Arshi FF: The Valiant Knight - Thread 8 - Completed - Note on Page 142 - Page 80

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Posted: 11 years ago
i was crying while reading this part..!!
!u have very well characterized khushi and arnav's character,..!!!!
this was so emotional.. heart breaking part..!!!!!!1
of course it was not easy for khushi to return to her normal life after all this..!!!!
and aranv how is going to be their life now..!!!!11
i m glad that u r writing its phase 2..!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome deepthi...will wait for part 2...
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was unexpected ending. I was shocked initially when I saw you have ended the story. But I was relieved to see TVK season 2 is coming soon. I am glad there will be less tears and more happy and romantic moments.
Both of them deserve so much happiness. I am eagerly looking forward to that. To think that I did not want to read this story in the beginning... I started loving it. You have written a nice and unique story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Di... i'm NOT gonna talk to you... no matter how realistic, how true-to-the-character, how sensible this is, it hurts a lot di... IT HURTS... i am crying like anything... why they have to go through this... whats their fault... how can fate be this cruel... this is unfair... life IS unfair... his "Kaun Khushi" is still bringing fresh sets of tears Di... this is painful...

but again i cant deny the fact that this is best possible outcome, and i'm proud of you Di to be brave enough to embrace this... knowing you. this must be difficult for you to separate ArShi like this... my tears are not possibly even one tenth of your feelings for them... if I, Lala, and everyone here live their life with them, you gave them that life...hurting them it bound to hurt you much more us seeing them hurt...love you Di, for wisely and brilliantly u brought this forward...

now comes to the MOST important thing... 😎 when the hell i wanted Aman... 😕 it was Lala & Poo fighting for him... i ONLY want & need Arnav, bas... 😈 tum jao Jiju ki pass... this Arnav is MINE...☺️
by the way, what have you meant by falling in love again... 😕 is it WITH SOMEONE ELSE...😕 make ME that someone pleeease... 😳 😉
yes, he deserves to be happy... both of them do... waiting for you to bring that up Di...😛

by the way, thanks for telling NOT to read before exam, warna i'm sure i would've spent all 3 hours thinking of them in stead of writing papers...😳 😆
Edited by nishu_shorna - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
A beautiful ending
looking forward for phase 2
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsome Update Di 😃 How much I love your Arnav Di , so Slefless , possessive, caring, loving, Angry aww not to froget Hawt Too ☺️ 😳
i had Never Read The Arnav you describe in your Ff .. I always Wonder how On the Earth Di write somthing like that ?? So pure and I just feel like i am not reading ff but its actually real life .. I am so glad i read your Work 😊
To be honest Di I so shocked When Read the Words "THE END" My reaction were I think i need to check My Eyes , Its can't be End Okay , i need to check my Eyes.. i said out loud Mom were seeing me like i am made 🤣 because yesterday I had Checked my Eyes 😆 ..
Loved the way arnav make her understand and console .. I am in love this Man yarr 😳
My heart went out for Nani and anjali offcourse for Buaji too but my heart broked Seeing khushi and arnav more Why they are suffering Dammit Why ,
Loved their Loving moments even its were filled with tears,
When khushi tell him he is getting late My heart stop a beat My six senses were on high alert My heart were proof Right She left him 😭
Khushi is Right in her place.. After seeing Teaser I had Told myself get beenish You will surely gonna get heart Attack 😔 see i Was right ..
To be Hinest I loved the End of Phase 1 ,
Eagerly Waiting for Phase 2 di ..
I think i forgot Something But What *Scratching mt Head* oh Yes How can i forget dammit Bhulakar Hu such main Mom Such Kehti hen :P
Okay Di i was Shocked seeing My name Specialy mentioned I was like What the 😲
Its mean Alot Di Alot 🤗
you love my siggies than use it 😉 I will be more than happy 😃
P.S. I should thanks the maker for such a beautiful Creation 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
I was crying like hell reading the update. That's was a very emotional and heartful update !
I can't imagine anything else from khushi other than this .. She is not a women to leave the son because of the reasons he is born!!

Waiting for season2 as you said it will not have tears and until then the update keeps nagging in my head!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
agree completely with the ending you have given to phase I... words of khushi's letter were so touching.. both ARSHI knows each other so well that the pretense would have killed them.. it is very hard decision but it had to be taken for their own good.. i am deeply in love with your ARSHI.. what superb characters you have made them.. they surpassed the level where we always praise the characters of Arnav-khushi.. I love ASR/ARNAV's character it is best in tv history and you have made him much higher degree.. Your Khushi is so strong and woman who can take such a harsh decision to be away from somebody she loves the most in her life.. also agree ARSHI and also we have cried enough wants to see them happy so will be waiting for the next phase to start soon.. loved the update it was mind blowing.. something out of box.. the pain is there but with a hope to have a new dawn.. 😃

thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey dear nice one although a very emotional ending I m too sad maybe coz my. Ind is continuously this nking of how wrong had happened to arnav he did things beyond his power his character that wa s shown he is completely a different person at the end of the story maybe at the moment thing but heart feels too heavy right now coz I could think just about arnav right now
Hope u start the new phase soon would wish to see arnav happy again and khushi too
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a chapter year...emotional...
.. Kushi's letter was putting the crux into one chapter... Wonderful... And thnx for the mention...
Coming to the ending.. Kushi's decision is understandable.. She needs some space to regroup herself... The distance ll only bring them closer... But I don't think her asking hm to leave her is justified. Though it is understandable from kushi's point of view, but shdn'nt she thnk frm arnav's perspective also... She days she is leaving hm for the life she gave, bt what abt the one who leaves for her, who breathes for her, who treats her as his life... Life ll be hell without her... He ll b devastated... The end is scary... It states arnav's pain and anguish... And his lividity towards her...
He has gn thru a lot...it only be fair if they wrk it out together...he needs her...both for emotional n psychological support...
She ll be able to cope up btr with him by her side... That justifies the title... Well it's jus my point of viiew...


Cing to ur note... Thnx for the mention... I was jus tin bk.. U noticed my posts, and md a mention of it is a lot to me... I read a lot ... Bt hardly ve the guts to comment... Most of the time jus don't know what to say.. But ur story made me cross that line...m amazed hw r u able to manage family, work and such stupendous looong updates on time.,... Really year she'd gt time mgmt tips from u...

Agree with ur comment on parents... Cn empathise with urs...after becoming parents, our perspective of our parents changed,,,, he real value of their sacrifices and habits come to the fore...

M hapy that u ll TV us romance filled couple in tvk2. But the flng that this journey is ending is weighing heavily... Will miss the impatient wait for ur updates every Monday and Thursday nights ... Wud jus refresh from 7 pm ist for ur updates...
True man,,, TVK is one of the works... That lingers in ur mind,,,,,pls start the next son.. coz intezaar nahi hota ...

Waiting eagerly for the next journey ...
Edited by gayathri-murali - 11 years ago

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