Arshi FF: The Valiant Knight - Thread 8 - Completed - Note on Page 142

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Deepthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#971

This FF is completed. The continuation of this story is carried into new FF named as:

Fighting Fate - The sequel of Valiant Knight.

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Maria Adam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#972

Wow this story was heart touching,very different from The Dawn of the Dawn, but still enjoyably.

Khushi leaving Arnav I think was the correct course of action, cant wait to read the next 1 to this.

Keep up the amazing work

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afshanbabar

@afshanbabar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#973

Yo made me cry like a baby, just not fair what you put them and me through at the end. i understand your point of view, but it was just too painful. he , both of them suffered too much. it was too much to handle. I thought maybe anjali will take the baby. living with the baby on her won is a punishment for khushi. and dont even get me started on Arnav.
still crying
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Syeda Buraira

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Posted: 11 years ago

#974

I m sorry my like button is not working so cudnt like ur posts. Read all the chapters in a go. It took more than 10 hours but was totally worth it. I will type up another detailed review when I'm in a better state of mind and not weeping, wailing. Such a hearbreaking story, very realistic, poignant. I cant think of better words. Just 3 words I love you. Thanks for writing and sharing this priceless treasure with us.

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Shamz

@Shamz94

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Posted: 11 years ago

#975

Life is not always about happy ever after there are some fact of life which you can't even change and thank you so much for writing this

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BarunFan1212

@BarunFan1212

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Posted: 11 years ago

#976

Hi Deepthiya,

What a heart wrenching story. Brought tears to my eyes!

Though the ending was very sad and unexpected you have justified the reason for the end.

I agree with Khushi's decision. But couldn't agree with how Arnav accepted it peacefully.

May be the Season 2 will answer those question.

You are an amazing writer and did a very good job of keeping us on our toes.

Looking forward for Season 2.

Keep me updated when u start season 3

Thanks for a superb different story.

All the best

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ipkndlover75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#977

They finally kissed wow!! That was a tender moment... I hope Arnav is successful in tracking that man in time..to whom Adi had assigned the task of delivering the tape... Oh god !!! Can't imagine khushis reaction!!! Getting a dreadful feeling!!!

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ipkndlover75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#978

OMG!!!!!.khushi heard everything!!!! What's gonna happen next...absolutely riveting!!!!

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ipkndlover75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#979

Oohhh god!!! Khushi finally found out... The entire chapter was gut wrenching.. N heart wrenching... Its nobody's fault.. But the circumstances are such...its so difficult.. Khushi has been priding herself on Arnav always being her only one...it must b sooo difficult for her...thanks for the note at the end of the chapter.. What a great job u have done with ur writing!!!👏

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ipkndlover75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#980

Kaun khushi??? That line simply killed me...😭. I hate sad endings...😭😭. But in this case it was justified... N ur note just convinced me more...also another thing that gave me hope was the fact thatthis was phase 1 and u would come with another part...that too a happy one...hope that happens soon...till then thanks for an awesome story!!!!

Pls do pm me when u write the sequel...thanks!!!