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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Hi Manreet. Really well written chapter.

You brought out her feelings of wretchedness and Shyam's lasciviousness very well.

Am liking how Arnav and Khushi are reacting to each other.

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ameena671

@ameena671

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

wow wonderful update loved it thank you for pm.

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

What an absolutely different story line from your other tales manreet.

The beginning is fab with excellent narrative.

Arnav already has unleashed his rebellious nature on his family.

And now he has come face to face with a woman who has seduced him already with her looks...will this seduction turn to love?

And if yes will arnav have it in him to rebel once again with his family & society and claim khushi as his.

Cause his family & society will not welcome khushi into his life given the place where she is comes from.

Looking forward to reading the next part.

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Manreet ... Congratulations ... this is seems like a very interesting story ...

Shyam as usual the wicked one ... forcing Khushi into a wh**ehouse ...

and Khushi has been under training for three months under Kolkila Devi ...

waiting for the next chapter ...

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hotchic.

@hotchic

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

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arshisharma

@arshisharma

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

nice update. eagerly waiting for the next part.

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Manreet u r really a versatile writer...this story is completely different frm ur earlier stories n its simply brilliant...i wantd to create a bank of chapters n den start reading as it maintains d flow...bt i just cudn't control myself frm readin this story...awesome piece of work dear...thanks.