love between us..

Piya:haye haye..di..u r brilliant..

Jaanu:now u wont say anything to him na..

Piya:aaapki kasam..i wont..n im with u..just 4 revenge for breaking ur heart..n let him win over u..now...

Both hugged each other..piya was now with jaanu as she know the full plan..

Other side..maan was totally pampering geet..

in mahal, he has witnesses the line of servants standing there for her one order..he can never let geet yearn for her mayka now..but who can change his geet..she was again in her normal works from morning 2 night n he was the one to be behind her taking care of her needs n medicines when she was taking care of others..vicky n others were known of their plan which was suggested by maharaj..n were happy too..they even discussed the matter with rahul n arjun..they accepted their decision..for them now jaanu's happiness is the most..

They rarely saw abhi nowadays..he was too much into his studies n with his cricket team..other time he was researching something ..they had confidence on him now..he wont let them down..he was sincere now in whatever he did..trying 2 make no mistakes n make his parents head hung in shame bcoz of him..he was as usual taking advices from his di..only she knew the small secrets of him...

A week later

It was jaanu -arjun's engagement..the whole mansion was decorated like it is jaanvi's marriage..every people from vvip's to his off staff n peon were present there..all medias trying to cover jaanu n arjuns engagement pic..first it was only the name khuranas was enough for them to wait for some news..after the news came out maharaj is geets dad..now its more..they were waiting for every news of khurana family..n this is cherry on cake..all medias trying to relay the news with extra spice..

Jaanu was brought down..priya n piya with abhi were teasing her..geets eyes filled with tears seeing her walk down with that blush on face..

Maan hugged her side ways..he knew what is running in her mind..

Mana:geetu..no tears..its jaanu's day..she will be worried seeing u like this..

Geet trying 2 hold her muffles..

Geet:what to do maan..my daughter will leave n go to sasural in few days..how im going 2 live without her..

Maan:ok..then lets ask arjun to stay with us..ghar jamai banker..

Geet looked at him ..

Geet:are u out of mind..no self respected person will accept this..n every girls place is her sasural only..n jaanu is going there not as dil..but replacing her mothers place in their heart..every mother n father will dream for her daughters marriage only..mr.khurana don't tell this idea of urs out ..all will laugh..

Soon they heard the famous laugh..hehehe..

Maan was smiling n adi too was standing there..she herself answered her questions..

Man:see ..u yourself know the answer..ekna ekdin..beti ko bidaii karnihi padegi na..

Adi"geet..u must be happy u hv a son with u..think of us..when we get married piya what will we do..

Man:geet..jaanu is coming here don't show ur pearls to her..i know her very well she will even reject this marriage for u..

Geet:ji..

Geet composed herself..but who she is kidding..

Jaanu:mama kya hua..

Geet became emotional..she hugged her tight..

Geet":kuch nehi beta..i was thinking how soon u have grown up

..geet changed the topic..

Geet:u look so beautiful..she placed a kala tikka behind her ear..

Soon jaanu n arjun exchanged the rings,,today he doesn't want jaanu to escape from him..after exchanging the rings n getting blessings from all too arjun didn't leave her 4 a min..after the function got over..he took permission from maneet n took jaanu out for a long drive..

Arjun was looking jaanu while driving..he couldn't guess is she still angry on him..she was very calm n often looking at the ring in her finger..her face shined in the moon light..he stopped at a deserted place..

Arjun:jaanu..pls aaj tho baath karo..i m really sorry jaan..

Jaanu looked at him..his face said he is really tensed with her ignorance..

Jaanu:its our engagement day arjun..i don't want to talk about it..n end this day in regret..so don't take that topic..

Arjun:then till how long will you be like this..

Jaanu:the scar u gave me is deep arjun..u must wait till it heels..

Having him near her the wounds became very green n she was trying to over come it..

He hugged her tightly..

Arjun:jaanu..pls..forgive me for last time..i swear I wont do anything that will hurt u..i love you jaanu..pls..dont ignore me..give me a chance..one last chance..

Jaanu hugged him back..like trying to sooth him..

Jaanu:that's what im doing now arjun..i love u too..thats y I agreed for this marriage..

Arjun :thanks jaanu..i wont let u down..

He was happy atleast she talked to him now..

Arjun dropped her home n went with his parents ..

Now they will meet only at marriage..

They did talked inbetween thru phone...but arjun seemed too busy that he was always out of delhi n he rarely troubled jaanu now..n now she started to miss him..


continued below

Edited by vrinda22 - 11 years ago
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Marriage its not easy like all thinks..

N for maan its his daughter..n for geet her life's biggest happiness..both were selecting the best of all..from cards ,jeweleries.dresses..both fought over everything n chose everything , the best..the whole khurana family members were running on toes to make jaanu's marriage the most beautiful event that jaanu would cherish her life time...

Abhi too was supporting them n helping them..jaanu was busy in kc as her whole family is preparing for her marriage..piya too helped her..

One fine day..jaanu took every one to stadium..saying they too need some break from works..when they went they were surprised n shocked to see abhi playing for delhi..he was selected n it was his first match.both jaanu n abhi thought 2 surprise them n was successful too when he played they all screamed his name n cheered him up...abhi was so happy to see his whole family cheering for him..when the elders blessing was there anyone can reach their goal..n that day he proved himself as an all rounder..he was declared the man of the match..the whole khuranas felt proud of him..

The next day papers were praising abhi n his talent n he can soon be selected to play for India too if he plays in this way..

Few more days passed..n for the marriage only 5 days left..all started to mysore..

Abhi:mama..why marriage should be in mysore..

Maan:bcoz ur nanu wished so...he said he couldn't see marriage nor he did bidai to his princess geet..so he want to do it from his place for her daughter..so only we decided engagement in mansion n marriage in palace..n more over now jaanu is going to be the future queen..so we thought its right..

When they landed the whole city was glooming in lights n decors..maharaj has made their entry in a very grand way..many different types of dance performance was going on in streets ..the people looked so happy like it was their marriage..

Jaanu snuggled close to geet..her nanu is doing so much..his love is expressive now..even abhi n jaanu has got close to him in these days.

The palace was decorated like a bride..the lights n decors were mesmerizing..n the menu had all kinds of food from Indian to international..the following days all did nothing than taking rest..

The marriage rituals started.. haldi , mehendi n sangeet were done in grand way..jaanu was teased by all..vicky n adi's children with abhi n their friends were always with her..adi pinky vicky vishali all were happy to see their children's bond..n prayed to god to save them from evil eyes..

Geets eyes filled with tears as the time neared by..maan has to console her n had a very hard time with her..from when they came to mysore geets position was vulnerable..she was happy for jaanu ,same time thinking she will leave her ,she couldn't be happy..how much she may try she ended up crying in maans arms at night...maan too was sad that his daughter will be leaving them..but he has to keep himself strong for geet..he couldn't show his feelings seeing her vulnerable position..n it will only make her weak

There is one stage where no one couldn't control their feelings..n it's the marriage..

The marriage is no less than a festival for all..

jaanus dress

Jaanu was the most beautiful bride no one has ever seen..

geet never let her for a minute..jaanu was her daughter..her meaning of life..as she grew up..both were like friends more than a mother n daughter..parting from her is not easy for geet ..she want to savour the moments now she has with her..she had fed her these days.. chose her dress to wear..platted her hair n did her make ups..kissed her often showering her love..jaanu too was no less than geet..maan had warned her not to cry before geet n she may not see her tears..it will make her health worse..

geet made jaanvi sit on the mandap..the rituals started n soon arjun tied mangalsutr n filled her maang..

jaanvi n arjun took the sacred vows n were declared husband n wife..they took blessing from all..maneet had happy tears.. rahul n his wife too were happy to get jaanu as their dil..maharaj blessed both..dadi was happy to see her her great grand daughters marriage..

the bidai timing arrived n geet bursted out in tears ..hugging jaanu like her life will leave her..not only geet maan..all were crying..

maharaj n rahul looked at the khurana s..now they can see the value of a family..the tears from there eyes for the beloved ones..


for the first time rahul held his wife with pure love..till now he was running after revenge n money..now he felt his wife needs him n his love..mrs.rahul smiled feeling contempted with the change in rahul these days..all thanks to maan n geet..maan ,the person who she hated the most for making her husband change .maan who took away the soft n caring nature inside him..after knowing maan did nothing than loving her sil drashti n marrying her..n geet who is a living god in name of mother to her sils daughter jaanvi..she is proud n satisfied with the love she got now..

after bidai.

Arjun n jaanvi sat in the decorated car..n all wished them a happy married life..jaanu still don't know where they are heading..delhi is faraway n drive thru car will take hours..she was in her own gham missing her parents dadi nanu bro n siss..arjun was trying to console her promising to come home often n meet them..her cry slowed down as time passed..arjun s car stopped after few hrs of travelling..

Jaanvi looked out n saw a beautiful house decorated welcoming them

Mrs.rahul took the aarthi n welcomed both..after the post marriage rituals jaanvi was taken to the room..the room decorated with flowers candles n creating a romantic feel..

Jaanu was now free n her mind started to que her ..she doesn't know the place where they are now..her sasural cant be so near to mysore..then where they are?

The sound of the door open made her nervous..arjuns every step made her stomach churn..

Arjun lifted her veil n saw her eyes down..

He took it the other way..she still didn't forgive him..

Arjun:jaanu..today is our special day..n I want our sr to be special with ur full acceptance..it can happen when u forgive me fully..

Jaanu st:what happened to him now..

Arjun:waise I have a gift for u..would u like to see it..

She lifted her eyes n saw him..he extended his hands n took her to an adjacent room..the room was filled with her pictures..with her family..her first pic..her first crawl..her first walk.her play with abhi...her every moments with her mother..her cycle ride with her dad..dadi cooing her..more n more..

Arjun:I hope this pictures will help u to keep ur family near u...I ll try to keep you happy like they did jaanu..

Jaanu turned n hugged him..

Jaanu:I love u arjun..mujei aapse koi shikayat nehi

Arjun:it means u have forgiven me..

She nodded..she has seen him repent n she cant live without him..the small distance has made her realise it..

Arjun:it means we can make this beautiful night as ours..

This time she blushed n nodded..

Arjun lifted her n took her to their room..

Jaanu:arjun..what place is this..n whose house is this..

Arjun:..its Bangalore. humara ghar hai..papa brought this as our wedding gift..we have shifted our business here..

Jaanu:but why..ur house n H.O is in London n other business is in delhi na..

Arjun:bcoz I cant take the future queen to my place..ur grandpa req me..n sugg me this idea..he knew that damad cants stay as ghar jamai..n for our respect he asked it n we accepted it..so only i was out of station most of the time..n I can do anything for my jaanu now..

Jaanu:thank u..

Arjun:thank u yesa nehi chahiye..now we have full right on each other..so..

Jaanu:so..

Arjun:no more talkings..

With that he closed the distance between them claiming her as his own..

In palace..

All were around geet..she was crying like a kid ..though all were worried they couldn't stop teasing her..

Vaishali:di..u r crying like u have got married ..

Vicky:kyun na hum aap donoki shadhi dubara karein..

Adi:not a bad idea..we will do bidai for bhabhi n see how she makes the flood here..

Geet let a loud cry..

Dadi:beta..shant ho ja..jaanu will often come to meet us..dont cry..

Maan looked at geet helplessly..he was worried what if she falls ill again...

Maharaj came there..n saw all who were trying their best to console geet..pile of tissues on floor..

Maharaj:princess..what is this..its not gud to cry like this..think of ur daughter ..she has started a new life..n u r crying for it..u must be happy for her..

Go..wash ur face n be happy for ur daughter...

Now he ordered like a king..n geet has to obey her dad..she nodded meekly n went 2 wash her face.

After she left all burst in to pits of laughter..even maan couldn't stop himself from smiling..

Maan:thanks papa..she is still a kid by heart..we are trying 2 manofy her..but she didn't listen to us..ur one order made her shut up..

Maharaj:isiliye meine order ki..she always respects elders n she wont go against me..that too now..n thanks to you beta..u fulfilled my wish..today this palace had the precious memories with it..

Maan:its ok papa..

He turned to all..

Maan:now all of u go n take rest.. its too late now..papa u also..dadi u too..waking up this late is not gud for ur health..

All bid gud night n went to sleep..



Geet came out feeling fresh after taking a shower..she laid on maans chest..

Maan:so mrs.khurana..how do u feel being promoted..

Geet:what promotion..

Maan:mother in law..n soon u will get next promotion too as grand ma

Geet sat up in bed excited..

Man:geetu kya hua..

Geet:maan..i didnt think about it..humari jaanu will be a mother soon na..she will have a baby like her..i bet baby will be like my jaanu only..same eys,nose.long fingers..curly hair..

She went on weaving with her dream..n maan was watching her..

This is his geetu..who cried for jaanu is now happy thinking about her baby..she has started to plan how to welcome jaanus baby..n what all she will do with baby..how their relations will be..how they will pamper her..when their eyes took them to sleep..they don't know..both slept holding each other..

3339words totally..

so here comes the end of this life is yours..

the last part

i know it has less of maneet

but i have to give a proper ending..

how they feel with jaanu leaving to her sasural..

so bear it pls

still epilogue haina..😆

that will be with our maneet..

dont expect passionate one..

as they are promoted as fil n mil..

but family moments will be there


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Edited by vrinda22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I JUST WANT TO SAY


Edited by vrinda22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrinda22


first 2 threads i think it was in ghsp..when if announced of closing ghsp i shifted 2 ff..
this time i really forgot im opening in fan fictions than ghsp..
now i cant change,,


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Last part
its the last part
Geet crying like cry baby-the mother's love 😊
Going to miss jaanvi darling
Litle litl understndngs bw maaneet
cute blushy moments 😳
naughty jaanvis baby language 😆
brave fighter geet
wat else.to say my god it s ENDING
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wooo super update dear and very emotional
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Posted: 11 years ago
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simply amazing dear
so finally jaanvi is married
nwi think maneet shuld give sm time fr abhi
and knw him also dear
liek they learnt jaanu
hope we see dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Shaadi hogayi... oh bhi Mysore palace maine... wah wah...
Abhi responsible bhi hogaya...
acha hai... Geet ne tho already shuru kardiya sapne phirodne maine...
tho epilogue maine honge Naana Naani Daada Daadi...MG 😉
Abhi ki love interest kaha hai 😛
use bhi tho leke aavo na...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Very nice update
flng happy for jaanu
fynly maaneet saas sasur ban hi gaye
but in epiolougi
I want a passhionate update 😉
kya hai nai without passhionate epilougi k
puri ff adhuri lagti hai
maaneet ko ek baar past me le ja k
aap plz ek passhionate epilougi jarur dena
waiting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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finally everything is fine... jaanvi got her love and maharaja getting his princess for state and arjun being ready to settle in bangalore..

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