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Rishita.SIholic

@Rishita.SIholic

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Beautiful update! 😳

Waiting to read more.

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

That was so lovely. The way you penned down the whole chapter was so beautiful that I couldn't take my eyes off even for a bit. A very well written update❤️

Shyam's disgusting words left me hating him to the core. If I was Khushi I would have slapped him right then and there. He really should be thankful that it was just Khushi, and not some fierce girl in her place. So Kokila also felt a little sympathy towards Khushi, but I guess it's her job to take in women like Khushi and you cannot completely blame her as well. Anjali was a really nice person. I'm so glad that Khushi could find a little comfort with a person like her. I'm sure with time Khushi must have adjusted to the environment by now😊

I was wondering why Arnav would seek solace in a woman's arms, being such an educated and kindhearted person that he is. So it was Aman who misunderstood Arnav's words, which made him end up at this place. I guess it was destiny that brought Arnav to Khushi, and I'm sure that Arnav would treat her well, which is the plus point in the story. But in reality, I would never wish any girl to go through all this. But since it's happening around the world, all I could say is that I hope those girls would find a way to overcome their miserable life one day😳

Arnav and Khushi's first rendezvous seemed to be calm, yet not so calm. He is completely taken by Khushi's innocent beauty, whereas Khushi at the moment is just doing her job. But whatever the intimate moments they spent together felt fully charged, and I'm craving to read more☺️

Thanks for sharing this exceptionally well written, unique chapter with us🤗

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter

Just one teeny tiny request. If possible can we get the update a little earlier?😉

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

wow... superb update...
Shyam is a disgusting creature...🤢🤬
Arnav is immensely physically attraction to Khushi... can't wait for this attraction to turn into love... Eagerly waiting for the next update 😊

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stg1

@stg1

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

😲 such a sad start but unfortunately all too common even in this day 😔 i am feeling slightly disturbed but i also know this is going to be interesting, i think u have a delicate and sensitive touch when it comes to story telling so i'm willing to see where u take this 😊

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

nice story - A different one than what I have read about Arnav and Khushi. I like your idea of writing the story from both arnav and khushi's POV and now looking forward to arnav's pov.

Khushi has been dealt a rough hand with destiny and hopefully Arnav will be her savior. Can't wait to read the next part. Update soon.

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

simply superb
loved it
loving the story

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Jyothsna

@joe4joe

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

So khushi is trained now to be a girl like tht?
Excited
hope tht he spare her.
Khushi run away with arnav if he is a gud man.
Wndrfl updt

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

That shyam is disgusting...arghhh..things he said to kushi
Anjali is nice.. hmmm and arnav he is attracted to kushi
looking forward to the next part

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

fantastic part

loved it

feeling bad for khushi

thanks for the pm

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Pastellitesoulx

@xMIC.Dropx

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Res
unresed
beautifully written chapter.
Loved it so much.
I can't describe how i hate shyaam nd people like him 😡
how could he lust over his own niece???can't believe people like him really exist in the world??
Anjali is so sweet nd nice woman.
Lol aman had misheard arnav thats why he brought arnav there.
Finally arnav nd khushi met.khushi seems accepted her fate.poor girl!!
Excited for next part

Edited by -BROKEN_ANGEL- - 11 years ago

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